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Timmy's Journal - 28. To My Love for Valentine's Day

A poem for my Valentine - little on the risque side. Just saying.

For My Love

 

My clothes I shed, I am yours

Reaching for me, drawing me close

Upon your chest I lay my head

Your beating heart my precious song

 

Hands whisper over cooling skin

Fingers bring both pain and pleasure

Delicious gasps escape my mouth

Satisfaction lives in your eyes

 

My body arches for your lips

Surrendering to your power

You are minstrel, I am harp

Your boy, your precious property

 

I am your lover, your gift

To you I give all I am

The love that we share completes me

You are the holder of my heart

Thanks to all of you who read my poetry.
Copyright © 2017 Mikiesboy; All Rights Reserved.
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Wow... "Hands whisper over cooling skin," that is a five-word masterpiece.

 

This is an amazingly beautiful poem. It's breathless, and almost pulsates with love. Thank you for posting it.

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"You are minstrel, I am harp"...... such a beautiful poem... I hope you show it to Michael... cheers... Gary.... Happy Valentine's to you both...

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This surely one of the best Valentine's Day poems written. Your beating heart my precious song... you sing of closeness, of harmony between two souls, and I want to sing that song too... I am your lover, your gift... you make us all want to give to our loves, to those who complete us. Thank you for expressing so beautifully the music and melody of love in this poem.

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Stunningly beautiful. Wow just wow...that's all the words I've got after reading yours.
Okay, I just shed a tear. A happy tear of that you can be sure... :glomp:

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On 02/13/2016 01:18 PM, AC Benus said:

Wow... "Hands whisper over cooling skin," that is a five-word masterpiece.

 

This is an amazingly beautiful poem. It's breathless, and almost pulsates with love. Thank you for posting it.

Thank you AC, you're very kind. I appreciate your thoughtful comments and support.

 

tim

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On 02/13/2016 01:25 PM, Headstall said:

"You are minstrel, I am harp"...... such a beautiful poem... I hope you show it to Michael... cheers... Gary.... Happy Valentine's to you both...

Thank you Gary. Happy Valentines to you. Your comments are very kind and I appreciate them and your support very much.

 

tim

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On 02/13/2016 01:36 PM, Parker Owens said:

This surely one of the best Valentine's Day poems written. Your beating heart my precious song... you sing of closeness, of harmony between two souls, and I want to sing that song too... I am your lover, your gift... you make us all want to give to our loves, to those who complete us. Thank you for expressing so beautifully the music and melody of love in this poem.

Oh Parker, that's very kind of you to say... I'm glad it worked for you. I hope your Valentines is full of love.

 

tim

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On 02/13/2016 01:47 PM, Reader1810 said:

Stunningly beautiful. Wow just wow...that's all the words I've got after reading yours.

Okay, I just shed a tear. A happy tear of that you can be sure... :glomp:

Oh hugs Reader. I'm pleased this moved you. Thank you for reading and for your continuous and kind support of me and my writing. It means a lot to me.

 

tim

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Happy Valentines Day tim
A beautiful poem :heart::heart::heart:

 

You are minstrel, I am harp - does mean you like being plucked? :gikkle:
Sorry couldn't help myself :blushing: :lol:

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On 02/13/2016 06:48 PM, Bucket1 said:

Happy Valentines Day tim

A beautiful poem :heart::heart::heart:

 

You are minstrel, I am harp - does mean you like being plucked? :gikkle:

Sorry couldn't help myself :blushing: :lol:

B, lol, you're a bad man! I'm not going there with you! But thanks for reading and you interesting comments! You'll be happy to know I woke Michael with my snort of laughter!

Thanks again!

 

tim

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On 02/14/2016 12:25 AM, bignick said:

Michael is a lucky fellow. I'm sure he know that.

Thank you, Nick. He knows, but I'm lucky too. Thank you for reading this, I appreciate it very much.

 

tim xoxo

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An expression of love both physical and soulful ... the gentle caress of hands that whisper over cooling skin as the minstrel plays upon the harp a precious song ... the heartbeat gift of lovers.
A beautiful sharing of your feelings for Michael. A happy Valentine's to you both.

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On 02/14/2016 02:33 AM, dughlas said:

An expression of love both physical and soulful ... the gentle caress of hands that whisper over cooling skin as the minstrel plays upon the harp a precious song ... the heartbeat gift of lovers.

A beautiful sharing of your feelings for Michael. A happy Valentine's to you both.

Thank you dugh. I wanted to write something for my sweet man, something special. I appreciate your reading this and your poetic comments! They mean a lot.

 

tim

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Thank you for sharing this. Such a beautiful rendition of love, physical and emotional. I hope you can hold on to this feeling for a long, long time.

 

I guess we're both getting to know more about each other today... LOL

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On 02/14/2016 02:57 AM, Puppilull said:

Thank you for sharing this. Such a beautiful rendition of love, physical and emotional. I hope you can hold on to this feeling for a long, long time.

 

I guess we're both getting to know more about each other today... LOL

Hehe, I guess so! See you at the store! Thanks for your review, Pup. I appreciate it very much.

 

tim

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I know for sure,
for whom its been written.
I hope the feelings
of love
will stay with you
and the one who shares.

 

Nice poem Tim2. I loved it... :)

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Ah Tim, you never cease to amaze. This was simply beautiful.

 

'Your beating heart my precious song.'
'Hands whisper over cooling skin'
'You are minstrel, I am harp'

 

You captured your physical and emotional feelings of love with phrases so graceful and visual, it leaves no doubt..

 

Thank you for sharing yet another part of you.. Loved it!

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On 02/14/2016 06:26 AM, Defiance19 said:

Ah Tim, you never cease to amaze. This was simply beautiful.

 

'Your beating heart my precious song.'

'Hands whisper over cooling skin'

'You are minstrel, I am harp'

 

You captured your physical and emotional feelings of love with phrases so graceful and visual, it leaves no doubt..

 

Thank you for sharing yet another part of you.. Loved it!

Thank you Def! Guess i'm kinda in love. He's worth it. Thanks for reading and for your comments.

I appreciate them and your support of my work.

 

tim

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On 02/14/2016 06:04 AM, Emi GS said:

I know for sure,

for whom its been written.

I hope the feelings

of love

will stay with you

and the one who shares.

 

Nice poem Tim2. I loved it... :)

Emi! Thank you so much for reading this. I hope we are together for a long time too.

 

Thanks Emi for reading and for your comments. They mean a lot.

 

tim

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Hands whisper over cooling skin... I think that was one of my favourite images. Michael is a lucky man to be the recipient of such soul deep love. Another beautiful poem. tim. This one was very good for my romantic soul.

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6 hours ago, MichaelS36 said:

Beautiful. ..belongs in your D/s collection 

Wrote this before 'coming out' .. thanks for looking at all these MIchael xo

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