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    Caz Pedroso
  • Caz Pedroso
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  • 10/04/2015
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Poems, Old and New - 1. Rain

Rain is shining on the leaves,

Rain is shining on the webs,

Rain is shining on the grass,

Like crystals till the last.

(Written in the 1990’s with my late grandfather)

This was my first ever poem.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Mikiesboy

Hey Cazzie!! Aw, that's sweet and sweet is good. And what a wonderful memory to have with your grandfather!

 

Looking forward to more.

 

tim

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Caz Pedroso
On 10/05/2015 06:01 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Hey Cazzie!! Aw, that's sweet and sweet is good. And what a wonderful memory to have with your grandfather!

 

Looking forward to more.

 

tim

Thank you.

 

As you're not allowed to add too many chapters at once (it blocks up the story notifications or something) I have set a new poem to post every day, until my note book is empty. Then I'll start writing some new ones.

 

Thanks again for the review. :hug:

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LitLover

I read the poem and had a picture in my mind of a warm late spring day, everything is green and the rain is sparkling.

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On 10/05/2015 06:16 AM, LitLover said:

I read the poem and had a picture in my mind of a warm late spring day, everything is green and the rain is sparkling.

I wrote it on a warm day after a night of rain. I was sitting in the gardens of Kipling's house, enjoying the sun. So I am very glad that it came across in the words.

 

Thank you for the lovely review :hug:

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Caz Pedroso
On 10/05/2015 06:33 AM, Defiance19 said:

Very nice Caz. Paints a very clear picture in a few short sentences.

Look forward to the rest.

:thankyou:

 

It is set to post a new one each day for about a week. Then I will have to actually start writing again :)

 

:hug:

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Lisa

Heya, Caz! Great poem! I agree with Lit; I pictured the same thing when I read it - a spring day, with the leftover rain on everything it touched. :)

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On 10/06/2015 02:03 PM, Lisa said:

Heya, Caz! Great poem! I agree with Lit; I pictured the same thing when I read it - a spring day, with the leftover rain on everything it touched. :)

I can still picture the day I wrote this one whenever I read it. I'm glad people seem to like it too. :)

 

:hug:

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On 7/10/2017 at 9:44 AM, Aviana said:

Very fond memories connected to this poem I see...so sweet!

Thank you for commenting and I am so sorry I missed it and didn't reply sooner. :hug: 

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