[Andr0gene] Confounded Part II

[Northern Dutch Guy]

Yes, native Dutch. TY for the compliment. All self taught.

Haha, I doubt I live next to you, or even in the same town, considering I have no couples (of our inclination) in my social circle. I live in the north as well, but I doubt it's the same town.

I won't wait that long, I promise!

 

Oooh, a fellow dutchy! lol!

 

Yes, a new story is in the works, this one is also being worked on (next chapter begun a while ago, just knitting it together), and then the idea of an actual part 3 to this. I'm not done yet.

 

A.

 

 

You too ...hey fellow Dutchy... LOL...

Keep on working.

I know I'm more the bossy type from your stories...

LOL...

No as big as you describe the dominating type.

I'm usually the smallest... LOL...

 

Ohh what does it matter.

I like your stories and...

waited for so long...

Does it help if I say...

 

I WANT IT NOW ?

 

LOL...

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I do not know if it helps speeding up new chapters...

But I would rather you go for quality than for speed...

 

Have fun writing and a lot of that soon... LOL

 

LHK

AndyG

[Andr0gene]

I am quite sorry, gang. Just when I was finished tying up loose ends of my dad's estate, and getting back into the groove of writing, my grandma died. It falls to me, to arrange everything, so you'll have to excuse the long wait. I have not forgotten it, but my mindspace is somewhere else entirely. I hope you understand. It'll be finished. Sometime.

 

A.

 

P.S. On the upside; there's no one left now, but my sister and mom, and the latter is not expected to go for some 20 years. In theory, I should be able to finish it between now and then. Yeah, yeah, bad joke. Still a joke, tho.

Edited January 21, 2016 by Andr0gene

[Reader1810]

I am quite sorry, gang. Just when I was finished tying up loose ends of my dad's estate, and getting back into the groove of writing, my grandma died. It falls to me, to arrange everything, so you'll have to excuse the long wait. I have not forgotten it, but my mindspace is somewhere else entirely. I hope you understand. It'll be finished. Sometime.

 

A.

 

P.S. On the upside; there's no one left now, but my sister and mom, and the latter is not expected to go for some 20 years. In theory, I should be able to finish it between now and then. Yeah, yeah, bad joke. Still a joke, tho.

 

 

I'm sorry that you've had some tough times lately. No worries on the story. Sure, we are all anxious to know what happens next, but you know what they say about anticipation, right?  Whenever the chapters come, they will be an unexpected treat.

 

As for the PS, a moment or two or four of silliness is never a bad thing.

Edited January 21, 2016 by Reader1810

[Timothy M.]

P.S. On the upside; there's no one left now, but my sister and mom, and the latter is not expected to go for some 20 years. In theory, I should be able to finish it between now and then. Yeah, yeah, bad joke. Still a joke, tho.

 

I'm expecting to be here for the next twenty years too, so I'll keep waiting and hoping.

 

Sorry to hear about the sad stuff.  Take care of yourself, and I hope you have some support from your sister and friends.

[Northern Dutch Guy]

Andr0gene, on 21 Jan 2016 - 12:09 PM, said:

P.S. On the upside; there's no one left now, but my sister and mom, and the latter is not expected to go for some 20 years. In theory, I should be able to finish it between now and then. Yeah, yeah, bad joke. Still a joke, tho.

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Yeah, yeah. Promises, promises...

Sorry to hear about the sad personal circomstances :hug:but I hope you will come over it and wish you find the your mood of writing again soon...

Edited February 8, 2016 by Northern Dutch Guy

[Andr0gene]

Too long have I been gone since the last updates on stories. Recently, I met someone on another part of the web, and we began talking. She liked writing and it reminded me. It took a while but the convo steered towards erotic stories, she asked me to read one of hers, and I did, then looked for mine, which by that time had all but disappeared from my computer. So I had to find this site again! Lol! So after two years, I return people. And I am writing. As I post this, Confounded II has been resumed (Kit and his dad are in the kitchen having a talk right now), and I do hope to finally conclude this story in the coming time!

Edited March 15, 2018 by Andr0gene

[Timothy M.]

  OMG, OMG you're back !!!

 

I'd almost given up hoping.. Welcome back, and give my thanks to the person who inspired you to return and take up writing again.  

I can't wait to see Kit and his lover and parents again. 

[Andr0gene]

Well, get ready. I just finished a chapter. 

[Reader1810]

21 minutes ago, Andr0gene said:

Well, get ready. I just finished a chapter. 

Got the notification. Thank you!  

[Andr0gene]

You're welcome! God, this story has been going for nigh on 7 years, lol! It's been lost, refound, lost again so many times...I keep rereading my own stories more than any others, it appears, just to get back into the minds of the characters, haha.

[Timothy M.]

If you want to make your readers more aware of a new chapter (those who don't follow the story), go back a few chapters and like all the comments they left. This will create notifications for them and alert them to activity on the story.

[Headstall]

13 hours ago, Timothy M. said:

  OMG, OMG you're back !!!

 

I'd almost given up hoping.. Welcome back, and give my thanks to the person who inspired you to return and take up writing again.  

I can't wait to see Kit and his lover and parents again. 

What Tim said.   

[Timothy M.]

5 hours ago, 1brokNangel said:

I love the house always wins J.J. is such a great character.

 

4 hours ago, Andr0gene said:

Yes, he is. I am actually thinking of a sequel.

 

Will you edit the ending when you do ? I seem to recall you were somewhat unhappy with it, and I didn't like the flight drama much either. But the rest of the story was delightful.

[Andr0gene]

4 hours ago, Timothy M. said:

 

 

Will you edit the ending when you do ? I seem to recall you were somewhat unhappy with it, and I didn't like the flight drama much either. But the rest of the story was delightful.

 

I did? You better re-read. 

[Timothy M.]

49 minutes ago, Andr0gene said:

 

I did? You better re-read. 

 

Hmmm, sorry, I guess you did rewrite, since I've commented on it.   I can't recall what the old version was like.

Spoiler

But I'm still not too keen on the flight abduction.

 

Edited March 17, 2018 by Timothy M.

[Andr0gene]

Well, well....hello there! 5 years later, I return and to my deep shame, I see that this story is still not finished. My sincere apologies. However, I have news:

- I am writing again. The joy I found in writing disappeared for a long while. A very long while, yes. It has returned, since about a month ago  and I spent much of my three-week vacation writing, after first re-reading this one. And then it just...began again. The joy in writing had returned and I wrote from dusk till dawn, about two weeks straight. An idea formed and resulted in hundreds of pages, to be exact. And I found I wasn't done with these characters. So:

- I'm planning to expand this story with two (!!!) more, making this a quartet series instead of a two-parter;

- The 4th is actually almost complete, and you're not going to see that one coming;

- The third is progressing nicely. Funny enough, the 4th was the third originally, planning to make this a trilogy instead, but then lots of story ideas and sidetracking occurred and I realized that it was too much for just one  ;

- One other story formed in my head while writing, went on that tangent for a while and it's about halfway.

So here I am again. Chapter 52 is coming soon enough, but not today. Just know that you can expect it in the near future. And I will not be using the pace I previously did. I want stories finished now, before I start posting. Take my time. I've done my George RR Martin stint. 

A.

[Andr0gene]

Alright, feeling I owe a lot to readers, here's a tiny excerpt from a future chapter, to see if I still got it (or not):

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“Picture this,” I said, “Sicily, 1947…”

“You are not Sophia from the Golden Girls, Tay…”

“Fine; Los Angeles, 2009. A young man, in the prime of his life, rushed to the hospital in a matter of life and death…”

“You had your appendix out!”

I ignored it. “Right behind, the love of his life, rushing along the highway without regard for his own peril. Stop-signs; ignored. Speed limits; broken. Tears were streaming in his eyes, misting his view; old people scattering everywhere as the hospital rose into view on top of the hill…he took a piece of the curb as they stopped at the ER exit, skid marks on the pavement, the smell of burned rubber in the air…”

“Probably had hot porn and the prophylactic not replaced,” he mumbled.

“Silence, child, I’m in the middle of a dramatization that might very well be coming true. Listen and learn.”

“Yes, Sensei.”

“Where was I, grasshopper?”

“Burned rubber.”

“Ah yes; just as the young man was rushed into hospital, the lover arrived, but it was too late…he had already disappeared behind doors of the operating theatre. No more goodbyes, no more ‘I love you’s’…he might lose him, and he never got to say goodbye. Their last words had been heated, still ringing in his ears. Oh! Oh! I’m gonna kill you if you don’t do it right now!”

I blinked and then glanced at Tom.

“That young man was me. The lover, as you might have guessed: Mitchell. Now imagine you being me, and Kit being Mitchell…you don’t want the last he hears to be the squeal of your tires as you speed out of the gate, and a hateful remark as a parting shot to remember you by, now do ya?”

“You’re nuts,” he said, tapping his forehead. “Certified.”

“Yeah, yeah, yeah; but you think about that one.”

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Edited July 19, 2023 by Andr0gene