Detskoye Porno - 4. Epilogue

how does that work? does Draak shift his front half to burb fire while the bottom half gets reamed by Neo? And if they switch, does Neo get his hair singed when Draak comes inside him?

And no Carlos, it wasn't nearly enough

That was awesome, but I suspect not nearly detailed enough for Tim or Bucket haha. I love the getting so hot you literally shoot flames thing. I agree with Tim though...might be a little dangerous for Neo if Draak tops.

On 03/05/2015 06:07 AM, Timothy M. said:

how does that work? does Draak shift his front half to burb fire while the bottom half gets reamed by Neo? And if they switch, does Neo get his hair singed when Draak comes inside him?

And no Carlos, it wasn't nearly enough

Some dragons, some times, are able to belch fire while in human form. Scientists are still trying to determine who and why. Dragon DNA has not been entirely mapped yet.

Neo must have accessed mt computer and played around with the epilogue. I had over 4k words invested in just that sex scene and look how it ended up. Damn dragons are very private and I guess the dolphin was protecting his bf.

Better than a cliffie though.

You are welcome to chew me out in the Summer forum !

On 03/05/2015 06:14 AM, LitLover said:

That was awesome, but I suspect not nearly detailed enough for Tim or Bucket haha. I love the getting so hot you literally shoot flames thing. I agree with Tim though...might be a little dangerous for Neo if Draak tops.

I think they can give the term a-hot-time-in-bed an entire new meaning!

On 03/05/2015 07:04 AM, Bucket1 said:

What can I say, the Dolphins won't let me watch!

Looking forward to more

Definitely interested in more. I like all three of the shifter groups we've met - the wolves, dolphins and the dragons. Great story.

What a tease! LOL

Here's hoping that this helps to weigh the balance in favour of "enough interest"

On 03/05/2015 11:14 AM, Nbsiren said:

Looking forward to more

My main writing effort is Summer and CJ's adventures, I tried tackling 2 or 3 other stories at the same time before and it became a bit crazy so for now I'll limit myself to CJ and 1 other one at a time.

Already started the next story but it's not about the dolphin adventures but based on the comments left the subsequent one will be!

Thank you so much for leaving me a note!

On 03/05/2015 12:55 PM, avidreadr said:

Definitely interested in more. I like all three of the shifter groups we've met - the wolves, dolphins and the dragons. Great story.

I started thinking a bit more about the next tale over the past couple of days. It's starting to take shape in my mind but I need to finish something else before I start on the third dolphin story.

So we know Vasili and his guys will be there and I have an idea of who they'll be working with but not entirely sure.... keep an eye out for my postings and I'll try to get back to Halifax real soon.

On 03/05/2015 01:16 PM, drpaladin said:

LOL You said the sex would be gratuitous and the epilogue microscopic; both were delivered as promised. Nuff said. Moreplease and now a dragon spinoff?

A dragon spinoff? Damn! I'd be scared of tackling that. It would never be as good as the PERN dragons and I'm not sure my ego could handle that!

I'll come back to the dragons once I finish up Summer and the Raunchy Sex story I'm writing just for Tim & Buck!

On 03/05/2015 02:11 PM, Headstall said:

What a tease! LOL

Next thing you know I'll be accused of ending chapters with clliffies!

On 03/05/2015 09:35 PM, BrianM said:

Here's hoping that this helps to weigh the balance in favour of "enough interest"

I can tell how many views a story gets but can never know if people liked it or not unless they tell me. So thank you for asking for more. I'll deliver.

Easy to binge this story. Like the characters and story. As much as I want to whine for more details, I do enjoy this short and sweet style. Again, thanks for a good read. Jeff

Although I had read it awhile ago, the fact that it popped up on the radar again and I read it from stem to stern will allow another "please, Sir, may we have some more" to the list. Also, I don't think you have to compare your dragons to Pern's: yours are plenty intriguing enough to rate more story time, with the Dolphins or without -- but since Neo and Draak are heating things up, "with" is preferable. ¡Gracias, Carlos!

On 01/19/2016 06:59 AM, JeffreyL said:

Easy to binge this story. Like the characters and story. As much as I want to whine for more details, I do enjoy this short and sweet style. Again, thanks for a good read. Jeff

Thanks, Jeff and my apologies for not replying earlier. Somehow it got lost in the shuffle. This was early stuff and although it lacks nuances I tried to build upon what I created in the first story. My plans to develop the characters further has been on hold, but I haven't forgotten about them.

On 11/22/2016 01:13 PM, hillj69 said:

Although I had read it awhile ago, the fact that it popped up on the radar again and I read it from stem to stern will allow another "please, Sir, may we have some more" to the list. Also, I don't think you have to compare your dragons to Pern's: yours are plenty intriguing enough to rate more story time, with the Dolphins or without -- but since Neo and Draak are heating things up, "with" is preferable. ¡Gracias, Carlos!

Thanks, Papo.

I haven't forgotten about this series and would like to revisit it. My concern has been wanting to do it right and not rushing to put something out just for the sake of posting. I think I've learned and improved with my other stories and would like to do it justice. Not sure when, but it's on my list.

I sure wish you would expand these stories into much longer books.  I’d love to read more about them all. 

36 minutes ago, Baikalisan said:

I sure wish you would expand these stories into much longer books.  I’d love to read more about them all. 

Thank you!

I began work on a trilogy tracing the dolphins history and published the initial installment. However, the other two are languishing in my future stories folder. The interest is still there to complete them, but characters in my CJ series have been screaming for their own books, and that's what I've been concentrating on. I'll come back to this bunch sooner or later.

@Baikalisan

If you're looking for good shifter stories, try @Mann Ramblings Phases of Moon which is currently posting, and @WolfM's Running with the Pack. That one's the all-time most popular story on GA.

On 3/5/2015 at 12:14 AM, Nbsiren said:

Looking forward to more

YESSSSSS please

1 hour ago, mansexlover said:

YESSSSSS please

I wasn't happy with the two shifter stories and left them alone for a while. Came back to it after some time, and although the ensuing story was better written than these, I was still unhappy. I think I'll leave shifters to others who do it well.