Prisoner of the Past by Dolores Esteban

[Graeme]

Prisoner of the Past by Dolores Esteban

 

He had left his old life behind. At least, that was what he thought. He didn’t realize that his memories were just locked up in some dark chamber of his brain.

 

:nuke: :nuke: Spoilers Below!!! :nuke: :nuke:

[Rilbur]

Poor guy. I'm glad the SOB 'paid', but... the victims never really recover.

 

Poor, poor man. And to have his abuser show up 'again' like that... scary.

[Cia]

You showed how a person's mind can be the unwitting accomplice to an attacker. In the end, until we can face them both we remain vulnerable. Yet that never gets rid of the pain, it just makes it easier to bear. What I wonder about your story is why now? What really triggered that memory and was the ER doctor right and all the free time his mind had make it turn against him? I really liked this story, it kept me reading faster and faster until I finally got to find out was happening and what that steel door meant. Well done!

[Dolores Esteban]

Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked the story

 

 

[Nephylim]

I really liked this story. It was very dark. Memories are strong, very stron and something like that was bound to come to the surface eventually. Very insightful and chilling

[Kev de Cauchery]

I like the story, and I especially like the title of it. "Prisoner" of the past, huh?

 

Poor man though. Just sad for him.

 

 

[Dolores Esteban]

Thanks for reading and leaving a feedback. I'm happy you liked the story. I'm going to read your stories as soon as I have the time to. Christmas is near and I'm busy.

[Kev de Cauchery]

You're not obliged to do that, Dolores.

[Dolores Esteban]

But I want to.

[Toast]

Add me to the list of "I liked your story". And add very much. Well written and compelling and believable. Jeremy is a successful man with a past, a terrifying one. I would like to read more about him. Where does he go now? Oh, did I say excellent? I meant too.

[Dolores Esteban]

Oh, thank you, bugeye. I'm glad you liked the story.

[Johnathan Colourfield]

Dark. Sad. Beautiful.

 

The use of memory is just excellent

[Dolores Esteban]

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, Jonathan.

[C James]

That was very moving... I think the most telling part was at the end, when even the steely detective showed some feeling.

 

It also goes to show that, in so many cases, our daemons lie within.

[Dolores Esteban]

Thanks for reading and leaving your feedback, CJames. Glad you liked the story.