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Chapter 1 - Where I Stand
2 reviews,
4,498 words,
Be gentle, I'm a South African Author so wording might be different sometime. Down here we say braai, you say barbeque and the list goes on. So forgive me and try enjoy...
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Chapter 2 - Major Misunderstanding
1 reviews,
5,144 words,
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
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Chapter 3 - Looking In
2 reviews,
4,857 words,
I'm hoping no one else noticed the huge mistake I made in the previous chapter, I'll correct it pronto. The one reveiw made me laugh so hard that I thought I'd let this chapter out earlier than intended. (And to my defence, Jennifer might have been so worked up that she may have, in actual fact, been sweating. lol) Off to correct my error. Hope you enjoy.
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Chapter 4 - Girls, Growls and Fine Cuisine
2 reviews,
4,006 words,
Thought I might post this up since tomorrow will be the last chapter I share with you until Monday. How you all enjoy....
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Chapter 5 - Revelations
2 reviews,
5,604 words,
I didn't have time to proof read this so any corrections would be appreiciated. God, I need an editor. Next Chapter on Monday, hope you enjoy. I edited a little, probably not enough so forgive me until tomorrow. READ AT OWN RISK! lol.
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Chapter 6 - The Differnece Between Us
2 reviews,
4,242 words,
Sorry for the late post, network servers were down on this side. But a touch of good news, I might be getting an editor (hooray), which is a good thing for all of us. I also didn't have time to scan through this chapter, what with being in the middle of a screenplay and another story and all, but if you decide to read I hope you enjoy it anyway. Here it goes.
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Chapter 7 - Thats Just Not Me
1 reviews,
5,936 words,
Well, it's been a long wait but here it is. As usual, hope you enjoy, all comments welcome. I'd also like to thank my editor (in my opinion I couldn't possibly have asked for better help).
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Chapter 8 - Trouble In Paradise
2 reviews,
6,060 words,
What a wait. I apologise so much. You see, for the past few months I've been suffering from that terrible disease called Internetlessness. But I'm back, and so are the twins. So, enjoy...Haven't had time to send through editor. Excuse my mistakes for now.
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Chapter 9 - Try One More Time
1 reviews,
7,442 words,
I apologise for any errors. I swear I'll get around to sending this through my editor. I actually feel bad about subjecting you to such....it's terrible. But anyway, thanks a billion for the reviews, you guys are awsome. Thanks Jon for the W.O.W. I was going through this whole 'should-I-shouldn't-I'. lol. This is the third last chapter, just thought you should all know. So, enjoy.
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Chapter 10 - Expect the Unexpected
1 reviews,
3,846 words,
Okay so this is it, and only one chapter to go. ~Hope you enjoy
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Chapter 11 - It Sets you Free?
1 reviews,
3,766 words,
Ok, so I know I said this was meant to be the last chapter, but it was running a little long, so I have one more chapter that I'll post for you. Seriously this time. I am sooo greatful for the reviews, you all make writing worth while, big time. I didn't have time (once again) to edit this, so I apologise, but try enjoy.
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Chapter 12 - And All The Rest
7 reviews,
5,377 words,
Okay so, this is it. I'd like to thank everyone who read and revied and put up with my unedited chapters. You guys were all awsome. Thank you so much to hh5 for making my day with your reviews. And thanks to, well everyone. I love this part....enjoy.