Wow, strong! Love it!

oh my. such love, strength and wisdom.

Wow! You've captured the strength of your love and commitment to each other. Wonderful poem, Mike!

Powerful poem. I can feel the strength between you two, the respect for each other and most importantly the love.

For someone who just wanted to sneak here and there it seems you've been converted. It's nice to have you around.

Wonderful, inspiring, and loving. Very well written 

Sir, you masterfully captured the essence of your relationship with tim. It's simply amazing.  

2 hours ago, Lyssa said:

Wow, strong! Love it!

Thank you, Lyssa.

2 hours ago, mogwhy said:

oh my. such love, strength and wisdom.

Thank you moggy.

2 hours ago, Renee Stevens said:

Wow! You've captured the strength of your love and commitment to each other. Wonderful poem, Mike!

I appreciate you reading this Renee. 

2 hours ago, clochette said:

Powerful poem. I can feel the strength between you two, the respect for each other and most importantly the love.

For someone who just wanted to sneak here and there it seems you've been converted. It's nice to have you around.

I'm still just sneaking in, clo. Thank you for reading this and your welcome. 

2 hours ago, Caz Pedroso said:

Wonderful, inspiring, and loving. Very well written 

Thank you very much, Caz. 

1 hour ago, Drew Espinosa said:

Sir, you masterfully captured the essence of your relationship with tim. It's simply amazing.  

Thank you Drew. I appreciate it. 

1 hour ago, Mikiesboy said:

Michael. i'm proud to be yours, to kneel, to accept your gift, to bear them. Your poem shows our dynamic, us, beautifully. 

thank you, tim. you're a good boy.  xo

48 minutes ago, Reader1810 said:

That's a poem, I'm sure of it.

 

As for the love and pride that is conveyed in these words? Crystal clear...  

I'm glad this was clear . thank you for reading. 

A-ha! It was there all along, waiting to be expressed. You paint a very clear picture with your words, each one precisely chosen to illustrate a moment like so many other moments that you and your boy share: trust, discipline, obedience, love, pain which serves to strengthen your connection. A poem you did write, my friend. Carry on. 

10 minutes ago, MacGreg said:

A-ha! It was there all along, waiting to be expressed. You paint a very clear picture with your words, each one precisely chosen to illustrate a moment like so many other moments that you and your boy share: trust, discipline, obedience, love, pain which serves to strengthen your connection. A poem you did write, my friend. Carry on. 

This scene is replayed often, at the end of play.  To me he is at his most beautiful at this time, when he is tired, wanting only to rest, yet he holds this position until I release him. Thank you for your comments. Mac. 

Powerful words, they show the strength of your relationship, the love, the commitment.

Honest, unapologetic and above all loving. For a first poem that's quite the hattrick!

5 hours ago, glitteryantlers said:

Powerful words, they show the strength of your relationship, the love, the commitment.

Thank you.

3 hours ago, Puppilull said:

Honest, unapologetic and above all loving. For a first poem that's quite the hattrick!

Thank you. Definitely unapologetic.  Thank you for reading.

Beautiful Sir,

You capture the scene and connection beautifully. A moment that your boy is certainly flying in subspace... Absolute submission!

Three incredibly powerful lines in this:

you know to whom you belong...

...your strength a source of pride...

...your place is here, always.

I can see and feel the power of the connection between you and your beloved.

2 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

Three incredibly powerful lines in this:

 

you know to whom you belong...

...your strength a source of pride...

...your place is here, always.

 

I can see and feel the power of the connection between you and your beloved.

It's a very special connection. ..thank you.