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Sequels, Prequels and Spin-offs


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Have you ever completed a story that you were truly proud of writing, that got a standing ovation from your readers and fans, and became one of the shining gems in your body of work? If so, let me add to the giant round of applause and congratulate you on creating something truly special for everyone to absorb and keep close to their hearts for years to come. It's not an easy task, believe me. So take pride in the moment.

Sometimes the success of something that you've previously written, along with the rabid cravings of fans wishing that they had more to read, can lead you to a strong desire to continue on with the story that your muse once gave birth to. I mean, you know these characters like the back of your hand, right? You've lived with them long enough to build an entire world around their personal story and people reacted favorably to them. Creating another story with these same characters would be like revisiting an old friend, right? Can't go wrong with the idea of jumping back into the story to give the people more of what they want!

Well…that's not always the case.

There are some things that you've got to think about before returning to a story that has already been told. Sure, you have some advantages in place...but there are also some pitfalls involved. No matter how well a story does, no matter how beloved the characters are, we all have to be able to ask ourselves..."Does anything really need to be added to this?" And we have to be able to give ourselves an open and honest answer. Because, truth be told, if you add to a story that doesn't need adding to...not only can it come off as weak without depending on the original text...but it can actually end up ruining the power and the impact of its predecessor in a way where both get dragged down into the mud. Obviously, we don't want that.

So, today we're going to talk about sequels, prequels, and spinoffs! Something I definitely have dabbled in enough times to figure out some of the flaws and fortunes in the process! Hehehe!

Because 'trial and error' ROCKS! :P

Let's start by thinking about what these three expansions really mean in terms of your original story. When writing one of these extra ideas on your original project, it's important to keep in mind that you are trying to give the reader something NEW. Perhaps even unexpected. Sure, you want it to be familiar enough to draw them back into the world that they cherished so much from the original, but this should be a new angle, a new perspective...it provides information that could not have been provided in the first story. The last thing that you want to do is go back and repeat old information that the audience could have easily gotten in the first story without any more description needed. Otherwise, you're just telling the exact same story over again. The problem with that is the readers already know how the story ends. One of the big mistakes that many Star Wars fans site for the release of "Solo" in theaters dealt with that exact concept. No matter how dangerous the mission, or how risky the mission...nothing is going to happen to Han Solo or Chewbacca, because they obviously show up in later chapters. So putting them in mortal danger during a prequel kind of loses its effect. It goes from 'Can they get out of this???' to the much more mild question of, "What do they do to triumph and come out clean on the other side?" It's not a boring or unimportant question...but it doesn't have the same punch. These are the things that we, as writers, need to think about beforehand. The elements of each idea are slightly different from one another, so let's go into the difference between a sequel, a prequel, and a spinoff, in terms of the stories that you've written so far. I've done all three, and I've enjoyed them immensely, but I still have much to learn. Let me split them up and tell you what I've discovered so far...

Sequels

The very first question that a writer should ask themselves before attempting a sequel to a story that they've previously completed should be, "What is it about this story that was left unsaid?" When you finished your tale and wrapped it all up in a neat and tidy manner...what is it that is motivating you to keep going? It can't just be the readers asking for more. I mean, that's extremely flattering and all...but if you said everything that you had to say with your first story, and have nowhere else to go...then why write a sequel?

I totally understand that telling a story and giving it that 'happily ever after' ending is sweet, but it doesn't often work like that in real life. Hehehe, happily ever after? That's a pretty optimistic stance to take on the characters that you've built through multiple chapters of struggle and strife and had to fight to be together at all. I'm sure that they had a few other problems and conflicts in the future, some significant, some...not so much. But a life free of drama and obstacles from that point forward, in my opinion, is not only unrealistic, but it would be downright boring after a while. Hehehe! However, if you are looking to add a new chapter in your characters' lives and continue the story...there are some questions that need to be addressed in the planning stages.

What's changed since the end of the last story?

How have the characters grown since their happy or unhappy ending? And how will that affect their decisions in the future?

Is the threat of new challenges in this relationship enough to carry an entire story?

What will the impact be on the readers to follow these characters on their next big adventure? And will that impact be significant enough to tell that story and update your readers on what they're doing since the last story ended?

If you're iffy on that last question, I suggest you abort that plan immediately and go back to the drawing board. Don't retell the same story you did before. If you said what needed to be said, no matter how long or how short the story was, don't be tempted into continuing it unless you feel it's really necessary. Like I said, you might just end up sapping strength away from your first story by doing so.

Have you guys seen the new trailer for the "Halloween" movie reboot recently? Hehehe! Perfect example! It's basically saying, "Let's pretend that we had the original 1978 "Halloween" movie, and everything that took place after that NEVER happened! LOL! If that's not the definition of a true sequel, then I don't know what is! :P

I have one or two sequels in the works at the moment, and I am taking everything that I've written here in this topic into account. Believe me. I've put a lot of thought into it, and I want to make sure that I do it right. One of those stories is a hidden secret for now! :P But, I will tell you that a sequel for the story "Gone From Daylight: Nightfall" has been in the works for quite some time now. It was a story that I have wanted to continue since the original was finished, and it takes place a number of years after the first one. "GFD: Nightfall" is on the site and the "Blood Bank" for free, but the ebook version has been redone from scratch, and it is a MUCH better version of the story that I was trying to tell, in my opinion! Consider that the 'director's cut'! Feel free to check it out when you get a chance, and look for an explosive sequel in the near future, with much higher stakes and a different dynamic that I think will enhance the characters and the storyline as a whole!

Coming soon!

Prequels

Now, with prequels...you have to ask yourself some of the same questions as you do with sequels...but with a few slight changes in your perspective of it all. The most important, of course, being...'what story is it that I need to tell that couldn't have been (or hasn't been) explained in the original text?' If you're writing a prequel, then it is assumed that there are secrets and revelations that can explain and further demonstrate the thoughts and future actions of your main characters. The cool part about writing a prequel is that you get a chance to look at your original story, choose certain moments or character behaviors, and then go back in time to explain why those things took place, or why a character feels a certain way about themselves or why they reacted a certain way to a certain situation. It gives you the chance to say why a certain trinket might have some significance to your main character. Or why they have a particular phobia, or why a few situations might trigger a nasty response from them. Prequels give you an opportunity to go back and look at those first few dominoes that you set up before your main character became who they are. It can be a lot of fun! Especially when you get to draw from your original story and look at the questions and speculations that other readers had concerning the writing. Again, the goal is to answer questions without an answer. Otherwise, there's no reason to write it.

I've written a few prequels on the Shack, and they have always been projects that I made sure were necessary and enjoyable, as well as informative, adding another level of insight into what was previously going on with the characters that my readers had come to know and love. Stories like "Ryan's Heart" repackages the very first chapter of "New Kid In School", but from Ryan's point of view. Not only that, but it reaches back to events that happened before meeting his future sweetheart, Randy, for the first time. And I even got to play around with a few special cameos that fans of the original weren't expecting. Hehehe, which is also fun. But that's the whole point! Can you give your readers something new and involve them on a deeper level with a prequel? If not...don't write it. I know that it's fun to rewind the clock and add a bit more information, but it can backfire on you if you're not careful. You can end up spoiling the untold motivations of a character that was better off being 'mysterious'. Or you can end up giving away secrets to people who haven't read the original text yet. Which is why, even though I don't really give any big secrets away in the "Gone From Daylight" prequel, "Taryn's Song"...I always advise everyone to read "GFD" first! These are things to think about before you begin, and if you still think your characters can benefit with a bit of detailed backstory, then go for it! Again, just make sure that you have a legitimate reason for diving into the background of your original story. If you didn't feel the need to do so the first time...why do it now? You can give backstory on your characters in a few paragraphs if you feel it's important to the telling of your story. That can be done in the original. Only tackle a prequel if there are multiple unanswered questions about the actual origin of the characters that you're focusing on. Questions that need an entire story to explain and bring to light for your audience. If the material seems thin? Don't do it. Let your original stand on its own merit. I think a lot of stories work better that way.

Spinoffs

Now, as most of you guys know...I'm an 80's kid! Hehehe, I grew up with comic books, and those comics taught me everything that I know about storylines, character arcs, plot twists, triumph and tragedy, etc. I can't tell you how AWESOME it is to see those same comic book characters being brought to life in the movies, and watching those movies make billions of dollars at the box office every year! Because of that, crossovers and cinematic universes are now seen as the Holy Grail of blockbuster movies these days. But stories have always done that in the past, not just in comic books. There's an isolated story that may exist in one book, surrounding a few characters and their journey through life...but there's still a whole world out there beyond that. The idea behind an effective spinoff is taking the opportunity to tell your readers what was happening outside of your original story. You may be focused on one or two characters in the main story, but what else was happening at the same time? If your main character falls in love and gets obsessed with his new boyfriend...what is going on in his best friend's life? How does HE see this new relationship? What does the character's mother or father think? Maybe he has a brother or sister. How do things look from their perspective? The world doesn't revolve around one or two people in a single story. If you want to do a spinoff, then it's important to make sure that you have strong, three dimensional, characters that can carry that spinoff on their own, and that their perspective is a welcome change to what readers can easily get from the original story.

Nearly everything that I've written for the "GFD: Blood Bank" has been a spinoff that, in some small way, builds upon the world of vampires that exists in the original story. This is the peek behind the scenes for readers who enjoy the main series. This is what is going on before, after, and during, the story being told. It's assumed that this is all information that will be alluded to or mentioned later, and will have some impact on the main story. Spinoffs can be fun, as they let you explore different characters and flesh them out individually, while still having them be a part of the main project. I truly enjoy doing that. But it takes time. And you have to be sure that your focus is placed on a character that your readers want to know more about. One that is interesting enough to inspire readers to follow them on a journey of their own.

Anyway, either of these three exercises can be an enlightening experience, for both the writer and the readers alike. Just make sure that it's necessary. Don't just do it for the sake of doing it. Provide another level of effort, some new revelations, and maybe even a few big plot twists that further enhance the appeal of the original story. It's a lot of fun...just be careful. You've got a 50/50 chance of making a great addition to an already popular story, or possibly dulling the applause you got for a project that might have been better off being left alone.

I hope this helps out and gets you guys thinking of new ideas for your own projects! Take care! And I'll see ya next weekend! :D

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9 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

I've been asked to write one for another earlier story, which is fav of mine, but there is no story. Oh, I could write more, but that's all it would be, more. A serial, not a story.

This is why there are stories that I would like to write a sequel for, but I haven't: I can't come up with a story, that is to say, a start, middle, finish. The start is usually easy for a sequel, because you've got a starting point, but you also need the middle and finish to make it a story.

 

When I have written a sequel (which hasn't been often, though I'm currently on my fourth novel in a series that I never expected to take off in this way) I usually introduce new main characters as a way of bringing something new to the story. The familiar and loved characters still play a significant role, but the story at least partially revolves around the new characters, not the old.

 

The one prequel I wrote, for that same series, describes one particular scene from the original book from a different perspective, but I was very careful to avoid anything except minor spoilers as part of that prequel (it helps that the scene in question was in an early chapter of the original series). I have another prequel planned, to explain part of the motivation of one of the characters of the series, but again, it'll be written to avoid spoilers.

 

My Lilydale Leopard series didn't start out as a planned series, but I kept that as an option as I was writing. The original story was standalone, but I was always aware that I had an entire year of football ahead, so I wrote the first book accordingly. The third book came about because I realised I wasn't going to be able to finish the second book where I originally planned, so I brought it to a conclusion at an appropriate point, and then started on the third book to bring the story to a close at the original intended ending point, introducing a new character in the process to allow myself more writing material and more of a story. The fourth book is more of a spin-off, taking the action away from the core group of characters, and is again largely centred around a new character. A fifth book, returning to the core characters is planned....

 

Most of the above came about organically. I didn't plan on a series, but I allowed it evolve. At each step of the process, though, I asked the questions that Comicality said to ask. What is going on that will make a story? Where is the conflict/challenge? Is there going to be a satisfactory conclusion? Unless I had positive answers to those questions, I wasn't going to proceed. I have a long list of short stories that I would love to expand into a novel or novella, but I haven't because I haven't been able to come up with positive answers to those questions. Similarly, for sequels to my other novels. Without inspiration of how to write a unique new story, I can't write a sequel for those novels.

 

I like to reflect on movies when it comes to sequels. There are very few sequels that come up to the standard of the original movie, and those that succeed have done so by not repeating the story of the original. My favourite example is Short Circuit and it's sequel. The sequel doesn't repeat the same story, but focuses on a different character from the original, and builds something new as a consequence. That's my goal each time I contemplate a sequel: to create something new, not just more of the same. 

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The problem with that is the readers already know how the story ends. One of the big mistakes that many Star Wars fans site for the release of "Solo" in theaters dealt with that exact concept. No matter how dangerous the mission, or how risky the mission...nothing is going to happen to Han Solo or Chewbacca, because they obviously show up in later chapters.

 

This Star Wars fan is also going to cite the shoddy advertising, the weird ass release date and fans still hacked off about The Last Jedi for what happened with Solo which wasn't as bad as I thought it was going to be.  On the subject of Star Wars, I think The Empire Strikes back is an example of a kick ass sequel while the prequels are probably not.  :P

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37 minutes ago, CassieQ said:

The problem with that is the readers already know how the story ends. One of the big mistakes that many Star Wars fans site for the release of "Solo" in theaters dealt with that exact concept. No matter how dangerous the mission, or how risky the mission...nothing is going to happen to Han Solo or Chewbacca, because they obviously show up in later chapters.

 

This Star Wars fan is also going to cite the shoddy advertising, the weird ass release date and fans still hacked off about The Last Jedi for what happened with Solo which wasn't as bad as I thought it was going to be.  On the subject of Star Wars, I think The Empire Strikes back is an example of a kick ass sequel while the prequels are probably not.  :P

We watched Solo last night ... i agree with you Cassie. I was expected a hot mess, but it wasn't awful at all. Only had issue with the miracle at the end with Darth Maul. But otherwise i had fun watching it. Yeah prequels are not good.

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1 minute ago, Mikiesboy said:

We watched Solo last night ... i agree with you Cassie. I was expected a hot mess, but it wasn't awful at all. Only had issue with the miracle at the end with Darth Maul. But otherwise i had fun watching it. Yeah prequels are not good.

 

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Darth Maul kind of ruined the end of the movie for me, because I was pretty happy with it until then.  I got mad because I thought that they had gotten the continutiy wrong, so I went looking through some online forums when I got home and when I figured out what was going on, I wasn't happy about that either.  If you are going to go with a certain storyline, at least stick with the one used in the movies so far.  I have a huge issue with believing someone can survive being hacked in half, I don't care how powerful of a Sith Lord you are.  /rant ;)  

 

 

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Darth Maul kind of ruined the end of the movie for me, because I was pretty happy with it until then.  I got mad because I thought that they had gotten the continutiy wrong, so I went looking through some online forums when I got home and when I figured out what was going on, I wasn't happy about that either.  If you are going to go with a certain storyline, at least stick with the one used in the movies so far.  I have a huge issue with believing someone can survive being hacked in half, I don't care how powerful of a Sith Lord you are.  /rant ;)  

 

 

I think my Husband said that last night just about word for word. I agree with you. Lazy writing...doing anything to make things fit.  I wrote a similar thing on James Savik's blog yesterday.

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