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    Caz Pedroso
  • Caz Pedroso
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  • 10/08/2015
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Poems, Old and New - 5. Twenty Two

All the two’s twenty two,

I want to say, I love you.

I want you with me all the time,

Tell your mum that you are mine.

Happy birthday, hip hip hooray,

I hope you have a lovely day.

(Written 2002)

Copyright © 2017 Caz Pedroso; All Rights Reserved.
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Out of likes :heart::wizard::heart:
Nothing but joy and happiness in those lines.
Really sweet Caz.

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Lisa

Loved it, Caz!!! :) Loved the line: 'Tell your mum that you are mine' -- priceless! lol :)

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On 10/09/2015 03:37 AM, Lisa said:

Loved it, Caz!!! :) Loved the line: 'Tell your mum that you are mine' -- priceless! lol :)

:) as I said his mom didn't like me much (the feeling was mutual) so I wrote this in his card so she would see it. I could be very petty back then ;)

 

Thanks for the comments :hug:

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Caz Pedroso
On 10/09/2015 04:17 AM, Defiance19 said:

I keep missing these little gems Caz. I love them. It captures the moment so perfectly.

Nicely done

So glad your enjoying them :hug:

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Caz Pedroso
On 10/09/2015 03:31 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Hi Cazzie.

Oh my this was sweet. Very sweet and innocent and full of love.

Excellent.

 

tim

Me? Innocent? 0:) I'll hold you to that ;)

 

:thankyou::hug:

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On 10/08/2015 11:13 AM, Reader1810 said:

Out of likes :heart::wizard::heart:

Nothing but joy and happiness in those lines.

Really sweet Caz.

:thankyou::hug:

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On 7/10/2017 at 10:04 AM, Aviana said:

When I read...tell your mum you r mine...I can't help smiling...so so sweet!! 

Thank you for commenting and I am so sorry I missed it and didn't reply sooner. :hug: 

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