le8mebee Posted July 23, 2012 Share Posted July 23, 2012 Omg omg omg omg....he's pregnant and suffering. Shit...*shudders*...i need some fresh air...great chapter.. le8mebee Link to comment
le8mebee Posted July 23, 2012 Share Posted July 23, 2012 (edited) :-( Edited July 23, 2012 by le8mebee Link to comment
alexandra36 Posted July 24, 2012 Share Posted July 24, 2012 Loved the story but then I didn't expect anything less from you, you're one of my fave writers from Lit so I'm happy to be here and show my support? I hope the story gets lighter and really hope that Devin will get rescued soon. Poor, poor Devin! Can't wait for the other chapters to come out! Really cool! Link to comment
tiger721boi Posted July 26, 2012 Share Posted July 26, 2012 This is a great story so far and I can't wait for more chapters soon Link to comment
Rob Colton Posted July 27, 2012 Author Share Posted July 27, 2012 Chapter 7 is now live! Thanks. Link to comment
rockyroads Posted July 28, 2012 Share Posted July 28, 2012 I've said it before but I'm going to say it again, I'm so glad you're posting a new story because it's been so long since Timber Pack. I've read all your stories so many times I could probably quote them. I'm lovin' your jump into the fantasy sci-fi world. Just and FYI and I don't know if you can fix it one it's posted but I think you might have a name error in Ch 7. I think that Bastian shoud be Dashel. "There was a flurry of activity behind us, but Martan and Bastian were in a hurry. Dashel grabbed my arm and began a brisk pace down the hallway. My heart pounded in my chest as I tried to keep up with him and Martan." Thank you for sharing your writing talent with us. Link to comment
alexandra36 Posted July 28, 2012 Share Posted July 28, 2012 Thank goodness, he got rescued! I was so worried for the little dude. Ok...I'm ready for the next one. Cheers! 2 Link to comment
Nasuada Posted August 3, 2012 Share Posted August 3, 2012 Awesome new chapter! I know it's cliche but I can't wait to see what happens next! 1 Link to comment
Jaxatar Posted August 3, 2012 Share Posted August 3, 2012 I get the feeling that this entire "incident" is increasingly looking like something that could end up in a war... I was kinda hopping that the "lab" took a plasma packet or twenty. Bloodthirstyness Aside = Im wondering what if any other changes will happen after the baby is "born" (i've ... reviewed the very intense intimate scenes several times) 1 Link to comment
Rob Colton Posted August 4, 2012 Author Share Posted August 4, 2012 Yes, Chapter 8 is now online. I'm so glad to know that people are enjoying the story. So thanks for reading everyone! 1 Link to comment
Afrodita79 Posted August 4, 2012 Share Posted August 4, 2012 LOVE It is one of the best chapters in this story... it will be to loong to wait one week for the next chapter... the intrige with the murder and the family complications....sounds like Bastian's mom it's going to be awesome... Wonder how long it's the pregnanci going to be? is it like humans, less or longer? the birth how is it going to be? how will he look like? I bet his hansom .... well just don't make us wait to long...love all your stories... Rob = of m/m stories 1 Link to comment
Quicksilver Posted August 5, 2012 Share Posted August 5, 2012 I really love the story, although I do feel like M-Preg is overused in the sci-fi genre. I understand why it's used I just think that an author of a gay sci-fi story shouldn't feel as if the story needs a pregnancy to be good. It seems like the pregnancy is going to be a really important part of the story rather than something random that doesn't contribute to the plot, so I guess the idea is growing on me. You are an amazing writer and I really am enjoying the story despite the growth of a spontaneous uterus. 1 Link to comment
strmy1959 Posted August 6, 2012 Share Posted August 6, 2012 love you stories. I have followed on LIT and Nifty ever since I found your stories. I have them over again. I love all the characters. I have to admit that I came to this site to read because the chapters on posted faster than on LIT. But I am hoping to find more wonderful stories from more authors as well. But yours are always my favorite. Please keep writing. 1 Link to comment
Jaxatar Posted August 8, 2012 Share Posted August 8, 2012 I keep wanting to see if "aggressive DNA" shows more effects upon (injection) repeated exposure? /blush Devin is definitely bio-forced into the female gender role NOW; but he isn't female, cognitive dissonance? how will that play out? What if the birth (by whatever means) results in Devons' injury or damage = only 1 child for them? Bastian is up front about his "chauvinism" but will Devin start to chafe / rebel against it once the "mommy-hormones" lighten up? How does inter-relationship conflict work amongst the Degan? How does it apply to this very unique sitch? Wonder what Callan will look like? How will the announcement of His birth be taken by Human & Degan at large? Will this result in a kind of race/mixing conflict? IE: the Degans-Evolve vs the Degonist Purity Faction? 1 Link to comment
Wishiwereone Posted August 11, 2012 Share Posted August 11, 2012 Hey Hey Hey where is chapter 9? 1 Link to comment
Rob Colton Posted August 11, 2012 Author Share Posted August 11, 2012 Chapter 9 is now available! 1 Link to comment
Quicksilver Posted August 12, 2012 Share Posted August 12, 2012 This story is really interesting, but I would really like some more description of the Degan planet itself. 1 Link to comment
Shax_Panda Posted August 17, 2012 Share Posted August 17, 2012 I started reading the first chapter and next thing I knew I was done with chapter nine... I love the way you write! I've read your other work and I wish you would publish them in a book so I could buy the book -or twenty- and make my private collection ... I really love your work, Rob! <3 1 Link to comment
Llina Posted August 18, 2012 Share Posted August 18, 2012 Love Robcub32's stories. This one is really good so far. About bastions name: the way Rob described him it almost sounds like his mother watched Beauty and Beast, cause bastion is almost a dead ringer for the beast. don't know if i'm right but it's just a thought. 2 Link to comment
Rob Colton Posted August 18, 2012 Author Share Posted August 18, 2012 Chapter 10 is now online! 2 Link to comment
Quicksilver Posted August 18, 2012 Share Posted August 18, 2012 This just keeps getting better. I'm really enjoying the description of the Degan culture and planet. 1 Link to comment
alexandra36 Posted August 18, 2012 Share Posted August 18, 2012 Was he poison or early labor??? Post faster, please! Loved it! 1 Link to comment
Nasuada Posted August 19, 2012 Share Posted August 19, 2012 Ahhhhh!!!! What happens!?!?!?!? Ps I really enjoyed this chapter... Link to comment
Dennisk Posted August 24, 2012 Share Posted August 24, 2012 its Friday. I am so waiting on news on Devin and Bastian.....god I hope Callan is ok!!!! Link to comment
Rob Colton Posted August 24, 2012 Author Share Posted August 24, 2012 Chapter 11 is now online! Link to comment
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