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6. Chapter 6...Lies Revealed Reviews

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charlieocho
Aug 02 2011 07:34 PM

(Chapter 6 Review)

Superbly written.  So sad for both of them :(.

View Post Reply from Naptowngirl (author)

Yeah, but what do you do...Nick could easly just let it go, but knowing him I don't think so.
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Conner
Jul 31 2011 10:41 AM

(Chapter 6 Review)

I'm glad that chapter is over.  :( Frankly, I couldn't have imagined the initial exchange going any other way.  They both feel betrayed; that's such a horrible emotion to bear.  It's always difficult to get past betrayal.

Very well done!   :2thumbs:

View Post Reply from Naptowngirl (author)

You're right Conner it's sad on both parts.  you can see both sides here.  Poor Lisa, she didn't ask for this...and Poor Nick, it was never his intention to hurt her.  So what was he to do... thanks...I'm gravating toward your comments so it does as I mentioned mean a lot that you take the time to let me know what you think. :)
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