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1. Chapter 1 Reviews

BeautybutBroken%s's Photo

Mar 17 2014 05:53 PM

(Chapter 1 Review)

WOW! First chapter was great! :2thumbs: I just hope Sam ends up feeling the same for Blake (hint, hint) ;)
joann414%s's Photo

Mar 20 2013 12:44 PM

(Chapter 1 Review)

I am finding so many great stories that are being updated, and this is one of them. Don't know how I will keep track of all of them, but I will manage. Love Blake and Sam, and their excitement are seeing each other again. Can't wait to see how it develops :thumbup:
Lubbockgaymale%s's Photo

Mar 19 2013 08:35 AM

(Chapter 1 Review)

Are you still looking for beta readers/editors? I'd be happy to help, and won't be offended if you decide to ignore my advice! ;)

View Post Reply from Gaytron87 (author)

Yes I am. Just send me your email. Thank you very much!
Foster%s's Photo

Jul 01 2012 09:08 AM

(Chapter 1 Review)

Nice. I like it.
Lisa%s's Photo

Jun 21 2012 01:12 PM

(Chapter 1 Review)

Great chapter! I loved how Blake was so nervous waiting for Sam to get off the plane. I hope their reunion is a happy one! :)

i thought your writing was fine; very easy to understand, good dialogue between Blake and Sam and Blake and his mom. There were a few letters that should have been capitalized, such as the 'F' in Facebook, and a few words that you wrote as two words, but are really one word. Other than that it was great! :)

View Post Reply from Gaytron87 (author)

HaHAha thAnk You veRy much. I knOw i sHouLd pay aTtentIon to those punCtuatIons.
Rebelghost85%s's Photo

Jun 21 2012 10:27 AM

(Chapter 1 Review)

Nice start! I like light hearted romances and I hope this one continues.

View Post Reply from Gaytron87 (author)

Well thank you very much. I am really liking the story myself. Usually I find myself getting bored with my characters but i think there is a nice sense of things being unsure and it's exciting.
Cia%s's Photo

Jun 21 2012 10:01 AM

(Chapter 1 Review)

I like! Don't ask me why specifically but I'm really into this story. Maybe it's cause my best friend moved when we were 14. She didn't go too far, though so we still saw each other a few times a year but it was a big change and really hard. We moved to the same town at 18/19 and it was heaven again. Of course, I wasn't ever harboring looooove for her :P but still, I think the parallels might be what is really drawing me to the story.

Sorry that I can't offer to beta, as the story looks interesting but I can pass along a few tips. Your writing is pretty clean; I didn't see too many typos. You do need to work on dialogue punctuation and said-bookisms though. Check out this GA Staff Blogwith tips on punctuating and capitalization for dialogue and speech tags and this oneon said-bookisms.

View Post Reply from Gaytron87 (author)

Well thank you. I will definitely keep a tab on the said-bookism. I always run out of ways to do them.
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