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Queertown Reviews
(Chapter 1 Review)
Okay, so I have to second Connor… you’ve piqued my interest, which is always a good start, right? Second, I’ve suddenly the strong urge to cue up Dylan J Third, this reminds me of The Beach, that quest for Shangri-La; that’s not a bad thing, it sets a mood which only further reading will reveal whether it’s a valid flavor for This story.
I like the dialogue and the skill you employ to insert description; it comes of very natural and seems effortless, doesn’t stall the flow.
I look forward to the next chapter.
I like the dialogue and the skill you employ to insert description; it comes of very natural and seems effortless, doesn’t stall the flow.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Reply from carringtonrj (author)
thanks so much for the positive response. there's quite a bit of music in the piece. though there could have been a whole lot more. i enjoyed writing this. hope you enjoy reading if you get a chance to look at any more of it. thanks again. 
(Chapter 23 Review)
Ahh, a bit of melancholy in this chapter, but I like the way the story is playing out. I sense the story drawing to a close and I'm going to be sorry when we reach the end.
Reply from carringtonrj (author)
thanks so much for your comments. yep one chapter and a little aftermath to go. nearly done!
(Chapter 1 Review)
I´m already out of likes for today but I´ll be back tomorrow to like the hell out of this story ... I already took peeks whenever I saw your story updates but didn´t want to start reading another story. Now I have the time and I love chapter one, I know this is gonna be good.
Cheers, Clara
Cheers, Clara
Reply from carringtonrj (author)
Thank you so much. I hope it lives up to your expectations! It's so nice to get positive feedback - means a lot to me. I'm always in need of warmth! I've had a lot fun, and a little pain, in writing this. But you've really made my day with your review. Thank you.
(Chapter 14 Review)
Still enjoying this story quite a lot. Thanks for posting the new chapters so regularly.
Reply from carringtonrj (author)
thank you so much. i've nearly finished writing. 24 chapters in all. so not so very much more to go!
(Story Review)
Amazing story. I'm not usually a fan of stories where the narrator spends a lot of time relating the past to the reader, but this is very well handled. Love the philosphical aspect of piece. Now I'm forced to wait for the next installment.
Reply from carringtonrj (author)
Thanks so much for your comment. It means a lot to me to get positive feedback - yep, I'm that needy! I've written most of the story now and will post it over the next few weeks. It has been fun to write and I think I have come up with an ending. Though the story has tended to take on a life of its own as I've developed it. Thanks again for reading.
I've written most of the story now and will post it over the next few weeks. It has been fun to write and I think I have come up with an ending. Though the story has tended to take on a life of its own as I've developed it. Thanks again for reading. 
(Chapter 6 Review)
That was a delicious chapter! Enchanting really. 
Reply from carringtonrj (author)
thanks so much. you make it really fun to write this, knowing someone is actually reading and enjoying it! i've been writing for so long for no real audience, so it's great to have an actual reader. you're a star!
(Chapter 5 Review)
If you were shooting for erotic, you nailed it! 
I enjoy the way you use a series of verbs (nouns and adjectives as well) to describe a particular action or sentiment. Very effective - and, yes, you've been doing this all along, not just this chapter. I find the verbs in particular add to the "rush" of the scene.
Again, well done!!
I enjoy the way you use a series of verbs (nouns and adjectives as well) to describe a particular action or sentiment. Very effective - and, yes, you've been doing this all along, not just this chapter. I find the verbs in particular add to the "rush" of the scene.
Again, well done!!
Reply from carringtonrj (author)
Hey, thanks again. You're such a star reader. It really means a lot to get positive responses.
(Story Review)
I love your description to the story. That was wonderful. Caught my attention nicely. I hope to get to some more reading soon.
I hope to get to some more reading soon.
Reply from carringtonrj (author)
hey A. Thanks so much for commenting. And you've got a couple of new stories up too, haven't you? So I'm looking forward to reading them!
(Chapter 4 Review)
I like the Dylan element that you have woven into the story. I also enjoyed the way you described the love scene - very passionate without detailing what was actually going on - well done! 
Reply from carringtonrj (author)
thank you. it's so lovely to get positive feedback. you're a star!
(Chapter 3 Review)
Wow! That was beautiful, especially the places where you waxed poetic. I love that in descriptive passages. I felt charmed, enchanted just reading it. Nice work, really nice.
Reply from carringtonrj (author)
thank you so much! you really made my day again. it's so nice to get positive feedback!
(Chapter 2 Review)
Nice easy flow to your writing - quite enjoyable. Again, great dialogue!
I just have to know what Queertown is like!
I just have to know what Queertown is like!
Reply from carringtonrj (author)
thanks again. next chapter takes us there!
(Chapter 1 Review)
You definitely have piqued my curiousity! So, yes, please continue. The dialogue was excellent.
Reply from carringtonrj (author)
thanks for the positive. it really means a lot to me. i'll post more in a couple of days.
You've made my day!
You've made my day!
(Chapter 25 Review)
You have a wonderfully unique 'voice' to your prose. The rhythm reminded me of a storyteller, as if the narrator is present and telling the story, different from just reading the words a loud. I look forward to reading more from you!