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Excerpt - Stave Three


AC Benus

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"Touch my robe."

 

Scrooge did as he was told, and held it fast.

 

Holly, mistletoe, red berries, ivy, turkeys, geese, game, poultry, brawn, meat, pigs, sausages, oysters, pies, puddings, fruit, and punch, all vanished instantly. So did the room, the fire, the ruddy glow, the hour of night, and they stood in the city streets on Christmas morning, where (for the weather was severe) the people made a rough, but brisk and not unpleasant kind of music, in scraping the snow from the pavement in front of their dwellings, and from the tops of their houses, whence it was mad delight to the boys to see it come plumping down into the road below, and splitting into artificial little snow-storms.

 

The house fronts looked black enough, and the windows blacker, contrasting with the smooth white sheet of snow upon the roofs, and with the dirtier snow upon the ground; which last deposit had been ploughed up in deep furrows by the heavy wheels of carts and wagons; furrows that crossed and recrossed each other hundreds of times where the great streets branched off, and made intricate channels, hard to trace in the thick yellow mud and icy water. The sky was gloomy, and the shortest streets were choked up with a dingy mist, half thawed, half frozen, whose heavier particles descended in shower of sooty atoms, as if all the chimneys in Great Britain had, by one consent, caught fire, and were blazing away to their dear hearts' content. There was nothing very cheerful in the climate or the town, and yet was there an air of cheerfulness abroad that the clearest summer air and brightest summer sun might have endeavoured to diffuse in vain.

 

For, the people who were shovelling away on the housetops were jovial and full of glee; calling out to one another from the parapets, and now and then exchanging a facetious snowball – better-natured missile far than many a wordy jest – laughing heartily if it went right and not less heartily if it went wrong. The poulterers' shops were still half open, and the fruiterers' were radiant in their glory. There were great, round, pot-bellied baskets of chestnuts, shaped like the waistcoats of jolly old gentlemen, lolling at the doors, and tumbling out into the street in their apoplectic opulence. There were ruddy, brown-faced, broad-girthed Spanish Friars, and winking from their shelves in wanton slyness at the girls as they went by, and glanced demurely at the hung-up mistletoe. There were pears and apples, clustered high in blooming pyramids; there were bunches of grapes, made, in the shopkeepers' benevolence to dangle from conspicuous hooks, that people's mouths might water gratis as they passed; there were piles of filberts, mossy and brown, recalling, in their fragrance, ancient walks among the woods, and pleasant shufflings ankle deep through withered leaves; there were Norfolk Biffin apples, squab and swarthy, setting off the yellow of the oranges and lemons, and, in the great compactness of their juicy persons, urgently entreating and beseeching to be carried home in paper bags and eaten after dinner. The very gold and silver fish, set forth among these choice fruits in a bowl, though members of a dull and stagnant-blooded race, appeared to know that there was something going on; and, to a fish, went gasping round and round their little world in slow and passionless excitement.

 

The Grocers'! oh the Grocers'! Nearly closed, with perhaps two shutters down, or one; but through those gaps such glimpses. It was not alone that the scales descending on the counter made a merry sound, or that the twine and roller parted company so briskly, or that the canisters were rattled up and down like juggling tricks, or even that the blended scents of tea and coffee were so grateful to the nose, or even that the raisins were so plentiful and rare, the almonds so extremely white, the sticks of cinnamon so long and straight, the other spices so delicious, the candied fruits so caked and spotted with molten sugar as to make the coldest lookers-on feel faint and subsequently bilious. Nor was it that the figs were moist and pulpy, or that the French plums blushed in modest tartness from their highly-decorated boxes, or that everything was good to eat and in its Christmas dress; but the customers were all so hurried and so eager in the hopeful promise of the day, that they tumbled up against each other at the door, clashing their wicker baskets wildly, and left their purchases upon the counter, and came running back to fetch them, and committed hundreds of the like mistakes, in the best humour possible; while the Grocer and his people were so frank and fresh that the polished hearts with which they fastened their aprons behind might have been their own, worn outside for general inspection, and for Christmas daws to peck at if they chose.

 

But soon the steeples called good people all, to church and chapel, and away they came, flocking through the streets in their best clothes, and with their gayest faces. And at the same time there emerged from scores of bye-streets, lanes, and nameless turnings, innumerable people, carrying their dinners to the bakers' shops. The sight of these poor revellers appeared to interest the Spirit very much, for he stood with Scrooge beside him in a baker's doorway, and taking off the covers as their bearers passed, sprinkled incense on their dinners from his torch. And it was a very uncommon kind of torch, for once or twice when there were angry words between some dinner-carriers who had jostled each other, he shed a few drops of water on them from it, and their good humour was restored directly. For they said, it was a shame to quarrel upon Christmas Day. And so it was. God love it, so it was.

 

In time the bells ceased, and the bakers were shut up; and yet there was a genial shadowing forth of all these dinners and the progress of their cooking, in the thawed blotch of wet above each baker's oven; where the pavement smoked as if its stones were cooking too.

 

"Is there a peculiar flavour in what you sprinkle from your torch?" asked Scrooge.

 

"There is. My own."

 

"Would it apply to any kind of dinner on this day?" asked Scrooge.

 

"To any kindly given. To a poor one most."

 

"Why to a poor one most?" asked Scrooge.

 

"Because it needs it most."

 

"Spirit," said Scrooge, after a moment's thought, "I wonder you, of all the beings in the many worlds about us, should desire to cramp these people's opportunities of innocent enjoyment."

 

"I!" cried the Spirit.

 

"You would deprive them of their means of dining every seventh day, often the only day on which they can be said to dine at all," said Scrooge. "Wouldn't you?"

 

"I!" cried the Spirit.

 

"You seek to close these places on the Seventh Day," said Scrooge. "And it comes to the same thing."

 

"I seek!" exclaimed the Spirit.

 

"Forgive me if I am wrong. It has been done in your name, or at least in that of your family," said Scrooge.

 

"There are some upon this earth of yours," returned the Spirit, "who lay claim to know us, and who do their deeds of passion, pride, ill-will, hatred, envy, bigotry, and selfishness in our name, who are as strange to us and all our kith and kin, as if they had never lived. Remember that, and charge their doings on themselves, not us."

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The Ghost of Christmas Present.

My Oxford Illustrated Dickens has an engraving of this Spirit on the page across the quoted text, that must have been an inspiration for the way the Spirit is portrayed in many movies made of the Carol.

But you are quite right to direct us to the source, for although some of those movies are quite good, they can't compete with the full rich language that Dickens used.

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My fav of the three spirits. He's so alive.

 

I remember when I found this book at a second hand place and I bought it. I think I was about 17 or so. I remembered seeing the film when I was a little kid. I was expecting that when I opened it but to me, it was so hard for me read and I put it down. But I tried again and made myself read it and see it and oh, what a world ... vivid and rich.. 

 

And the feeling and thought about those who have little, well that touched me then and still does... 

 

Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece of writing.. I'm gonna dig out my copy... 

 

tim   ........ outta likes as usual... :heart:

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The Ghost of Christmas Present.

My Oxford Illustrated Dickens has an engraving of this Spirit on the page across the quoted text, that must have been an inspiration for the way the Spirit is portrayed in many movies made of the Carol.

But you are quite right to direct us to the source, for although some of those movies are quite good, they can't compete with the full rich language that Dickens used.

Thanks, Peter. Dickens has a way of bringing scenes to life. I like the combination of dialogue and description in this excerpt. He balances them; even though there is more scene-painting, it sets up the delivery of the 'message' with perfect context. 

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My fav of the three spirits. He's so alive.

 

I remember when I found this book at a second hand place and I bought it. I think I was about 17 or so. I remembered seeing the film when I was a little kid. I was expecting that when I opened it but to me, it was so hard for me read and I put it down. But I tried again and made myself read it and see it and oh, what a world ... vivid and rich.. 

 

And the feeling and thought about those who have little, well that touched me then and still does... 

 

Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece of writing.. I'm gonna dig out my copy... 

 

tim   ........ outta likes as usual... :heart:

Tim, I always love to hear how books found their way to keep your light burning bright. I like this excerpt, for the message at the end is perfect.

 

I also love the image of boys having a rooftop snowball fight, and the fish who feel the excitement even though they have no idea why.

 

Love it love it love it. Thanks, as always  

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