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1. Short Story Reviews
(Chapter 1 Review)
I really enjoyed this story. It was funny and entertaining. I enjoyed the beginning and the bad decisions as much as the heroic bean tossing.
(Chapter 1 Review)
Great story, Jack, as always! May be a little late on a review but decided it was a good Saturday autumn morn to read the Fall Anthologies. Your writing is so clean and clear and provides such an easy enjoyable read. Love the take on Legend and loved the character depth portrayed in so few words. You've got my vote on best Fall Anthology!
(Chapter 1 Review)
Great fun. Good story.
Reply from Jack Scribe (author)
Glad you enjoyed it. We'll revisit these guys in a novel very soon.
(Chapter 1 Review)
You certainly can weave a great tale, Jack. I just devoured it. Your sense of humour is still primo! Thanks so much! 
Reply from Jack Scribe (author)
Hey Connor, always great to hear from you.
Dannsar
Sep 19 2011 06:45 PM
(Chapter 1 Review)
He he, what a load of old cheese lol ... but in a very good way! Very refreshing to have a laugh and a bit of reality thrown in for good measure, but not too much headbreaking stress. <edit: that's an appalling pun, I notice as I reread before posting ... but I'm leaving it 
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I'd do him!
By the way, your writing style is something to be really admired. Clear, clean, informative, and pictorial without being painterly.
>I'd do him!
By the way, your writing style is something to be really admired. Clear, clean, informative, and pictorial without being painterly.
Reply from Jack Scribe (author)
No editing problems at all. BTW, one of my editors has asberger syndrome and is a very valued member of my team. Thanks for the support.
(Chapter 1 Review)
God that was funny. Who would have thought it, a bank robbery foiled by a couple of cans of baked beans. Classic.
Reply from Jack Scribe (author)
Always nice to have feedback and nice comments from a fellow author!
(Chapter 1 Review)
Ah the joys of a fallen star who gets a second chance to make it all better. I liked the fact at least he knew he screwed up. Hopefully he will take his sobriety and this new chance at life and love to heart and get somewhere. Nice use of a legend.
Reply from Jack Scribe (author)
The characters will be a big part of my next novel. Yes, Brock had a 'come to Jesus' moment and slipping from sobriety will be not an issue. I'll find time this weekend to read your story.
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