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Predator Prey - 4. Broken

em>WARNING: This chapter contains scenes of forced, non-consensual sex. Please use appropriate caution in reading this chapter.

There was a party in full swing. It was Saturday night, of course there was a party. Unfortunately for him, he was tied up at the moment. Quite literally.

Ordinarily, beer flowed, weed glowed, and in the shadowed corners of the suite, certain other very lucrative transactions were accomplished more discreetly. Normally, he was the one in charge, but not this time. He'd been hosting parties like this for years, almost since he'd arrived at the university. He'd been adept at bringing people in, priming them with alcohol and munchies, and selling them his wares.

The crappy quality weed he'd practically given away, but the higher quality stuff he'd charged damn good money for. And when the thrill of high class Blue Dream paled, he had a very closely held supply of far stronger chemical diversions, all for sale, for a price. Nobody blinked at the price. Nobody on campus – least of all the laughable gang called Campus Security – gave a shit.

Nominally, he was a Business major. Certainly, he made plenty of deals. He knew all about supply chain and marketing and the power of social media. Who needed Business Management courses? His business model had made him plenty of money, piles of it, and let him sample as much of whatever it was he wanted, when he wanted it.

And often what he wanted was someone's ass.

Of course, in Marketing 101, they'd burbled on about loss leaders. Items one gives away as part of cost of enticing customers to buy, and buy frequently. He'd figure out loss leaders a long time ago. Party favors. Even supposedly straight guys will fuck anything when they’re high and horny. And they were always both.

By the fall of sophomore year, he'd learned how to break a boy in. He'd troll for freshmen; he searched out the younger ones, always a little nervous, innocent and unsure, full of the tension between curiosity and caution about themselves and their bodies. By mid-terms it was a well-oiled system: lure the boy in, fuck the surprised innocent senseless, watch the kid try to deal with the emotional wreckage the morning after. He'd be there to pick up the pieces, soothe each one with a meal, some anodyne words, and some chemical supplements, of course.

But he'd never sleep with one of his party boys more than once or twice. The first time was usually the last time. It was business.

For a month or so, the kid would sell his ass – hell, the kid would sell his soul, he made sure of that – to be a party favor in the second bedroom. By then, the regulars would be bored with the kid, or the boy would be so fried he couldn't function anymore. Some got clingy, some got demanding, some got really weird. It didn't matter: he'd tell the kid that it was over and it was time to move on in life.

How they managed that was not his problem.

He'd broken his no-boyfriend policy with only one person--a guy named Marc who he'd seduced in February of sophomore year. Marc was different. Marc had a soul and a conscience. He could bend Marc, but he never really broke the dirty blond with the lithe body. The only thing to do with a guy like that was to get him as high as possible for as long as possible. This he could do.

And Marc's body was exceptional. A skilled soccer player, Marc had beauty, agility, and strength, even when totally wasted. He'd wanted Marc right away and had him often. He still sometimes wished for another night with that one.

But then Marc went to pieces that May. One of the other party boys had wound up in the hospital after a spectacularly wild night. The kid had overindulged in some of the more powerful drugs offered to him, or maybe he'd developed an allergic reaction. The boy was lucky Marc had found him lying unconscious and naked in the main room; luckier still Marc still possessed enough wit and strength to get to the University Medical Center. The kid eventually recovered, but something happened to Marc that night. He walked out the hospital doors, but he could barely function.

Marc disappeared for a long while after that, though he'd heard through the grapevine Marc had tried to piece his life back together again. Later, he learned the former party boy was back at the University; he'd actually spotted Marc in the library, looking much more somber, in the company of an enchanting younger boy who sported long black waves of hair that hung to his shoulders.

He'd spent a whole afternoon dreaming – scheming – about how to have them both at once.

Not that any of this reminiscence did his fogged brain much good now. He was drifting in and out of consciousness, aware of the loud metallic music playing, dimly aware of how it irritated him. He vaguely grasped his helpless state, now splayed out face down on the bed, with hands and feet tied securely to each corner of the bed frame. He tried vainly to work out how or when he might be set free. His neck ached, especially.

The door burst open, and the music doubled in volume. Light spilled into the dimly lit room.

"Holy fuck," a voice giggled, "you weren't shitting me." There was plenty of party noise – lots of people here tonight, part of his brain objectively observed. Other voices nearby.

He heard the clink of a belt buckle and the rustle of pants dropping over the sounds of the party. He might have sensed crinkling noises. Someone had thoughtfully provided condoms and lube – for the customers' benefit, no doubt, not his. Then, pressure at the back door, and the simultaneous sigh of pleasure at penetration, and cry of pain at being pierced.

A high customer was rarely a considerate customer.

And there were more customers. Plenty of them. He lost count at fourteen. He'd come himself, not voluntarily, sometime around number nine. Or was it ten? Later, when he tried to remember, he couldn't be sure they all used the protection offered to them. Several forgot to use any lube.

Things got pretty confused and hazy in his mind. He remembered peals of raucous laughter. Someone held his head back and made him swallow something. Pills, maybe.

One thing he vaguely recalled, very, very late into the night, was a figure who muttered "This is some sick kind of shit," as a condom was applied to a hard dick. The man lay full length on top of him, wrapping strong arms around him as he was fucked deliberately, purposefully, but not violently, as some others had done.

But what really impressed him was that this last customer took the time to untie his aching limbs from the bedframe and set him free. He didn't have the energy or the strength to move, not even to look up. Everything hurt.

"Thank you," he managed to whisper.

"No problem," rasped the stranger. "Some sick shit," he muttered again as he made his way out.

With some freedom left to his limbs, he moved, excruciatingly slowly, into a more comfortable position on the mattress. His ass was on fire, aching with the night's abuse. Every joint throbbed with hurt. Despite that, he somehow fell into an exhausted slumber until the cold light of dawn showed through the window.

em>Thanks to Mikiesboy, Spike and Carlos for Beta-reading, and to Craftingmom for her editing, encouragement and support. Please leave a review. While this is a difficult chapter to digest, I still appreciate your remarks and comments. Many thanks.
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Strange sort of good Samaritan who fucks the object of his pity before doing his good deed. But, our anti-hero should be grateful for small mercies, I suppose.

 

A dark and disturbing look at the underbelly of university life.

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On 10/20/2016 11:20 PM, northie said:

Strange sort of good Samaritan who fucks the object of his pity before doing his good deed. But, our anti-hero should be grateful for small mercies, I suppose.

 

A dark and disturbing look at the underbelly of university life.

And yet most mid and large size universities have such dark sides; some places are merely darker than others. You are absolutely right in that our predator must be content for the small mercies shown to him.

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Again I have difficulties with "like".
In this story, unlike your others, I am relieved that the chapters are short. Enough to 'process'.
Broken - when he remembers one boy who got away, the one he wants again.
A business major - what a picture you paint of university life...
So he is used in the place where he had others used and used them himself for his own purposes. I do not believe in divine retribution but in some way I still expect stories to end in this fairy-tale ending: each gets what they deserve (naive, I know). But who would deserve being abused in such a callous, brutal fashion? I am wondering if he used protection in order to protect the boys he used...
Lots of strands to pursue now - with a tiny ray of hope at the end of your chapter: he is unbound, and yet he is unable to save himself - a travesty of 'hope'. I need to see how you let all that play out. Hope against hope that Ted will be out of the picture soon. Seems like he has achieved his object already...
Our central character seems to be almost without character, without personality, unless we count the feelings for Mark. Fitting then that he has no name yet (thanks to that hint to one fellow reviewer!). I can't help wondering how /when that non-person boy traficker is going to change into a human being.
Thank you for your compelling story, Parker.

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On 10/21/2016 03:17 AM, mayday said:

Again I have difficulties with "like".

In this story, unlike your others, I am relieved that the chapters are short. Enough to 'process'.

Broken - when he remembers one boy who got away, the one he wants again.

A business major - what a picture you paint of university life...

So he is used in the place where he had others used and used them himself for his own purposes. I do not believe in divine retribution but in some way I still expect stories to end in this fairy-tale ending: each gets what they deserve (naive, I know). But who would deserve being abused in such a callous, brutal fashion? I am wondering if he used protection in order to protect the boys he used...

Lots of strands to pursue now - with a tiny ray of hope at the end of your chapter: he is unbound, and yet he is unable to save himself - a travesty of 'hope'. I need to see how you let all that play out. Hope against hope that Ted will be out of the picture soon. Seems like he has achieved his object already...

Our central character seems to be almost without character, without personality, unless we count the feelings for Mark. Fitting then that he has no name yet (thanks to that hint to one fellow reviewer!). I can't help wondering how /when that non-person boy traficker is going to change into a human being.

Thank you for your compelling story, Parker.

You make a number of perceptive observations. Is this divine retribution, or a case of terrible probability? The predator will surely never be the same person again after this night; he will have a memory of it, and of the terrible pain. We have seen the deep darkness both in his current reality and as it existed in his own mind. What the morning holds will be another matter. As for some of the other ideas you raise, I can only ask you for more time and patience to see how the story unfolds. Many thanks for sticking with this story so far.

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Yeah I know it's taken me 4 chapters to actually leave a review. Parker, I've told you this a bunch before, but you are just such a talented writer. Re-reading this again, I still find this story so compelling. Just this chapter, where you add more history of "his" past misdeeds, and show that he truly isn't a good person. But at the same time, it's almost impossible not to feel sympathy for him. Oh sure it's karma, but does anyone really deserve this?

 

I'm so glad you're posting this, as it's such a departure from a lot of other stories here on GA, and it's really well done.

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On 10/21/2016 03:52 AM, spikey582 said:

Yeah I know it's taken me 4 chapters to actually leave a review. Parker, I've told you this a bunch before, but you are just such a talented writer. Re-reading this again, I still find this story so compelling. Just this chapter, where you add more history of "his" past misdeeds, and show that he truly isn't a good person. But at the same time, it's almost impossible not to feel sympathy for him. Oh sure it's karma, but does anyone really deserve this?

 

I'm so glad you're posting this, as it's such a departure from a lot of other stories here on GA, and it's really well done.

He isn't easy to like, is he? You raise the essential question - does anyone, even a predator like the one in this story - deserve such treatment? If we have honest answers, how hard will it be for us to live by them? I am glad you find this a compelling tale. I hope you will continue to find it so. Many, many thanks for your response and thoughts.

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As I'm reading this I'm reminded of the numerous recent reports of sexual assault on or near the UC Berkeley and Stanford campuses, the Stanford swimmer who only served 3 months in jail for raping an unconscious woman, and uncommon report on TV of a young man being raped on the campus of a community collage in the North Bay (I'm certain most cases of men being raped are not reported to authorities, and fewer still get reported on by the news media).

 

A few years ago, a transwoman was assaulted on a high school campus in my city. And Advocate magazine has reported that a record number of transwomen have been murdered in the US this year.

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Jesus H. Christ! I told you to write what you needed to, and I would support you, and I meant it... but this twisted me up. The man tied up in bed is an absolute piece of shit... callous, cruel, and undeserving of sympathy or consideration... but the act of the last abuser was essentially the only human gesture in this chapter, and that was after he used him. He recognized the sickness of it, but did it anyway. Dark indeed. Inky, blinding absence of light... I feel ill, but it is a terrific bit of work... forcing us/me out of our/my comfort zone. Why do I feel sympathy for such a bastard, who even as a captive, laying there, thought about re-destroying Marc... the only one he had an ounce of feeling? for. Like I said, Parker: Jesus H. Christ... you've stood me on my head... I must commend you... cheers... Gary....

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Well, has our predator-turned-prey learned his lesson yet?
What will he say to his roommate?
Will he be able to stay free, or is there more bad luck waiting for him?
Is his tormentor still in the apartment?
Will things just continue on as they have in the past?
Will we all get invitations to the next party?

 

Parker, Inquiring minds want to know!

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I am beginning to believe that the predator is an inherently immoral and vile person. He is captive as it were, and his thoughts have an almost boastful deliverance. like if he had the chance he would seek Marc out again. There's no remorse. That can't be normal.
Ted is not much better. Nor is the guy who admits how sick this is, and has his turn anyway. Oh, but he untied him....so yeah, thanks. But will he make a break for it or get caught?
I have to wonder about how the predator came into Ted's orbit. Was it the incident that broke Marc? Did Marc or the kid tell? Is this revenge.. I'm sure there are other party boys who broke too.

 

Pretty potent stuff Parker..

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Oh Parker,dude, you so got your brave on! This is so honest, so real, so we'll done. It shouldn't be soft or glossy. ..it's so so good.

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I know in the previous chapter I was actually feeling a teeny weeny bit sorry for our predator. Now that's gone. Yes, he's getting what he deserves. He takes innocent eighteen-year-old boys and breaks them -- gets them messed up on drugs, rapes them countless times, then acts as the 'hero' when he tries to calm them down the next morning. He's despicable. He's lucky the last guy showed a sliver of sympathy for him. I don't have any sympathy for him.

 

Defiance brought up a good question: does Marc know Ted? How did Ted know about the predator? Wait, did Ted know Redhead? Maybe Redhead ratted the predator out. How would Marc know Ted? Oohh, maybe Redhead knows Marc!

 

Oh, what a tangled web you do weave, Parker!! :P

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On 10/21/2016 07:44 AM, droughtquake said:

As I'm reading this I'm reminded of the numerous recent reports of sexual assault on or near the UC Berkeley and Stanford campuses, the Stanford swimmer who only served 3 months in jail for raping an unconscious woman, and uncommon report on TV of a young man being raped on the campus of a community collage in the North Bay (I'm certain most cases of men being raped are not reported to authorities, and fewer still get reported on by the news media).

 

A few years ago, a transwoman was assaulted on a high school campus in my city. And Advocate magazine has reported that a record number of transwomen have been murdered in the US this year.

The sort of thing described in this chapter can be seen as an amalgam of various stories published about college campuses over the years. Some universities are better than others at engendering healthy, supportive community life. But scenes like these do happen, and the few that get reported generally inspire incredulity until the facts come out.

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On 10/21/2016 09:34 AM, Headstall said:

Jesus H. Christ! I told you to write what you needed to, and I would support you, and I meant it... but this twisted me up. The man tied up in bed is an absolute piece of shit... callous, cruel, and undeserving of sympathy or consideration... but the act of the last abuser was essentially the only human gesture in this chapter, and that was after he used him. He recognized the sickness of it, but did it anyway. Dark indeed. Inky, blinding absence of light... I feel ill, but it is a terrific bit of work... forcing us/me out of our/my comfort zone. Why do I feel sympathy for such a bastard, who even as a captive, laying there, thought about re-destroying Marc... the only one he had an ounce of feeling? for. Like I said, Parker: Jesus H. Christ... you've stood me on my head... I must commend you... cheers... Gary....

Dear Gary, I hate to have turned your gut inside out with this very difficult tale. It is immensely hard to look at the predator with sympathy, but his situation seems to compel us to that. He has to live with his thoughts, live with his memories, and with himself. Don't commend me just yet, but I thank you for staying with the story thus far. And perhaps your gut will be able to rest more easily next week.

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On 10/21/2016 10:09 AM, skinnydragon said:

Well, has our predator-turned-prey learned his lesson yet?

What will he say to his roommate?

Will he be able to stay free, or is there more bad luck waiting for him?

Is his tormentor still in the apartment?

Will things just continue on as they have in the past?

Will we all get invitations to the next party?

 

Parker, Inquiring minds want to know!

Chapter Five will have a few answers for such minds. But it seems altogether likely that the predator-turned-prey will come out of this experience changed, as anyone would. You have certainly got it right - there are many, many loose ends, and not all of them can be tied up.

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On 10/21/2016 12:21 PM, Defiance19 said:

I am beginning to believe that the predator is an inherently immoral and vile person. He is captive as it were, and his thoughts have an almost boastful deliverance. like if he had the chance he would seek Marc out again. There's no remorse. That can't be normal.

Ted is not much better. Nor is the guy who admits how sick this is, and has his turn anyway. Oh, but he untied him....so yeah, thanks. But will he make a break for it or get caught?

I have to wonder about how the predator came into Ted's orbit. Was it the incident that broke Marc? Did Marc or the kid tell? Is this revenge.. I'm sure there are other party boys who broke too.

 

Pretty potent stuff Parker..

The darkness is pretty heavy in this chapter, very hard to see through, except for what happens right in front of the reader's eye. The predator has hurt others without much care - he has heart that appears to be made of stone, or at least it appears so. Under what circumstances does stone crack? Your questions about Ted, or others who fell prey to our predator, are well taken. I regret, I have no answer just now. But I thank you for peppering us all with perceptive thoughts, and for reading so far into this tale.

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On 10/21/2016 01:54 PM, Mikiesboy said:

Oh Parker,dude, you so got your brave on! This is so honest, so real, so we'll done. It shouldn't be soft or glossy. ..it's so so good.

Thank you Tim, for your words of encouragement. To soften or sugarcoat this would be a disservice to those whose pain in real life mirrors this chapter. But it was hard to write, and I dithered a long time about posting this. Again, my thanks for reading and for your support.

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On 10/21/2016 02:57 PM, Lisa said:

I know in the previous chapter I was actually feeling a teeny weeny bit sorry for our predator. Now that's gone. Yes, he's getting what he deserves. He takes innocent eighteen-year-old boys and breaks them -- gets them messed up on drugs, rapes them countless times, then acts as the 'hero' when he tries to calm them down the next morning. He's despicable. He's lucky the last guy showed a sliver of sympathy for him. I don't have any sympathy for him.

 

Defiance brought up a good question: does Marc know Ted? How did Ted know about the predator? Wait, did Ted know Redhead? Maybe Redhead ratted the predator out. How would Marc know Ted? Oohh, maybe Redhead knows Marc!

 

Oh, what a tangled web you do weave, Parker!! :P

It is very hard to feel sympathy for much of anyone in this tale, except for the broken ones left behind. You ask a long line of questions about connections, and as I said to Defiance, I have no satisfactory answer I can give you. Yet. I hope that although you find it a dark tale, it may be rewarding to read to its conclusion. Many, many thanks for your comments and response!

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*shudder* Our predator is one sick fuck. It's hard to feel sorry for him, knowing his 'business practices'. And what does it say about the stranger at the end who comments about how sick the situation is, but rapes him anyway. I know we're still at the beginning of this story... I can't even imagine where you are going to take us.

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On 10/24/2016 01:32 PM, Valkyrie said:

*shudder* Our predator is one sick fuck. It's hard to feel sorry for him, knowing his 'business practices'. And what does it say about the stranger at the end who comments about how sick the situation is, but rapes him anyway. I know we're still at the beginning of this story... I can't even imagine where you are going to take us.

Our predator is not a nice person. But is he redeemable? The last man to rape the predator doesn't give us much information about himself, or what he might know about the predator. 'Sick' has many meanings, I fear. But you're right in that the stranger pretty much has the last word on the previous four chapters. Many thanks for hanging on.

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Man. This is tough, no doubt about it. What was with the guy who muttered, 'this is some sick shit,' yet proceeded to penetrate our bound up badboy?
I agree with other reviewers that it is pretty hard to click on that 'Like' button. I am doing so for your craft, and not for your subject matter. But - it's a story. and a good one, a hard one, and a frightening one. What I am seeing is that everyone that marched into that bedroom, high, drunk, or sober, participated nonetheless.
That makes them all predators, doesn't it?
I guess more people have that nature inside them than anyone wants to admit.

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On 01/30/2017 09:08 AM, Geron Kees said:

Man. This is tough, no doubt about it. What was with the guy who muttered, 'this is some sick shit,' yet proceeded to penetrate our bound up badboy?

I agree with other reviewers that it is pretty hard to click on that 'Like' button. I am doing so for your craft, and not for your subject matter. But - it's a story. and a good one, a hard one, and a frightening one. What I am seeing is that everyone that marched into that bedroom, high, drunk, or sober, participated nonetheless.

That makes them all predators, doesn't it?

I guess more people have that nature inside them than anyone wants to admit.

'Some sick shit' comes from someone who was possibly half stoned, probably bemused, opportunistic, but also possessed of a scrap of active conscience. 'Like' is such a hard thing to ascribe to this chapter and the previous three. Yet this is a story that has actually been played out in the dark smoky Saturday nights on campuses here and there. And yes, I think your observation is spot on...they are all predators and carrion birds, each of them. Very well spoken. Many thanks for your encouraging words and comments.

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You created one scary monster of a person.  The drug induced reflection is disturbing.  The way he caught and destroyed people for profit is reprehensible.  The fact that he wanted to recapture Marc when he was putting his life back together along with the guy that Marc was with shows that there is no soul.  Part of me wants to think he deserved was he got during the party, but having been unwillingly tied up myself, I just can't.  He does deserve to be punished though.  I saw what some people thought about the last guy calling the scene "Sick".  I'm not overly convinced that he was saying it in a negative way.  Possibly like someone would call a tricked out car sick he might have been taking in the scene thinking it was hot.  I've heard similar comments in my background.  The fact that guy was last and untied the gang raped prey, he had to have been told to release him, at least in my mind, other why would care about releasing the party favor at the party he attended.

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You grasped the meaning of 'sick' that I had in mind. The last party goer, probably high, bemused by this party favor, takes the opportunity presented to him. Then, whether it was ordered or random chance, he frees the now thoroughly raped predator. If this scene failed to cause confused emotions in readers, then I failed utterly. Because you're right: even damaged, hurt, degraded...this is one dangerous person. 

19 hours ago, WolfM said:

You created one scary monster of a person.  The drug induced reflection is disturbing.  The way he caught and destroyed people for profit is reprehensible.  The fact that he wanted to recapture Marc when he was putting his life back together along with the guy that Marc was with shows that there is no sole.  Part of me wants to think he deserved was he got during the party, but having been unwillingly tied up myself, I just can't.  He does deserve to be punished though.  I saw what some people thought about the last guy calling the scene "Sick".  I'm not overly convinced that he was saying it in a negative way.  Possibly like someone would call a tricked out car sick he might have been taking in the scene thinking it was hot.  I've heard similar comments in my background.  The fact that guy was last and untied the gang raped prey, he had to have been told to release him, at least in my mind, other why would care about releasing the party favor at the party he attended.

 

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I still find it hard not to pity the ‘predator turned prey’ despite this chapter and before it.  And that felt uncomfortable. In fact this was the first time I actually read this chapter thoroughly. Previous reading was like scheming through quickly and wanted it to end immediately or just skipped the entire chapter.

I remembered expecting meself to actually like how the story goes and that he deserved what he got but that never happened. 


 

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