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12. Chapter 12 Reviews

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Conner
Aug 22 2012 07:16 PM

(Chapter 12 Review)

Excellent chapter!  Posted Image It's my thought that your storytelling has improved dramatically over the course of this story.  I really enjoyed the dialogue in this chapter.

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I'm glad you. Thanks for the praise, I'm working hard on it.
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Yettie One
Jul 10 2012 07:23 AM

(Chapter 12 Review)

So we are into first date territory! Ha. I figured Cole was going to have to get tough with Savan.
Funny how two such high spirited men sound to be so right for each other, yet they seem to be the only stubborn fools who can't see it.
I love it. :D
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