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Added story The Taste of Pomegranateswildbricks - Today, 11:00 AM
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1. Prologue Reviews
(Chapter 1 Review)
I guess I should have taken the tag BISEXUAL seriously... I will read them more carefully in the future Mr. JWOLF. LOL!
Great start! Loved the intro, I think I had deja vu... I read that before I just can't place it.
PS: 20 years in the future, I hoped his sex life was still thrilling as was his heyday at SMU . I guess the future is bleak even in your world. Three weeks... Sheesh.
Great start! Loved the intro, I think I had deja vu... I read that before I just can't place it.
PS: 20 years in the future, I hoped his sex life was still thrilling as was his heyday at SMU . I guess the future is bleak even in your world. Three weeks... Sheesh.
Reply from Jwolf (author)
Oh yeah. You didn expect him to maintain that libido forever, did you? Lol. Love the reviews. Thanks so much.
(Chapter 1 Review)
The Funny Thing Is… Fine is always fine until it’s not quite fine anymore. There was once a time when Saturdays were about fun. This is the reason I love your work. You immediately set up the mood and tone of the chapter and the reader is suddenly catapulted into suspense. Why are Saturdays not fun anymore? because Coop has gotten himself into a rut, and altho things seem so right and perfect and even he agrees that everything is fine and pewrfect, well, there's this little question of...
Chase...and so I'll get to the next chapter
You're making music with your words again.
Chase...and so I'll get to the next chapter
You're making music with your words again.
Reply from Jwolf (author)
Wow. Thanks so much, Louis. Really sweet words. I can't wait to hear what you think as you continue reading 
(Chapter 1 Review)
WOW!!!! 
Now that i've finally started there is absolutely no turning back. I love that Kyle, Spence and Coop are still friends but Devon and Coop now i did not see that one coming at all.. i'm reading on jay see u in the other chaps... hey remind me... who was Sebastian again?
Reply from Jwolf (author)
Glad you started it. I'm craving your reaction. Sebastion is Cooper's resident straight friend. He hooked coop up with Devon at the kappa formal.
(Chapter 1 Review)
Great Prologue! :-)
Love the irony of having the one thing Cooper was worried would have happen, happen. I like how you caught us all up on the characters, although I was left wondering whether or not the Logan fwb thing was just a place holder or if Cooper actually cared about him. Doesn't really matter though because we alredy know that no one holds a candle to Chase... at least that's where you left us at the end of The List.
Love the irony of having the one thing Cooper was worried would have happen, happen. I like how you caught us all up on the characters, although I was left wondering whether or not the Logan fwb thing was just a place holder or if Cooper actually cared about him. Doesn't really matter though because we alredy know that no one holds a candle to Chase... at least that's where you left us at the end of The List.
Reply from Jwolf (author)
Glad you enjoyed it. You're right, no one holds a candle to chase. I hope you're okay with that.
(Chapter 1 Review)
Weel, that was a surprise.
This was a fab prologue, catching us up with all the guys... well except Chase. Can't wait to see more of him
This was a fab prologue, catching us up with all the guys... well except Chase. Can't wait to see more of him
Reply from Jwolf (author)
So you're gonna read this one as it comes out? As always, I look forward to your thoughts. Thanks for the review
(Chapter 1 Review)
Now I'm crying and it's the bad crying. Bad author! The whole chapter I'm looking down going where the f**k is Chase????? Why isn't Chase in here? Why the f**k is Coop married to Devon???? Wtf is going on????
Then I read that Chase that motherf**ker, broke Coop's heart? After all Coop went through mentally to be with and give his heart and soul to him, he breaks his heart. Omg, how can you leave it like that? After twenty years, not a word, until now? Omg, you gotta update.....fast.....did you update yet?
I'm
still
waiting.......
Goddamn Chase, and to think I fell in love with the f**ker too....
Then I read that Chase that motherf**ker, broke Coop's heart? After all Coop went through mentally to be with and give his heart and soul to him, he breaks his heart. Omg, how can you leave it like that? After twenty years, not a word, until now? Omg, you gotta update.....fast.....did you update yet?
I'm
still
waiting.......
Goddamn Chase, and to think I fell in love with the f**ker too....
Reply from Jwolf (author)
I hope you didn't expect it to be happily ever after from the beginning. This is me smiling inside because I know what happens... and you don't... lol. But on a serious note, we're in for a looooong journey, so strap in.
(Chapter 1 Review)
Hey there, Jwolf!
Excellent opening chapter!
The dialogue is truly superb. You do "married with children" extremely well. So far anyway. It's good to see "toute la gang" back again.
So Coop is on the verge of publishing The List. I'm wondering how that will sit with Devon. The agreement is "discreet". Publishing this story goes way beyond discreet. Then there's his children to think about. Anyways, that's plot and I'm quite prepared to wait for the story to unfold.
So it looks like Coop's fears around Chase came to pass.
Excellent opening chapter!
The dialogue is truly superb. You do "married with children" extremely well. So far anyway. It's good to see "toute la gang" back again.
So Coop is on the verge of publishing The List. I'm wondering how that will sit with Devon. The agreement is "discreet". Publishing this story goes way beyond discreet. Then there's his children to think about. Anyways, that's plot and I'm quite prepared to wait for the story to unfold.
So it looks like Coop's fears around Chase came to pass.
Reply from Jwolf (author)
His fears did pan out. I think I've always been nervous about attacking adult dialogue, so I'm glad you find it successful for now. Thanks for the vote of confidence
(Chapter 1 Review)
*shakes head*
No matter how hard...errr... wrong word... how MUCH he tries, he still cant change all that much, can he, Coop I mean!
Oh well, Like i said...
lace... bow... unwound... tripping... boys.... and Grrrrr!!!!
you do that well! a bit TOO well
waiting on Ch 2 now!
No matter how hard...errr... wrong word... how MUCH he tries, he still cant change all that much, can he, Coop I mean!
Oh well, Like i said...
lace... bow... unwound... tripping... boys.... and Grrrrr!!!!
you do that well! a bit TOO well
waiting on Ch 2 now!
Reply from Jwolf (author)
Ch 2 is on the way!
(Chapter 1 Review)
I thought you were going to give us a look at The List from Spencer's perspective, but I like this story so far. It makes some of the mundane and and depressing things associated with being middle aged and makes it entertaining and funny...and still a bit depressing. Cooper's situation isn't all that unexpected, but he's always been a fun POV, so I'm excited to see what you have in story for us as his world starts to slowly unravel.
Reply from Jwolf (author)
I haven't decided how I'll tell spencer's story yet. I want something familiar but different... I'm way more excited about this new angle. Glad you're on board and enjoying so far:)
(Chapter 1 Review)