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9. Chapter 9 Reviews Book 3 of Carthera Takeover Tales
(Chapter 9 Review)
I gotta say you didn't surprise me! I was betting Isiah also had a carthera mate. I bet both twins found their mates in the same day =P
And about the ending, may I expect lots of emotion in the next chapter?
And about the ending, may I expect lots of emotion in the next chapter?
Reply from Cia (author)
Mebbe. You figured out what was coming with this chapter, so what do you think I'll do with the next one? Good emotion, bad emotion? Will there be a reconciliation, or won't there? Hmm... 
So many choices! There will be more to come, never fear! Thanks for the review 
So many choices! There will be more to come, never fear! Thanks for the review 
(Chapter 9 Review)
Oh oh the big confrontation is coming Well, it's a cliffie againnnnnnnnnnnnnn 
WRITEEEEEEEEEEE *puppy eyes of doom* ! I'm sure the mate bond is not broken ... I just thought it was a little easy to explain the video as 'oh we didn't hurt him it was a plan...' Especially as he 'slaughtered' the Cathera (if I remember right), it would have been easier to do it with a bullet...(more easy to fake).
Well...WRITE MORE
Well, it's a cliffie againnnnnnnnnnnnnn WRITEEEEEEEEEEE *puppy eyes of doom* ! I'm sure the mate bond is not broken ... I just thought it was a little easy to explain the video as 'oh we didn't hurt him it was a plan...' Especially as he 'slaughtered' the Cathera (if I remember right), it would have been easier to do it with a bullet...(more easy to fake).Well...WRITE MORE
Reply from Cia (author)
OH, was that a little too bogus of an explanation? hmm... not telling more yet. I'm writing, I'm writing! Just, slowly. Lots more to come, major events and reveals still waiting in the wings!
not telling more yet. I'm writing, I'm writing! Just, slowly. Lots more to come, major events and reveals still waiting in the wings!
(Chapter 9 Review)
Finally! Sorry, patience isn't my forte. 
Yes, that was what I thought. And I'm very grateful that Isiah actually told Ellis some of the things he's doing. Some authors probably would have made a great secret out of this for the next five chapters, so thank you for telling us something.
Although I really do not want to think the fact through the end that Ellis is the other half of Isiah, as in i's his opposite in everything'.
I like Ellis new features very much and am curious if there will be more.
So Dav (finally got his name right) has enough of the silent treatment? Did I mention I hate cliffies? lol
Oh and thanks for welcoming me here at the forum. (Better late than never, just noticed it some days ago...)
Yes, that was what I thought. And I'm very grateful that Isiah actually told Ellis some of the things he's doing. Some authors probably would have made a great secret out of this for the next five chapters, so thank you for telling us something.
Although I really do not want to think the fact through the end that Ellis is the other half of Isiah, as in i's his opposite in everything'.I like Ellis new features very much and am curious if there will be more.
So Dav (finally got his name right) has enough of the silent treatment? Did I mention I hate cliffies? lol
Oh and thanks for welcoming me here at the forum. (Better late than never, just noticed it some days ago...)
Reply from Cia (author)
LOL Aditus! Well first, everyone is welcome but someone who reads and comments on my stories? Especially so! I know passing along the information Isiah had to share with Ellis is 'spoiling' the drama for some... well there is more to come. Not quite what you mean by him being the exact opposite of Ellis, there could be many things, but I'm not going to say anything about what might come later in the story, you'll just have to keep reading! (once I write it, lol) Thanks for the review hun!
(Chapter 9 Review)
Surprised? No. Flabbergasted stunned, astounded? Yes. Incredulous? Yes. Trying to realign my head, neck, and body from the whiplash? Yes.
WOW! That was definitely some chapter, Cia. Not to mention ending in a major cliffhanger. My favorite touch was that Ellis is starting to smell with his tongue. Me thinks the mate bond is definitely not broken. More! More! MORE!!!
WOW! That was definitely some chapter, Cia. Not to mention ending in a major cliffhanger. My favorite touch was that Ellis is starting to smell with his tongue. Me thinks the mate bond is definitely not broken. More! More! MORE!!!
Reply from Cia (author)
LOL! Sorry I took you on such a rollercoaster. Oh wait... no I'm not! I'm really glad you are enjoying the crazy situation in the story. Thanks so much for the reviews!
I'm really glad you are enjoying the crazy situation in the story. Thanks so much for the reviews!
(Chapter 9 Review)