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  2. Ezz0564

    Chapter 18

    It is a Documentary type movie, done by Shane on his life with & up to the time Tom's death. Especially after how Tom's family lied to him and treated him.
  3. CLJobe

    IOI Chapter 20

    I hope future chapters will let us the Australian Agents were all about. G'day
  4. Today
  5. Mrsgnomie

    Just a dance

    I make no promises and I have no idea how you’ll feel about the rest of the chapter. Hopefully it’s redeemable, I guess we’ll find out.
  6. Will Hawkins

    Chapter 12 - Ember

    “I don't care what the newspapers say about me as long as they spell my name right.” PT Barnum. The reactions to you story vary all over the place. Remember what Barnum said and keep up the good work you are doing.
  7. cognac69

    Chapter 5

    I definitely like it and like it more with each chapter.
  8. AusGlitterati

    August, 2018

    Hey thank you very much! That means a lot There is a lot more to go on all three of these plot threads! I hope its not so long before I update again. I really appreciate the continues support <3 thank you so much and have a lovely day!
  9. Rigby Taylor

    Day 1 - Arrival and Orientation

    Good dialogue, excellent pace, amusing conflicts... great stuff. Of course they will fall madly in lust later on, but the journey to get there is going to be fun. 😎
  10. ColumbusGuy

    Chapter 1

    I check out the Prompts regularly for ones I might use, and while that one was intriguing, I couldn't find a wayto use it that I was willing to put into one of my existing stories. You did a wonderful job with it, and it evoked just the emotions you intended.
  11. drpaladin

    IOI Chapter 2

    Given the context, I suspect Jeremy's wife had plans of her own. Mitchell is a very clever boy. He already knows how to manipulate an ofttimes mindless bureaucracy to achieve his ends. He also knows what he can get away with and yet is honest. Being absent from school isn't going to affect someone with his intelligence. He is a boy who has big things ahead in his life.
  12. Will Hawkins

    Chapter 9 - Brady

    Do you think there is a little passion between these two? This is a little bit more of a greeting than one might expect in the break room! Superior writing. You certainly know how to grab a reader's interest! Will H.
  13. chris191070

    Deck the Balls

    A fantastic story. Christmas has come early.
  14. Hellsheild

    Drinks and Oranges

    I need more of this. This is now my drug. I need another fix man!
  15. chris191070

    Chapter 8

    Great chapter
  16. 1brokNangel

    Chapter 12 - Sluppies or Sloppies

    What was Walker thinking when he told Larry that he smelled like a breeding she-wolf....that to me sounds like an insult.
  17. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 2

    i think we can all relate to parts of this story and to Don and Louis in some way. Thanks for the compliment. Writing this and posting it has been a humbling experience I've learned a lot, been stuck and frustrated but my friends here, they buoyed me up when i needed it. I'll never forget that. thanks xo
  18. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 3

    thanks very much .. Changes took nearly a year to write. There was a lot of learning to do before i felt i could write it properly. i wanted it to be right. thanks for noticing. xo
  19. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 4

    i think most people want her ... she is a mix of people ... but the story about being the faux gf and the rest is true. Not my family's story but it is true.
  20. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 6

    Thanks cognac! I appreciate you reading Changes and i appreciate your comments. Especially with your background. Thanks.
  21. Higster

    Chapter 7

    Key word almost right at the end! Hoping he finds out if he wants Aleksei or Nathan (looks like Aleksei) and gets with either one, although it will be complicated!
  22. Hellsheild

    Chapter 18

    If that it were me, he'd have a permanent limp lisp and have to regrow all his fingernails when I was finished. And I'd have a lovely necklace of keratin. I may paint them. But that's just my burning Italian blood in me talking. They really need to talk.
  23. Superpride

    Chapter One

    Thank you for the supportive comment! Working on the next chapter right now. 😀
  24. Twisted_Dreemz

    Chapter One: Dreams - Part 1

    Thanks very much for the comment and for checking out the story mollyhousemouse. I know all about those recurring nightmares. The town in my profile pick should say it all. I'm very glad you enjoyed and I hope you like what's to come just as much as this!
  25. Parker Owens

    Two Summer Sonnets

    Thank you for your comment on these. I feared obscuring any meaning with too much verbosity. Your thoughts reassure me I was on the right path. To hold fast until the dawn, to kick against time’s current to find the right soul... I hope those things came through.
  26. Higster

    Chapter 6

    Ah yes so he finally talks to Nathan and gets the answer he was wondering about for so long, but he seems really determined to get back with Aleksei/ not date other people. Some people in said situation feel like they're cheating because they love someone else; so they're put off by dating others. It's strange but it is how it is.
  27. Randy Wade

    Chapter 2

    Thank you.
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