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Millennium Reviews Book 10 of Chronicles Of An Academic Predator (CAP)

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May 12 2014 09:29 PM

(Story Review)

Truly a masterful work of intrigue and drama; it's a credit to the CAP saga. Thank you.
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May 12 2014 09:28 PM

(Chapter 75 Review)

In many ways Brad was fighting for his right to exist against a twisted group of douche nozzles who blame him for the actions of his bio-dad. Under that logic Mike and David should wear the shame of their mother who although not entirely guilty of everything she is accused of is by no means a saint and deserved what she got. I don't feel a bit sorry for any of them.
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May 12 2014 09:00 PM

(Chapter 74 Review)

One should never leave DNA at the scene of a crime. Intense chapter, thanks.
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May 12 2014 08:37 PM

(Chapter 73 Review)

The best thing about this CAP book is how truly like the Godfather it is at the end.
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May 12 2014 08:14 PM

(Chapter 72 Review)

I wouldn't trust Elizabeth Danfield with your money, but I think she is only too willing to see ABC burn and makes a very powerful ally.
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May 12 2014 07:42 PM

(Chapter 71 Review)

JJ is definitely someone I'd like more insight into.
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May 12 2014 06:53 PM

(Chapter 70 Review)

It's heartbreaking that Elliot would betray his family so spectacularly. Excellent work, thanks.
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May 12 2014 05:39 PM

(Chapter 69 Review)

The whole story has been good but it's starting to really really good :P.
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May 12 2014 05:27 PM

(Chapter 68 Review)

Old man Pfinster sounds like he's going to be a thorn. Too bad.
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May 12 2014 05:17 PM

(Chapter 67 Review)

While I like Claire I find her a bit patronizing of those less fortunate. She however is perfectly suited to take on her less than honorable cousin and uncle.
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May 12 2014 04:56 PM

(Chapter 66 Review)

Clare in her Chanel to the rescue.
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May 12 2014 01:06 PM

(Chapter 65 Review)

I only wish Matt was there to splash Brian with a puddle.
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May 12 2014 12:17 PM

(Chapter 64 Review)

Everything's coming up Brad.
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May 12 2014 12:04 PM

(Chapter 63 Review)

Man even my live and let live philosophy has trouble with ABC's brand o' kink. Yikes!
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May 12 2014 11:51 AM

(Chapter 62 Review)

I get the affair but why the costuming it's makes it all seem so ridiculous...thanks for the giggle on that one.
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May 12 2014 09:49 AM

(Chapter 61 Review)

500 Miles is such a great song it makes up fit the cheesiness of Can You Feel The Love Tonight.
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May 12 2014 08:21 AM

(Chapter 60 Review)

Brad has no business knowing about certain things; that side of him is gonna lead to trouble if not held back.
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May 12 2014 08:06 AM

(Chapter 59 Review)

It doesn't work for everyone, but when it does being married is awesome!
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May 12 2014 07:48 AM

(Chapter 58 Review)

I'm glad Claremont's taking it's town back.
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May 12 2014 07:21 AM

(Chapter 57 Review)

It's good to let go of baggage. I'm glad for Robbie.
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May 12 2014 12:12 AM

(Chapter 56 Review)

At this point in life, Matt would be a terrible dad. When he grows up though...he's gonna be able to pull from not only his adoptive father, but Robbie, Stef and JP giving him the chance to be an awesome father.
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May 11 2014 11:49 PM

(Chapter 55 Review)

Clara's right Robbie doesn't owe anyone anything, but Robbie wouldn't be Robbie if he didn't step up. It's why despite his boneheaded acts he's so lovable.
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May 11 2014 11:34 PM

(Chapter 54 Review)

Welcome to the family Gathan. Thanks.
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May 11 2014 11:21 PM

(Chapter 53 Review)

Love the love den :o.
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May 11 2014 11:08 PM

(Chapter 52 Review)

Brad's dinner with Jordan and Marcia (and Robbie) adds a really lovely wrinkle to this business deal with Triton. Thanks.
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May 11 2014 09:46 PM

(Chapter 51 Review)

Brad is walking time bomb of issues, but I must credit him for his sense of survival and ability to thrive despite his horrible mother and half siblings.
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May 11 2014 09:33 PM

(Chapter 50 Review)

Great update. I love it when plans start to coalesce.
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May 11 2014 09:22 PM

(Chapter 49 Review)

Brad should remember to give more slack to most people.
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May 11 2014 09:10 PM

(Chapter 48 Review)

Just when things are feeling warm and gooey the cops show up :P.
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May 11 2014 08:56 PM

(Chapter 47 Review)

A companies internal financials are where the fun skeletons are found, especially in a private company.
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May 11 2014 08:46 PM

(Chapter 46 Review)

Beautiful scene on the beach paying homage to those that we've loved and lost. Thank you.
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May 11 2014 08:32 PM

(Chapter 45 Review)

Brad needs to enjoy the family harmony while it lasts.
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May 10 2014 06:36 AM

(Chapter 44 Review)

Escape valve? Sounds like a silly rationalization to me.
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May 10 2014 06:20 AM

(Chapter 43 Review)

Things are about to get fun...
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May 10 2014 06:05 AM

(Chapter 42 Review)

Great romantic chaos.
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May 10 2014 05:50 AM

(Chapter 41 Review)

I'm glad Brad has his foundation back. I look forward to JP and Stef reconciling.
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May 10 2014 05:35 AM

(Chapter 40 Review)

I agree that JP needs to cut bait on Brian, but it's not JP's fault Brian is a conniving asshat and Brad is way out of line making that accusation. If anything it's Brad's attitude toward Brian that is the cause of Brian's actions.
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May 10 2014 05:16 AM

(Chapter 39 Review)

I love how impatient Brad is when he's not the star of the pity party.
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May 10 2014 04:57 AM

(Chapter 38 Review)

Max and Tim are a good pairing. Good idea.
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May 10 2014 04:43 AM

(Chapter 37 Review)

I hope that Brad and Robbie can translate their bedroom revelations into everyday life.
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May 09 2014 11:58 PM

(Chapter 36 Review)

I like the development, but how did Brian even meet David?
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May 09 2014 11:44 PM

(Chapter 35 Review)

Cody is really hilarious when he's not doling out horrible advice.
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May 09 2014 11:22 PM

(Chapter 34 Review)

I love where this story is heading, thanks.
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May 09 2014 11:09 PM

(Chapter 33 Review)

Ruh roh Shaggy is seems the mystery of Kevin's common name is solved. Great turn of events.
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May 09 2014 06:17 PM

(Chapter 32 Review)

JP is a force of nature.
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May 09 2014 06:01 PM

(Chapter 31 Review)

I don't know why but I just never bonded with Jeanine...no, I just don't like passive aggressive tendencies in people real or fictitious and she all about the pass-agg way.
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May 09 2014 05:47 PM

(Chapter 30 Review)

Robbie made some great points, which is great but why doesn't he get Brad just not ready? Sure Brad's being kinda dicky, but his foundation was ripped out from under him.
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May 09 2014 05:22 PM

(Chapter 29 Review)

Brad needs to get his ass in counseling. He's just as messed up as Robbie. Great work, thanks.
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May 09 2014 04:37 PM

(Chapter 28 Review)

Go Robbie for trying.
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May 09 2014 04:24 PM

(Chapter 27 Review)

Poetic way to end the chapter.
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May 09 2014 03:56 PM

(Chapter 26 Review)

Diamonds are really great start to the woo Brad's been waiting for.
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May 09 2014 02:04 PM

(Chapter 25 Review)

Relationships are all grey area and both Robbie and Brad are pretty black & white.
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May 09 2014 01:30 PM

(Chapter 24 Review)

What do you have up your sleeve Robbie?
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May 09 2014 12:34 PM

(Chapter 23 Review)

Stef will always be a shining star. Thanks for the work.
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May 09 2014 12:18 PM

(Chapter 22 Review)

Brad and Robbie are perfect for each other, great artistic choice Mark Arbour.
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May 09 2014 11:48 AM

(Chapter 21 Review)

I think Brad is taking the injured party thing a little far. If things were truly that great between them this would not have happened. I get he's hurt but he's not a kid and delighting in hurting Robbie is a shitty idea, not shitty enough to usurp Cody's brilliant "Secretly hump Matt as a quiet fuck you to Robbie" but close.
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May 09 2014 04:09 AM

(Chapter 20 Review)

Okay so Cody's advice officially usurps Stef's earlier advice as worse advice ever :P.
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May 09 2014 03:53 AM

(Chapter 19 Review)

I think Kevin has found Valhalla.
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May 09 2014 03:38 AM

(Chapter 18 Review)

Come on Robbie, get there before Brad goes spiraling out of control. Thanks for the chapter.
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May 09 2014 03:20 AM

(Chapter 17 Review)

Robbie just has trouble accepting responsibility for his actions. Sure he was manipulated but he wasn't forced at gunpoint to disrupt his relationship with Brad, and rather than throw his hands up in the air and cry poor me he should take some accountability and own his part in this mess before he starts making demands on Brad who has really been struggling.
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May 09 2014 03:03 AM

(Chapter 16 Review)

Robbie sure has a soft spot for mean spirited little bitches.
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May 09 2014 02:48 AM

(Chapter 15 Review)

Thanks for giving us some Darius love.
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May 09 2014 02:31 AM

(Chapter 14 Review)

No surprise on the Carson front.
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May 09 2014 02:17 AM

(Chapter 13 Review)

I love Father Tim and what a fortuitous meeting for all involved.
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May 09 2014 02:00 AM

(Chapter 12 Review)

Robbie is a great guy but he's a crappy life partner and a questionable father.
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May 09 2014 01:47 AM

(Chapter 11 Review)

I hate that Robbie loves his possessions so much he thinks of them first over his loved ones.
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May 09 2014 01:36 AM

(Chapter 10 Review)

Brad's kinda cute when he's all melodramatic...nice work.
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May 09 2014 01:21 AM

(Chapter 9 Review)

Great twist with the religious news; even better with Robbie reaping what he sows...and Carson still seems like a little shit honestly.
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May 09 2014 01:07 AM

(Chapter 8 Review)

I love how Brad just doesn't put certain things together. It makes things way more fun.
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May 09 2014 12:52 AM

(Chapter 7 Review)

Robbie always seems to fall into this pattern; and if Carson is such a great guy why is he hitting on a married man? Seriously, that is not the trait of a good guy. Great intrigue, thanks.
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May 09 2014 12:30 AM

(Chapter 6 Review)

Robbie is painfully naïve, painfully so. Thanks a bunch.
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May 09 2014 12:13 AM

(Chapter 5 Review)

I love this chapter even more the second time because of many reasons, thanks.
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May 08 2014 11:55 PM

(Chapter 4 Review)

Any chapter with Cody is a great chapter. I think he's wrong about Max though. Thanks for the work.
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May 08 2014 11:38 PM

(Chapter 3 Review)

Opposites really do attract don't they. I love the edgy pace you've created, it's like listening to aggressive music while driving :*).
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May 08 2014 11:21 PM

(Chapter 2 Review)

I think Stef's advice of giving Robbie Brad's blessing is about the worst idea ever :o. Great chapter, thanks.
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May 08 2014 10:51 PM

(Chapter 1 Review)

This was the beginning of the end of Robbie for me. As much slack as I gave him for taking on loving the tsunami that is Brad, this just made me want to shake him. Aside from all that, it was a spectacular way to start the story. Thanks.
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Oct 13 2013 10:15 PM

(Chapter 19 Review)

Quite a sobering acknowledgement that Drew dropped on Brad at the end...count at least one saved from the street and hopefully many more now that Tim and his mission have been rescued...
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Oct 13 2013 07:30 PM

(Chapter 13 Review)

Brad is due for some major good karma...
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Oct 13 2013 04:17 PM

(Chapter 8 Review)

Carmichael...hmmmn, seems like Brad has joined JP & Stefan in the unknowing incest club?
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Sep 23 2013 03:22 PM

(Chapter 75 Review)

Magnificent...
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Sep 23 2013 03:10 PM

(Chapter 74 Review)

Well, I am really disturbed by this but I can see and understand why Brad did what he did... For me the most important thing will be what happens next; can Brad be saved???
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Sep 23 2013 02:51 PM

(Chapter 73 Review)

I have no doubt that Brad and Stef and the others will win in the end but I still worry about what it will cost them. I honestly can't believe that Carson was dumb enough to go after Will even just to piss Brad off.
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Sep 23 2013 02:42 PM

(Chapter 72 Review)

Okay, Will is obviously pissed at John as much as Zach, this makes me think something happened between them and Will either found out or walked in on it. I sense a real distrubance in the force...
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Sep 23 2013 02:34 PM

(Chapter 71 Review)

Damn, I really can't see Darius or Ella ready to be parents. Let's all hope that works out for the best. JJ is pissed as one Hayes and Will at another; won't be much fun for anyone if this doesn't change...
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Sep 23 2013 02:23 PM

(Chapter 70 Review)

The showdown in the boardroom was masterful. Everyone played their part and it just all fell together. I can't believe the guy was stupid enough to try that. Being chairman of one company and involved in another breaks about a dozen SEC regulations and federal laws....

The scene at the end was okay but you could tell that neither Brad or Robbie were as into it as they would have been if they were not so tight...
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Sep 23 2013 02:13 PM

(Chapter 69 Review)

I think Brad is right, having Elizabeth back in Washington DC at that moment will throw Alexandra off her game just a little. At this level of battle that maybe all it takes for Brad and them to win.
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Sep 23 2013 02:05 PM

(Chapter 68 Review)

I want to know what is up with Will and John, they have always been best buds besides being cousins. Now, we have JJ going all diva on us? Brad and Robbie may have to take a backseat to these two pretty soon...
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Sep 23 2013 01:56 PM

(Chapter 67 Review)

If Claire had any ambition, she would be unstoppable and if Brad had Claire's understanding how how people really worked, he would be more of a dynamo than he is now...

Well, with Gathan and Ella moving west, I can guess that the drama will increase around Escorial...
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Sep 23 2013 01:42 PM

(Chapter 66 Review)

Robbie finally got some payback for all the hell that Fred put him through. I was suprised by how Darius acted, good for him.

JP gets out first to make sure everything is under control and safe; then Stef gets to make his entrance; and then the big guns come out in Claire. I have a feeling she is going to be more involved then anyone suspected.
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Sep 23 2013 01:29 PM

(Chapter 65 Review)

A lot of people are like JP, it is just really hard to truly turn your back on a member of your family no matter what they have done or how badly they have hurt others. You always think maybe this will be the time that they grow up and change....
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Sep 23 2013 01:19 PM

(Chapter 64 Review)

A fight between two powerful women both evenly matched in money and society. This is gonna be a slugfest.

You can see the charm with Elizabeth but I have to wonder if it will be there forever? There is just this edge of something to her that worries me. You get just a hint of it from time to time.

Brad really does need Robbie more than Robbie needs him...
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Sep 23 2013 01:07 PM

(Chapter 63 Review)

Well, I am starting to worry that what Robbie said may end up applying to Brad; you can easily lose your soul when you go after someone like this with revenge in mind. I realize they have to be neutralized but I think Brad is going to take it much further than that...
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Sep 23 2013 12:55 PM

(Chapter 62 Review)

Well, I am suprised that Elizabeth slept with Brad's bio-dad but the dressing up like Scarlett and doing the black guy just doesn't really seem like that big of a deal... I guess I just don't understand why anyone would really care. Yes, it would be embarressing but so what?
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Sep 23 2013 12:46 PM

(Chapter 61 Review)

Just Beautiful...
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Sep 23 2013 12:35 PM

(Chapter 60 Review)

JP is like the sphinx, but he has all this mystery that he seems to control. I love when Stef and Claire bicker in that bitchy but loving way. It is sort of funny that Claire seems to be the one person that can do that with everyone and yet everyone puts up with it and still loves her...

I swear not even a scorecard could keep up with the connections between people in this story...
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Sep 23 2013 12:24 PM

(Chapter 59 Review)

Robbie rocks. The way he asked Brad where they first meet was just so sentimental and sweet. I like how they have planned out what wasn't already done. I can't wait to see what songs each of them picks for the other..
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Sep 23 2013 12:13 PM

(Chapter 58 Review)

We won, We won, We won... Sometimes the good guys do win.. Have to thank this was more about the economics than anything else. People want to have jobs so they can take care of their families and make a better life.
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Sep 23 2013 12:01 PM

(Chapter 57 Review)

It is funny to see how different Brad and Robbie are with their kids and other. They are both good with kids though, with new ones on the way they may need to be...

I have to admire how JP just seems to handle everything that comes his way.
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Sep 23 2013 11:51 AM

(Chapter 56 Review)

I don't know that anyone is ever really ready to raise a child. I can't see Matt being ready at all; Wade would really make a much better choice as the baby daddy but we will see.

I am like Brad and have to hope it is Robbie's child but I found it strange that Jeanine could not meet Brad's eyes, have to wonder why???
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Sep 23 2013 11:42 AM

(Chapter 55 Review)

Well, I guess we will be spending more time in Claremont then even I anticipated. I enjoy being back and can just see where there would be lots of things to do here...

Gathan is a unique character and I can't wait to see how he develops... Robbie seems to be willing to look past what happened to him when he was in high school and maybe he can help part of this family move past it as well...
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Sep 23 2013 11:22 AM

(Chapter 53 Review)

I can see that Robbie would be the one that really would not want to have to go back to Claremont with his history there but in some ways he would be the perfect one to go back. The boy that grew up there and escaped to become rich and successfull.
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Sep 23 2013 11:12 AM

(Chapter 52 Review)

Brad and Robbie really do compliment each other in so many ways. It is so good to see that they have come through their ordeal and seem to be stronger than ever. I hope that they focus on the good in each other and their lives and leave the rest behind where it belongs.
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Sep 23 2013 11:01 AM

(Chapter 51 Review)

Talk about trauma, I have to wonder how this will play out. It would not be unusual to have someone block something out like that, especially since that was right before Brad was taken to California and his mother killed herself.

I can see Stef's secret to his success... LOL...
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Sep 22 2013 11:25 PM

(Chapter 50 Review)

I am glad that Robbie handled what Brad told him so well. It would have been easy for him to blow up or over-react but he did neither. I think that he and Brad are on more solid footing than either of them realizes.

I like how Brad figured out what it was going to take to help Lark and the way Stef got Mr Lu to help with the funding was perfect.
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Sep 22 2013 11:16 PM

(Chapter 49 Review)

Matt and Wade are just hot. I can't say that I blame Brad for watching and even doing a little bit more but I am glad he did not take it any further than he did.

You have to wonder what scared Lark so much that he decided that he needed to fake his own death. The note was a give away that he was still alive but glad that Brad went down the Santa Clara to check.
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Sep 22 2013 11:07 PM

(Chapter 48 Review)

I think it is great that Mark has put as much work into going over the therapy sessions as he does. It is very much like a real therapy session and the work being done in what is written is completely valid.
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Sep 22 2013 10:57 PM

(Chapter 47 Review)

I have always really liked how Mark will introduce a truly memorable character and then they may go away for a while but they always pop back up at the most interesting moments. It is just great how well done the secondary characters are in this series...
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Sep 22 2013 10:48 PM

(Chapter 46 Review)

The scene on the beach with Brad, JP, and Isidore is the one of the best written scenes in this saga. I cannot tell you how special it was. That is what makes this saga so much more than some of the other stories on here....

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Sep 22 2013 10:37 PM

(Chapter 45 Review)

It amazes me how many people don't care enough about their family to really work at finding out what is going on and what is important to them. I thing it is great the way this family always watches out for each other. No one is ever really alone.
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Sep 22 2013 10:28 PM

(Chapter 44 Review)

You never bring emotions into a business issue, it just clouds your thinking and makes it harder to make the right call. I can't believe a women as smart as ABC would allow herself to get thing involved.

Brad and Robbie really need to think about how what they do effects those around them.
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Sep 22 2013 10:18 PM

(Chapter 43 Review)

You can go to far in trying to get back at someone and Robbie is right, it isn't worth losing your soul over. I hope that Brad knows what he is doing...
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Sep 22 2013 10:08 PM

(Chapter 42 Review)

I don't care how hot Matt/Wade/Tiffany was, the best sex that night was in with Brad/Robbie/Jeanine. I just have a sneaking feeling that Tiffany isn't going to be the only one that ends up pregnate.
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Sep 22 2013 10:00 PM

(Chapter 41 Review)

I guess that true love does triumph in the end, just hope that Stef remembers that as wel.
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Sep 22 2013 09:50 PM

(Chapter 40 Review)

I have to say that I can see JP's side to some extent. I have a family member that has repeatedly taken anything that is given to them and wasted oppertunity after oppertunity but it is so hard not to give them another chance. That being said, I think JP has made the right decision. Brian has done so much more than just hurt one or two members of the family. He has actively worked to destroy the family. This is war...
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Sep 22 2013 09:38 PM

(Chapter 39 Review)

Losing your first love can be truly traumatic, Will is going to need to take a little time to get over this. I think being away from Malibu and will Matt and Wade and his cousins will help him out.

Brad is going to push JP too far one day and I think even he will regret what happens then. I do think he had to do something to bring JP out of it but that was just damn near too far.
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Sep 22 2013 09:27 PM

(Chapter 38 Review)

I don't know who I think meshes better Max and Tim or Cody and Kevin. I guess in the end it would be Max and Tim since they seem to be older and more in line with each other. I am not sure that Kevin is ready to settle for one person, not even someone as hot as Cody...
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Sep 22 2013 09:12 PM

(Chapter 37 Review)

I never thought I would see the day that Brad would give up that level of control with anyone, not even Robbie. I know it will work out now... I just know it.
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Sep 22 2013 09:04 PM

(Chapter 36 Review)

I just never even thought of Brian. I have to wonder how he and David got together; I would not have thought they would have moved in the same circles...

Brad is right, JP will take this very hard. I am glad that he has moved to get Stef and Claire to both watch out for him until Brad can get there...

Why do I have this scene in my mind of three witches stirring a large black pot in the moors of Scottland?
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Sep 22 2013 08:54 PM

(Chapter 35 Review)

Damn, I can't remember the last time that Robbie got really drunk like that. I am glad that Cody handled the situation the way he did. Robbie and Brad both have some issues when they think they are not desireable...
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Sep 22 2013 08:47 PM

(Chapter 34 Review)

Who knew that Brad had lost a glass slipper and the scary step-mother was trying to figure out how to plunge the heel into his back...

If nothing else this showed why Robbie and Brad should end up together in the end.
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Sep 22 2013 08:36 PM

(Chapter 33 Review)

Damn, what is it with the accidental incest in this family??? I sort of saw this coming after we found out earlier Kevin's last name. I wasn't sure but it just seemed like to big of a coincidence. I hope this doesn't freak Brad out to much, he is already in a state.
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Sep 22 2013 08:27 PM

(Chapter 32 Review)

I know some people will hate it but I really love when the action goes back to Claremont. I guess I am just sentimental in that regard, although I hate my home town... LOL...

Well, Brad and Robbie seem to be in a calmer place at the moment. I hope that they can really work this out.

JP is going to be around for a while, I am so excited...
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Sep 22 2013 07:59 PM

(Chapter 31 Review)

Jeanine and Brad really laid their cards out on the table and I think both of them are happy with how the other person reacted. I am glad that Jeanine and Tiffany are going to get together. They both deserve a little happiness.

Robbie is starting to annoy me again. Damn, I don't know why I can't just pick a side... LOL...
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Sep 22 2013 07:47 PM

(Chapter 30 Review)

Forget the slap upside the head, I need a two by four... The problem is that I can see and semi understand where both of the them are coming from. I think in some ways Brad is actually in a position to get hurt worse than Robbie. Brad has already said it, Robbie is his foundation and even though they are going through a rough patch, Brad still needs Robbie more than Robbie needs Brad...
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Sep 22 2013 07:37 PM

(Chapter 29 Review)

I know I should not but I just want to slap the shit out of Brad...
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Sep 22 2013 07:27 PM

(Chapter 28 Review)

This was great. Robbie has gone all out but he and Brad still need to work on getting on the same page. This was a great start to what will be a work in progress for them...
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Sep 22 2013 07:19 PM

(Chapter 27 Review)

I told you not to piss off Stef. With Robbie's help, Stef got to show exactly what the idiots in charge of both the expo and Cary Chase and his people were up to. Revenge is best served cold and I bet it was freezing in the room after the walkout.

I thought Brad handled the situation with Lark and Dan just perfectly...
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Sep 22 2013 07:07 PM

(Chapter 26 Review)

Robbie has great taste in jewelry. I am so glad he went and did something really spectacular for Brad to give him a tangible idea of how much he cares for him.

I don't think I would want to cross Stef, I have a feeling the board and this idiot are going to regret it in the end.

Well, the two spies are out but I have to wonder if they are really gone???
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Sep 21 2013 07:08 PM

(Chapter 25 Review)

Love sucks....

Harry Potter is just the best. I am so glad it is being brought into the story even if it was just a mention... I am glad that Robbie decided to take some control and work to get his life back on point.
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Sep 21 2013 07:00 PM

(Chapter 24 Review)

Damn, certainly did not see Robbie showing up. This is going to have to call for a quick change of plans. I hope Robbie will play along.

Everyone is about to be in for a big suprise. I can't wait to see what happens when Stef and Brad turn the tables and start going after the people going after them...

I wonder why the people at Omega have been willing to fund what is basically a personal vendetta? Is there something else going on?
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Sep 21 2013 06:49 PM

(Chapter 23 Review)

Watching Stef and seeing how everything developed was a real lesson in economics and personal relationships. So much of business is still who you know, this can be both a benefit and drawback as well...
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Sep 21 2013 06:40 PM

(Chapter 22 Review)

Okay, I am starting to get really pissed at Brad. Robbie may have started this but Brad is starting cause more problems then Robbie did. That 65/35 split is about to start to shrink...
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Sep 21 2013 06:33 PM

(Chapter 21 Review)

Well, I don't think that Brad is right and this is 97% Robbie's fault. I think it is split more 65% to 35% with Robbie being the larger piece. I do think some of Brad's actions have actually made the situation worse than it had to be, that being said, the drama has been great...

I thought Grace and Brad played that just perfect. I can't wait to see what happens when the wheel turns... Plus, we still have not found out who the real person behind all of this is. I think that is going to be a whole other story...
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Sep 21 2013 06:16 PM

(Chapter 20 Review)

If Brad sleeps with Matt before or after he gets back with Robbie; he will forever lose the high ground no matter what else happens. You just don't do that no matter what.

JP is going to pull people and part of the story back to Claremont. I am so excited. I have always liked the action that takes place there...
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Sep 21 2013 06:05 PM

(Chapter 19 Review)

Well, I think that Kevin will have a great time this Thanksgiving. While there are a few bottoms in the group, there are quite a few that are more than accomplished tops...

I enjoy being able to see the extended family and getting to see the kids as well. Holidays at Escorial are never dull.
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Sep 21 2013 05:55 PM

(Chapter 18 Review)

David is a great therapist. He doesn't just try and pull someone to his point of view. He works at letting them find out where they need to go.

Brad, Robbie and Kevin were a hot combination. I don't know why I just thought of this but Kevin's last name is the same as Brad's bio dad. I wonder if there is going to be a connection there.
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Sep 21 2013 05:43 PM

(Chapter 17 Review)

Much like Paya, I am starting to move toward Robbie's side on this. I don't think Robbie handled this well, but he was set up and played and now that he wants to really work on fixing this situation, Brad wants to keep it going to catch the guys out. I can see Brad's side but Robbie's as well.
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Sep 21 2013 05:34 PM

(Chapter 16 Review)

Sometimes when you take a break you figure out that you really want out anyone, I hope this is not where Brad is going to end up being.

I love how Brad played the scene with Keenan and then with Carson, maybe Brad should be in Hollywood more often and in a different role...

Brad handled the situation with Will just perfectly. It is great that he is able to be so open and honest with his chilren. Wish more people could and would be like that...
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Sep 21 2013 05:21 PM

(Chapter 15 Review)

I really loved how Brad and Darius had their talk and how they related to each other. Not suprised about Will at all but glad to see how supportive Darius is of him.

I liked how Stef handled the situation with the mission and the kids there. No one needs to be preached at all the time.
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Sep 21 2013 05:09 PM

(Chapter 14 Review)

I trust Cody on this. Along with what Robbie said Carson was doing, I think there is little doubt that whomever is really behind everything is trying to ruin everything that means anything to Brad. I don't think we have found the person behind all of this yet. Dan Church came from a family with some money but not like what it would take to pull this off. There has to be someone else in the mix...
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Sep 21 2013 04:59 PM

(Chapter 13 Review)

It truly is sad how many children fun off to LA or New York or wherever thinking that they will find this great place that will accept them and everything will just be sunshine and rainbows. What happens is that there are just people there waiting to take advantage off and use them. It can be heartbreaking...
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Sep 21 2013 04:47 PM

(Chapter 12 Review)

Well, Brad destroyed the car, Robbie figured out who was behind the problems, Stef was a drama queen, and JP will try and fix everything. This was a pretty standard chapter.

I really like getting even glimpses of the kids and even Jeanine...
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Sep 21 2013 04:38 PM

(Chapter 11 Review)

I swear the second Robbie said that, I totally remembered. I can't believe I did not think of it before; really can't believe that Brad did not... WOW...
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Sep 21 2013 04:28 PM

(Chapter 10 Review)

Damn, I want Robbie and Brad's mid life crisis... Cancun, Palm Springs, Las Vegas, and now Hawaii; this is just so much fun.

Waiting for the next shoe to drop...
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Sep 21 2013 04:20 PM

(Chapter 9 Review)

I have to think that Robbie finding out that Brad bought Kevin/Sergio a car would be a blow to him. Brad has never been like that really.

I think the deal with the reporter taking the religious angle is just too funny for words.
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Sep 21 2013 04:12 PM

(Chapter 8 Review)

Brad and Robbie still love each other; that has never been the problem. Unfortunately, love is not always enough. I hope they make it through but if not, who will each of them end up with???
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Sep 21 2013 03:59 PM

(Chapter 7 Review)

I am afraid that Stef is right. Brad is a catch and if Robbie doesn't figure out what he wants and come to his senses then he may very well lose Brad.

It is funny how well Brad reads Robbie but Robbie seems to be having a much harder time reading Brad. Is it guilt or does Brad just understand the situation better than Robbie?
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Sep 21 2013 03:49 PM

(Chapter 6 Review)

Well, we haven't really met Carson yet but somehow or another, I think that Brad is coming out ahead in this deal so far. I thought it was funny how Robbie is in top mode all the sudden. I have to sort of wonder what caused this reaction.

I love the give and take between Claire and Stef. It is just perfect...
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Sep 21 2013 03:39 PM

(Chapter 5 Review)

Okay, glad that Brad and Frank had time to let each other know where they both stand. I can tell that they are both pissed at Robbie over this.

I really think Brad should leave or at least make sure that he is never alone when he is near Matt.

Brad and Sergio could be interesting...
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Sep 21 2013 03:29 PM

(Chapter 4 Review)

Cody was great all the way around. He gave Brad just what he needed and helped him to understand at least to some extent where Robbie is coming from.

Cody is also right about Matt. I hvae to believe that Brad would never be that stupid...
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Sep 21 2013 03:20 PM

(Chapter 3 Review)

Well, you reap what you sow but I doubt that Robbie really thought that far in the future...
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Sep 21 2013 03:10 PM

(Chapter 2 Review)

Well, I think that Brad was kidding but I am not so sure about Matt. I think he would sleep with Brad in a heartbeat. Like Brad, I was suprised to see Wade make his comment.

I am glad that Robbie showed back up and they had the conversation. I still think this is going to be a really bad idea but maybe 30 days will work out okay...
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Sep 21 2013 02:59 PM

(Chapter 1 Review)

Well, I just did not see this one coming. I would have never thought that Robbie would risk opening their relationship. I could sort of see Brad wanting this on some level but not Robbie... This just floors me. I guess having a couple of flops could make him think he needed to shake things up but why shake up their relationship. Something or someone else is behind this...

Stef is right about the tech industry. I have to wonder how that will play out over the course of this story. Brad is right about the spy. I wonder if the issue with Brad and their company is linked to the issue with Robbie???
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Sep 13 2013 06:56 PM

(Chapter 27 Review)

:2thumbs:
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Sep 13 2013 03:20 PM

(Chapter 15 Review)

Not sure where you took the story line but I'd love to see more about the kids, after all just as Brad is JPs heir to the family scion position, Will is next in line, right? Plus if it was the kids that made Robbie pull his head out from his colon, it could be a couple of pretty powerful and emotional chapters..... Let's see if you thought along those lines while writing.... lol
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Sep 13 2013 01:53 PM

(Chapter 13 Review)

Could you lend me some tissues? Seems I've run out!.
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Sep 13 2013 12:09 PM

(Chapter 6 Review)

I like what you've done a lot. Robbie takes a twink to Cancun and ends up with a whinny bottom bitch even though he's a bottom himself while Brad fucks and gets fucked by three hot men and blows another one! I try to live my life knowing that Karma can kick your ass and, as much as love Robbie and realize they'll end up together, I hope you make him squirm for hurting Brad and being an ass!
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Apr 28 2013 12:48 PM

(Chapter 40 Review)

JP is getting really stupid has the ages goes by...please that fucker Brian does't desserve anything he has no morals and he is a fucking leach that doesn't go away..i can't wait til he gets himself kill ( i hope for a quick dead ) :D
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Jan 01 2013 04:05 PM

(Chapter 44 Review)

I guess I'm just monogamy minded. I don't get this incessant need to have someone else in your relationship as an "escape valve."
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Jan 01 2013 02:24 AM

(Chapter 30 Review)

Of course, it's not enough...Brad has been monogamous for 14 years and now he has the chance to be a slut. What almost 40 year old guy wouldn't jump at an opportunity like that. It is incredibly selfish and self centered, but hey, isn't that just the stereotypical gay man?

Poor Robbie...he fucked up...he knows he fucked up...he has bent over backwards to solve the problem and there is nothing he is going to be able to do to fix this.
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Jan 01 2013 01:55 AM

(Chapter 29 Review)

I'm not sure I can go through another month of Brad wanting to fuck around and Robbie trying to do everything he can to get back!!!
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Dec 31 2012 05:09 PM

(Chapter 61 Review)

This was probably my favorite chapter. I was literally crying and laughing through it. I loved the wedding/commitment ceremony. Brad and Robbie are one of my favorite couples and I have been pulling for them since 1980. Thanks.
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Nov 03 2012 10:52 AM

(Chapter 75 Review)

[Spoilers]
Since I decided from the current chapter of Paternity so re-read Be Rad I have re-read from Be Rad to Millennium. I want to review my I like Robby in Be Rad, but dislike his perspectives in Paternity.
I have realized why Robbie acts the way he does in Paternity and to an extent Darius, Brad, and JJ.
Darius: He probably viewed Will's actions through Robbie's reactions to them. Since he believes Will has Brad (so he sees Brad as biased), JJ has Jeanine (so he sees why JJ reacts badly to Will's actions toward her), and he has Robbie (so he trust Robbie's judgement). I guess watching Robbie's behavior in person influenced his change of heart to Will.
Brad: He value's his connection to Will. Granted he told Robbie he does not put a list on the people he loves I read it more as a coonetion to Robbie. His #1 is tied to both Robbie and Will.
JJ: I understand why he values Jeanine, but I would have thought he would have followed Tiffany more. Granted Jeanine is his "mother" (the only parent to go see him skate) Tiffany was his instructor. I am surprised she did not try to stop JJ's cockiness. Now she is blind, but I guess this is due to JJ being her kid.
Robbie: So far I cannot believe I did not connect Robbie's perspective of Will's actions to Robbie's relationship with his parents. He seems to regret it; probably he is confronted with his parental relationship in Will's actions to him. I am guessing that Will is giving Robbie a taste of Brad and JP converse when JP is wrong. Robbie always joked about it, but he was never in that position. Now I realize how much Robbie use to piss me off. Brad has always been a favorite character of mine (number one until Will in Paternity).
I still like this story, but more so after Robbie and Brad get back together. This also made me realize how I underestimated Claire as a character. She is now one of my favs (Will Brad Claire, Stef Wade).
Kody
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Mar 15 2012 10:20 PM

(Story Review)

HOLY.

EPIC.

DRAMA. :o :o :o

I can't say I understand the idea behind having Robbie suffer a "mid-life crisis" for the first 20 or so chapters, though. Reason I say that is...reading it, it was feeling like a plot for the sake of having a plot.

I do think Alexandra's complex super-revenge plot threatened to turn this story into a completely over-the-top affair. But, what managed to keep it "grounded" like the previous stories before it was how even once plans were set into motion to bring her and her cronies down, life still went on for Brad and Robbie as usual. I think that was a very smart approach to take. :)

And as for Brian...can we get a round of "Ding Dong, the Witch is Dead" in here? :devil: Anyone?
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Sep 23 2011 05:14 AM

(Chapter 64 Review)

I'm glad we moved from stereotyping Robbie as the whiny one, unstable one, etc. They look more equal now, more stable and more mature :P I really like in what state they evolved. :)
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Sep 23 2011 03:22 AM

(Chapter 63 Review)

I love your "Deus ex machina" solutions, Mark! :D
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Sep 23 2011 02:58 AM

(Chapter 62 Review)

Bah, you Americans are soo uptight! :P So what if she slept with a black man? Posted Image Moreover, affairs from wife's life wouldn't make that ado in Europe. Sometimes I'm really happy not being an American.
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Sep 22 2011 04:35 PM

(Chapter 60 Review)

"Merde" :)) That sums it up soooo well!!! :D
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Sep 22 2011 01:30 PM

(Chapter 54 Review)

“I think their relationship is more complex than any of us, including Wade, understands.” I’d been trying to figure out what made Elizabeth Danfield both hate and fear Alexandra Carmichael, but I hadn’t been able to discover it.
That's an easy one. ABC knows Danfield abused his son. It would destroy the politician's career. I wonder how this is going to be dealt with though. :D
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Sep 22 2011 01:07 PM

(Chapter 56 Review)

I really hope Jeanine's child has lavender eyes! :D It could be twins! :D one from each ;) :P
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Sep 22 2011 11:45 AM

(Chapter 53 Review)

Haven't you hired Nephy as a member of your team? :P I hope we see the room being used a lot! ;)
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Sep 22 2011 10:18 AM

(Chapter 51 Review)

I think I don't praise too much. Well the flashback and the kinky sex scenes you mix in the story are really fun! :D They spice it up. ;)
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Sep 21 2011 11:07 AM

(Chapter 36 Review)

Seriously? :P ALL of Brad's enemies grouped in one place? :P
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Sep 21 2011 10:21 AM

(Chapter 34 Review)

This is scary! :-o It looks like the storyline is moving! :-o :P So we have only one last piece of puzzle to solve... And since everything is tied to Man in Motion, how about connecting the evil person instigating the wrath of Carmichaels being some Neil's relative, huh? ;) They'd have how to know the identity of Brad, motive and just waiting for the right opportunity to rise... This is why I like these stories, not all that emotional drama, mostly self-induced. :P
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Sep 21 2011 09:53 AM

(Chapter 33 Review)

Posted Image more of pitying and encouraging poor Brad. BORING.Until last four paragraphs. :P You're evil, Mark! :P
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Sep 21 2011 08:49 AM

(Chapter 31 Review)

One technical. Coming from. There's hardly many chapters where the characters don't say they understand where somebody is coming from. I know it's too late for correcting that but it really starts standing out. Maybe there are some other ways how to express the same?
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Sep 21 2011 04:56 AM

(Chapter 29 Review)

This is the crucial to this whole drama:
Robbie: “I thought about what you said, and I can’t do it. I mean, if you want to have sex with someone else with me, I’m fine with that. But I can’t deal with you having sex with someone else when I’m not there.”
Brad: So many emotions flew through my body. Anger that he thought he had the right to set the rules like this when he’d broken them in the first place. Sadness over what this would probably mean for us. And more anger and disappointment, that he didn’t see what I needed, and was once again was putting himself first. But somehow I managed to stay calm, something I needed to work on doing more often anyway. “Explain that.”
For God's sake, it's 29th chapter and we still hear the same. It's all around Brad who wants to f**k other guys whenever and wherever he wants because HE doesn't get emotionally attached to them (not true) while Robbie does. Brad is selfish, arrogant, self-centered slut with a very fragile psyche who likes to preach others and set rules for them - the same rules he's not willing to abide. AND he doesn't see it! He can see all the flaws in Robbie but he himself has never (in this story) done any retrospection - never ever pondered the arguments Robbie gave him (even if there are mentions he needs to work on some of his biggest flaws). That somewhat reminds me of JP in his prick days early in the saga. JP had 30 years before he overcame it, I really hope Brad won't take that long.
And after what Robbie said - I think very reasonable from his point of view (let's f**k other guys but together) - if Brad breaks up with him just because of that (and blames Robbie for that I bet), then he definitely loses as a character. I heard about how the story evolves, I think their wedding is in the blurb even. BUT if Brad doesn't pull his shit together... i.e. if the author doesn't manage to make ALL characters more... balanced then well IDK what to think about the story. Maybe the return wasn't worth it. Maybe I moved on and I might not be the target readership. I might be the wrong reader reading a wrong story.
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Sep 21 2011 04:04 AM

(Chapter 28 Review)

I understand regaining trust is not instant. God knows I'm an example of that. BUT instead of helping Robbie to regain his self-esteem - which was what lead to this "crisis" - he's pushing him back down. And why the main target was Brad - and that's why he shares responsibility for that. And it's not right he doesn't get any blame, only pitying and whatever. Moreover all that bullshit about his "fragile psyche" - others don't have a fragile psyche? How does it go with his depiction as the tough guy? He's as instable as Robbie, only here Robbie is depicted as the unstable whining one and Brad is the poor victim irritated by his whining. I see it as unfair and unbalanced which in consequence irritates me so much I wouldn't believe a story would.
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Sep 21 2011 02:04 AM

(Chapter 26 Review)

That's a very nice touch, with the cuff-links :) it's original, not that corny, yet gay :P I really liked this chapter, first after a long row that I really enjoyed. :)
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Sep 20 2011 06:15 PM

(Chapter 25 Review)

Love is about vulnerability. If you love someone, you open up to them wholly, without any condition. It's the highest level of trust, exclusive, infinite. Usually it's also equal. There might be some shifting balance as if it were communicating vessels but the central point is equality (with the only exception in M/s relationships which are mutually agreed on). I do see faults on both sides and in my eyes Brad doesn't have the right to want to have an "upper hand" in their relationship. "Love" with a f**k-buddy list aside is not real love, it's a mutually profitable relationship based on common interests bound by some synerging effects that overweight the possibility of two people being just "friends with benefits".
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Sep 20 2011 10:17 AM

(Chapter 21 Review)

This Brad adoration is annoying. It makes me want something bad to happen to him, just so that he's not so f**king positive. I really liked his character before this story, he was among my favourite ones (not because of his huge cock :P). But right now... GAH! I'd do anything for his vanishing. Of course I could stop reading the story. But that would go against my resolution. And most probably I wouldn't get back.
Bah... “Brad, sometimes things are just not your fault. Sometimes you’re not responsible when things go bad,” JP told me. “Tell that to Robbie.” OF COURSE HE IS RESPONSIBLE! He's responsible too! And with his slutty behaviour he's making it worse. Posted Image Posted Image Posted Image
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Sep 20 2011 09:17 AM

(Chapter 20 Review)

OK, Brad adoration like at the beginning of this one just confirmed to me how one-sided and biased this story is. Nothing is always so black and white and I know this is a soap opera and that we have Brad as the narrator but this was just too much. Or maybe I'm a cynic prick. And I'm biased too. But Brad has his flaws too. Having read the whole chapter, I'd say one of the biggest flaws of Brad is that he's an incorrigible slut. I wouldn't mind him having an incestuous f**k with Matt IF he weren't so righteous about shit Robbie got them in while he was aimed at as one of the aims to shoot down. Even if it was Robbie's lack of self-control or whatever, he wouldn't have done it himself (I expect Carson was the active one in that one). While Brad is the active one almost in all his f**ks so far, justifying them with how much Robbie had hurt him - so he has right to do it. I call it hypocrisy and double standards. Posted Image
And what about that miraculous turning of Nick? Posted Image Posted Image Posted Image
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Sep 20 2011 03:15 AM

(Chapter 18 Review)

nice chapter! but I hope the courting won't too last long. It would be boring and I don't think I'd like seeing that. I'm for equal treatment, if Robbie growels, Brad should help him, go towards him, not being like a queen expecting everyone to court her.
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Sep 20 2011 02:18 AM

(Chapter 17 Review)

While I was first on Brad's side, now I'm starting to lean towards Robbie. He's not a saint and his hurt ego is starting to annoy me. What looked like a nice twist to get Brad laid with otherwise unreachable guys is starting to drag. I hope it will be resolved soon (and not in next sixty chapters). Well, 2-3 days per chapter... that's another four chapters! Probably more. Sigh....
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Sep 19 2011 12:18 PM

(Chapter 9 Review)

I really enjoy reading this. :) And since I don't have to put up with all the endings you make (I wouldn't dare to call them cliffhangers! :P), I have to say the story has a really nice steady pace and runs swiftly. I'm also really enjoying how you're developing the characters. :)
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Sep 19 2011 05:24 AM

(Chapter 4 Review)

Leave it to Cody to explain things! :D :D And Stefan is looking like some medium or future-teller in these few starting chapters. Though I don't see a big point in getting Lark back, even as the main villain. He already had done some pretty nasty shit - but it wasn't linked with Brad if I remember correctly. And to taking a wrath on the whole family, that would look pathetic. It's just been so long since I've read those stories that I can't remember who got any shit from Brad. :(
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Jun 04 2011 02:43 PM

(Chapter 66 Review)

I don't know why I can't stop laughing at that closing scene, all three coming out of the limo. It is so typical of all of them, but my favourite as always is Stef "smiling as if he was getting out of the car at the Academy Awards and photographers were there."

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He likes to make an entrance. :-)
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Mar 12 2011 11:55 PM

(Chapter 75 Review)

I'm not sure that my words can do Millenium justice. Fantastic! Thank you.

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Thank you!!!
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Mar 11 2011 06:50 PM

(Chapter 75 Review)

Another great story from you. I hope you update the women soon and their pregnancies and who's the daddy!

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I'll have to remember to do that in the next story!
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Mar 10 2011 08:34 PM

(Chapter 75 Review)

That was so beautiful I was actually laughing and crying at the same time. I really feel that emotionally I have been through a four hour f**k (can relate from personal experience hahaha). Wonderful ending. Everything was wrapped up. I don't care who the next narrator is or from what perspective because I know I will read it and that it wil be great! Thank you for such wonderful stories that always bring a smile to my face and anticipation and excitement when I see a new chapter posted. BRAVO! ENCORE! ENCORE!

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Wow. I think that when you say reading the chapter is like a four hour f**k, assuming it was a good one, well that's about the finest compliment.
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Mar 10 2011 07:39 PM

(Chapter 75 Review)

Ok so we Chet Matt or Gathan as the next narrator - now for the million $ question:

When will we see the first chapter of the next CAP storyline???

You fans anxiously await the response! :ph34r:

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Not sure Kevin. Hang in there.
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Mar 10 2011 10:17 AM

(Chapter 75 Review)

Another shocking climax. 2 chapters in a row. :)

It was a good place to finish. Still no clue as to whom
will be caught in the 9-11 attack or the impact on this
intrepid and extended family.

We all await the next book in the ongoing saga of JP &
progeny.

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I try to think of new ways to climax. ;-)
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Mar 10 2011 09:08 AM

(Chapter 75 Review)

Great chapter Mark. A great ending to this part of the saga. I'm looking forward to the next part.

The way Brad dealt with Mike at the end showed that he has class and doesn't want to hurt those who are innocent.

Thanks.

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I think this whole thing has made Brad a better person.
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Mar 10 2011 07:20 AM

(Chapter 75 Review)

always a pleasurable read.... thank you! Now I need to go back and start from the beginning ;-)

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Start from CAP. That should kill a few days.
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Mar 10 2011 05:08 AM

(Chapter 75 Review)

That's a great end to a great story. I'm glad that Brad felt guilt over the events of 74. Otherwise, he would be a monster. I'm also hoping that in a future story that Mike and Brad have some kind of relationship. I think it'd be great for both of them. So, who's the next narrator? I'm kind of hoping Matt or Gathan. :D

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Regarding the next narrator, you get your wish.
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Mar 08 2011 11:56 PM

(Chapter 74 Review)

Great intense chapter. Not expecting all of that to happen. Brad is as ruthless as JP.

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Glad you liked it! I think Brad can be more ruthless than JP, but I think he shows his emotions about it whereas JP doesn't.
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Mar 08 2011 07:20 PM

(Chapter 74 Review)

This was a most disturbing chapter. In fact I waited till later in the day to actually comment on it.

At first I thought that what happened to Carson was really too much, but after some thought I guess it really wasn't. Even if he was under Alexandria's thumb (or whoever) he made the choices he made all along with Robbie and then to actually do what he did to the Boys (or Will in particular). Whether he would have done something else with him or not, Brad couldn't take any chances.

As for Brian - well - good riddance to bad rubbish. This is a story after all and not real life - so I think Mark can take the liberties he wants. I'm sure it made him feel good too.

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Yeah, I knew this would be a bit disturbing, but I think it was about the only way to bring closure.
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Mar 06 2011 10:07 PM

(Chapter 74 Review)

OH MY GOD... not only do we get 2 chapters in one day... fantastic and wonderfully surprising by the way.... thank you for that.... but what a chapter, things going down for omega and the assassinations were f**king brilliant!!

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Glad you liked them! It was the least I could do after you guys all voted Millennium as best hosted story.
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Mar 06 2011 09:11 PM

(Chapter 74 Review)

Whoa! Beyond Kink. Intense.

If this is the penultimate chapter, (which blew me away)
I can't imagine what surprises will occur in the finale!

Perhaps, some foreshadowing of the next book in
the saga?

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

This was, IMHO, the climax. Chapter 75 seems more like a denouement
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Mar 06 2011 07:23 PM

(Chapter 74 Review)

As Brad envisioned, a very "Godfather-esque" ending for two of our prime lowlifes. At least they went out with an bang in more ways than one...

So when will Bradley be sitting down for the ritual ring kissing procession?

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

I think there's a form of that in Chapter 75
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Mar 06 2011 12:40 PM

(Chapter 73 Review)

I love all of your stories and this ending has been building for a long time. I've even gone back and read all of the CAP stories again to refresh myself on all of the intertwining relationships.

Thanks for giving us hours upon hours of great storytelling!
:worship:
Kevin

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

I'm glad you enjoyed them, and I'm glad I went back and re-formatted the older stories!
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Mar 06 2011 09:03 AM

(Chapter 73 Review)

dum dum dum .... wow, threaten the kids so Brad can start killing people hahaha brilliant! and Carson coming back, the gloves are off and let the fur fly.... I can't wait to se ehow it all wraps up...

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

Yep, threaten the kids, and you're in deep shit.
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Mar 06 2011 07:30 AM

(Chapter 73 Review)

Thanks for giving me a smile this morning... and something to look forward to!

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

I'm so glad! I usually do morning smiles differently. ;-)
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Mar 06 2011 03:31 AM

(Chapter 73 Review)

Wow! Brad is quickly moving into JP territory. It's scary. Oh, but I love every minute of it. :evil:

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

You have no idea. :-)
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Mar 05 2011 04:29 PM

(Chapter 72 Review)

I want an e-stim machine. That part made me horny as hell.

Hehe, I'm looking forward to finding out what Elizabeth Danfield has up her sleeve. I have a feeling it's going to be underhanded, perhaps even illegal. :evil:

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

They do sound pretty cool, don't they? There are some wild videos of people using them on X-Tube. They seem to find them enjoyable. ;-)
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Mar 05 2011 08:13 AM

(Chapter 72 Review)

I absolutely am enthralled with this series and now I'm to the "end" of the already posted books and chapters... so I have to be a good girl and wait for you to post.

I must say that whenever you have Brad make the shape with his hand for fisting and use it to tease Robbie that has got to be the hottest thing I've ever read. I definitely look forward to those parts. :D

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

Thanks! I think that anticipation (of sex) is almost as powerful as sex itself.
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Mar 05 2011 05:21 AM

(Chapter 72 Review)

can't wait to find out what the clincher knock out will be.... and what is up with their sons?

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

The sons are teenagers. Drama is part of that package.
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Mar 03 2011 05:48 PM

(Chapter 71 Review)

only four more to go and things are heating up.... Ella may be pregnant... what is up with JJ and Gathan? this was one of those calm before the storm chapters and i loved it hahahaha where is the news story of Brian's death?? hahaha

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

"Calm before the storm"...good way to put it.
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Feb 28 2011 07:00 PM

(Chapter 70 Review)

great boardroom battle hahaha maybe a little anticlimactic, but then you worked up to a couple big climaxes at the end though. i really hope there is another book coming in this series because it simply MUST continue.

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

There is. It's in process.
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Feb 28 2011 03:06 AM

(Chapter 70 Review)

What a hot way to end that great chapter. I have major wood now.

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

Wow. That's even more erotic still!
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Feb 26 2011 07:21 AM

(Chapter 69 Review)

Mark you are an effing TEASE! Talk about a cliffhanger... the whole chapter was one.... great job!

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

Oh come on now. I've had cliffhangers way worse than this one! ;-)
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Feb 26 2011 05:02 AM

(Chapter 69 Review)

These games are becoming more and more devious. I love every chapter! I am curious though as to just how many are left.

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

Six chapters are left: A total of 75.
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Feb 23 2011 07:21 PM

(Chapter 68 Review)

wooohooo i wonder what Alexandria has on old man Pfinster? hahaha the wheels keep turning. wil Brad get back in time? Is JJ really gay? Is he after Gathan? Is Darius gonna get with Ella over break? Who is Wil going to hook up with? Will their sex tape get out? So many thing to find out.... stay tuned kiddies hahahah great job once again.

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

This reminds me of one of those intros on the old Carol Burnett Show for "As the Stomach Turns." LOL!
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Feb 23 2011 12:03 AM

(Chapter 67 Review)

For once I can't wait for a Monday, too bad its a fictional Monday! I really can't wait to see how Omega handles what Brad is getting ready to launch!

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

You are so confident that things will unfold that way?
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Feb 21 2011 09:52 PM

(Chapter 67 Review)

more, more, more... hahaha great chapter.

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

Glad you liked it! More will be on the way soon!
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Feb 21 2011 04:42 PM

(Chapter 66 Review)

Awesome Chapter! I liked that Robbie got a little vengence. I'm also glad that he was able to hold his own, afterall there's not much cause for brawling skills in Hollywood unless you're a stuntman. And the fight was written really well, like you could see it happening. Again great job

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

He did act awfully "straight", stereotypically speaking. :-)
Tiger%s's Photo

Feb 20 2011 04:38 AM

(Chapter 66 Review)

Woo hoo! I love fights. Fred deserved what he got, though I wouldn't have minded the cop killing him. :music:

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

LOL. I loved that line (even though I wrote it): "Do I get to shoot you this time Hayes, or are you going to put the knife down."
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Feb 16 2011 11:37 PM

(Chapter 65 Review)

This is a doozie!

Fast paced, riveting and confrontational. It ends with Stef diffusing the situation between Brad
and J.P. in his famous style. I loved every word of it. Oh, and there is a reference to a little potential
kink as well that acts as a bridge between two different scenes. Neat!

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

Nothing like a little kink as a segue (SMILE)
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Feb 14 2011 06:32 PM

(Story Review)

I love that way you make the whole thing so real. It is refreshing to read something that makes homosexuality normal almost included as a textural conext to enhance the depth of a character or illuminate the connection between characters. Although I love to read the description sex action it is such an integral part of the story and character development it is not the focus. I would be just as engaged in these stories without them, although I may not stay up for 8 hours at a stretch reading a single book hahahaha. Good job and I hope to see many more stories from you in the future. P.S. I think that JP will appreciate Brad's creativity with Brian since JP would have had him killed outright or done it himself. He has a ruthless past!

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

It's kind of funny, but as a story goes on, the sex scenes usually get less fun to write, primarily because you've got a couple of guys, and you can only match them up in so many ways. Brad and Robbie are much more fun, because they can get into damn near anything.
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Feb 14 2011 05:43 PM

(Chapter 64 Review)

Loving the way you made for Elizabeth to get out of Alexandra's clutches. I am wondering how JP will feel when Brian probably gets offed, even though he has done it to several people through the years when they have hurt his family.

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

I think JP will understand if the punishment equals the crime.
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Feb 14 2011 08:07 AM

(Chapter 64 Review)

and so it begins... beautiful! can't wait for more...

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

Maybe.... ;-)
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Feb 13 2011 10:15 PM

(Chapter 63 Review)

I was expecting the calvery to arrive - not necessarily this quickly - but never did I imagine that the calvery would be none other than Lark. Too too much. lmao

I must admit Brad's plan to set up Brian is sheer poetry after what he tried to do. What I'm really concerned about is his (Brad's) relationship with JP. We'll see, I guess.

Excellent chapter, Mark!!

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

Ah, but with another 12 chapters, you realize that this cavalry charge is but a prelude, no?
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Feb 12 2011 01:04 PM

(Chapter 63 Review)

HAHAHAHA Absolutely amazing!!!!!!!!! Loved this chapter.... wanted it to keep on going too..and I am even more eager to see what Elizabeth comes up with and to kill off Brian as well... this karma thing is wonderful!

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

Elizabeth is going to be busy, but she has something else to take care of first.
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Feb 12 2011 12:23 AM

(Chapter 63 Review)

I read this chapter and must admit I found it riveting and nasty. Brad is a bit, but just a bit more vindictive than I thought. I always believed he could play hard ball, but his plans for Brian to take the blame for the leaked video, knowing the probable outcome is truly consistent with the adage: "Payback [revenge or vengance] is a dish best served cold." This is as coldly calculating payback as ever described. JP will be more than a little uncomfortable.

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

I think JP would be proud. How twisted is that?
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Feb 11 2011 11:40 PM

(Chapter 63 Review)

That was such a wicked chapter. I love every minute of it. I can't wait to see Alexandra and Brian buried literally and/or figuratively.

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

Thanks for the review! This kind of levels the playing field between Alexandra and Elizabeth.
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Feb 08 2011 07:04 PM

(Chapter 61 Review)

Sorry this is for ch62 but I realized after that you can only add one review and it doesn't let you edit it. Anyway, I had another idea... perhaps the threat of Brad acknowledging publicly who his father is would be enough to make her back off since it would ruin her in Washington. Someone like her would have lots of enemies just waiting to pounce and hasten her demise... maybe akll he has to do is show the first slight crack for the pariah to attack hahahahahahaha. Just another thought and BTW do I have to say how much I love this whole series... and all your others? hahaha

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

I'm glad you like it. You're pretty creative! I've actually got chapters through 72 penned out, and I've only got 2-3 more left to finish the story off.
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Feb 08 2011 06:53 PM

(Chapter 62 Review)

I really enjoyed this twist. I love where Brad and Robbie are right now. I wonder how Brad and/or Wade will get his mother out of the clutches of Alexandria. Perhaps her grandfather on her mother's side was a Nazi doctor war criminal.... I know you will be creative... or perhaps she has no skeletons and they beat her the old fashioned way - by getting the goods on or influencing the politicians. Perhaps Brad finds a copy of his father's wishes in that box of items and it gives him the right to sue his father's estate and get a big chunk of her assets.... possibly enough so that things start to fall apart with the bad dot com deals. Oh well... just thinking.... :)
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Feb 08 2011 03:58 AM

(Chapter 62 Review)

Talk about the proverbial monkey wrench! It seems that Alexandria's evil is limitless. Someone has got to find her skeletons, of which she probably has many.

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

If they exist, who do you think that someone would be?
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Feb 07 2011 11:27 PM

(Chapter 62 Review)

Love your work. I panicked on your other site when this story ended at Chapter 51. I searched until I found it here. I knew there had to more and you have not disappointed.

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

I'm so glad you found them! I suspect that when our sites our linked to the new system, it won't be a problem.
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Feb 06 2011 03:50 PM

(Story Review)

I've been reading the CAPs series forever and finally have decided to stop lurking for a bit and say how much I'm enjoying it. I love the characters, they're fun, over the top and real at the same time. The wedding was perfect and sentimental but Brad and Robbie deserve much goodness especially to make up for the madness you put them through in the earlier chapters of Millenium. :)

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

Pain and pleasure are more closely related than you may think! LOL. Thanks for coming out of the shadows and posting a review!
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Feb 06 2011 10:16 AM

(Chapter 61 Review)

There are not enough superlatives to describe this chapter! I really enjoyed it.

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

I'm glad you liked this one. I did too!
Tiger%s's Photo

Feb 04 2011 02:25 AM

(Chapter 61 Review)

Great chapter, Mark. It brought a smile to my face. :)

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

Thanks. This one was uber-romantic.
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Feb 03 2011 12:30 PM

(Chapter 60 Review)

Excellent dialogue in this chapter - the one liners you come up with, well they always crack me up. Steph's Walmart crack was particularly funny. Everytime Steph and Claire are in the same room, I know there's going to be fireworks.

Sometimes I think JP is just a bag of secrets and he's so miserly with them - he lets them out only when he perceives some danger approaching...he would make a great Secretary of State.

Super chapter, Mark!!

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

Thanks! Some people are more fun to write dialog for than others. At the top of my list: Stef and Tonto.
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Jan 31 2011 11:55 AM

(Chapter 60 Review)

Ch 60 Awesome! I loved the interaction between Brad and Isadore.I also really like how you show that Brad and Robbie are learning to interact on a different level. They've learned to reign in the first response and look at the situation before reacting. It's like they are learning how deal with each other's "adult" self.Great job Mark!

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

Thanks Ivy. That's how I see it too. I think if we were to back up and look at what happened, a lot of the initial problems seemed similar to what you would have expected from them as young adults. Now, they're more mature, and they appreciate each other more.
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Jan 27 2011 03:16 PM

(Chapter 59 Review)

Great to see a "new generation/branch of family" join then ongoing story. I'm in the process or re-reading CAP stories from the start just because I love the whole series so much.Thanks Mark!

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

I'm so glad you enjoy them! You'll find BeRad to be much smoother through the first 10 chapters or so due to re-edits, and the same is true with ManInMotion (first 5 chapters). Have to bring new characters so I have lots to work with in the future!
phallus%s's Photo

Jan 26 2011 10:19 PM

(Chapter 59 Review)

Loved this chapter!

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

Thanks! I thought this one was pretty romantic and sentimental.
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Jan 13 2011 02:16 PM

(Chapter 54 Review)

This is a good transition chapter. The last couple of chapters were quite heavy, emotionally speaking of course. This chapter was a lot more fun even with all the speeches.

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

Thanks!
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Jan 13 2011 01:44 AM

(Chapter 54 Review)

:worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:

One of the best chapters in this story.....

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

I figured it was time to bring in some new blood, and to launch them with a splash!
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Jan 08 2011 07:25 AM

(Chapter 52 Review)

Hah, nope your cherry was all mine man. :P Look at Be-Rad! lol

Anyway.... I always wondered when memories of his mother would came back to Brad and they did in vivid detail. On the flip side his view of his 'bio father' has changed considerably which is the positive to come out of this. With what Jordan gave him as well he at least has something physical as well as mental to remember him by.

Excellent as always Mark. :)
Tiger%s's Photo

Jan 06 2011 08:21 PM

(Chapter 52 Review)

That was a good chapter, very touching. I couldn't help but shed a tear or two.

View Post Reply from Mark Arbour (author)

This is my first review on this new system. I'm so glad you got my cherry, Tiger. ;-)