Site Administrator Valkyrie Posted February 26, 2015 Site Administrator Share Posted February 26, 2015 This story is very special to me. It has been around in some incarnation since I was in high school. Joshua first appeared in a short story I wrote when I was in ninth grade! He and Galen are my two all-time favorite characters of mine. Their story isn't an easy one. They encounter a lot of obstacles along the way and endure their share of tragedy. You are probably going to hate me during parts of this story, so be warned! lol I hope you come to love these guys as much as I do. I plan on posting a new chapter every Thursday. I am currently working on Chapter 11, so I'm hoping there won't be any delays in posting. [sharedmedia=stories:stories:4667] 1 Link to comment
Terry P Posted February 26, 2015 Share Posted February 26, 2015 Thanks for this story. I am enjoying so far. It'll be interesting to see how Josh and Galen get over this first big obstacle. Of course, at this point I have no idea what kind of relationship Josh has. Good work. 1 Link to comment
Site Administrator Valkyrie Posted February 26, 2015 Author Site Administrator Share Posted February 26, 2015 Thanks for reading and commenting. You'll learn more about Josh's boyfriend in upcoming chapters. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Link to comment
Site Administrator Valkyrie Posted March 5, 2015 Author Site Administrator Share Posted March 5, 2015 Chapter 3 has now been posted. Please enjoy and let me know how you like the story so far. https://www.gayauthors.org/story/valkyrie/thehollowhills/3 1 Link to comment
Site Administrator Valkyrie Posted March 12, 2015 Author Site Administrator Share Posted March 12, 2015 Here's Chapter 4: https://www.gayauthors.org/story/valkyrie/thehollowhills/4 1 Link to comment
Site Administrator Valkyrie Posted March 18, 2015 Author Site Administrator Share Posted March 18, 2015 Chapter 5 is now live. We get Josh's perspective and get to meet Roger. I'd love to hear your thoughts, either in a review or here in this forum. https://www.gayauthors.org/story/valkyrie/thehollowhills/5 Link to comment
Site Administrator Valkyrie Posted March 25, 2015 Author Site Administrator Share Posted March 25, 2015 In about 24 hours the "Roger Resolution" will be revealed. What are your predictions? Link to comment
LitLover Posted March 25, 2015 Share Posted March 25, 2015 My guess is that Josh is going to catch Roger in a very compromising position, forcing him to face the fact that Roger is a cheating jerk (there is stronger language in my head that I can't use ) 1 Link to comment
Puppilull Posted March 25, 2015 Share Posted March 25, 2015 (edited) Well, since Josh doesn't really leave the farm, I think Roger might find Josh in a not so boyfriendly position. I think his indifference to that situation will set Josh off. Sometimes, when you are in a bad relationship you end up trying to sabotage it just to get a reaction. In this case, however, I doubt Josh actually cares enough about Roger to do that. After 8 (!) years of this kind of relationship, neither party can be deemed to be all that interested. Seems more like convenience. Maybe Roger just finds himself someone new... Edited March 25, 2015 by Puppilull 1 Link to comment
LitLover Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Well, since Josh doesn't really leave the farm, I think Roger might find Josh in a not so boyfriendly position. I think his indifference to that situation will set Josh off. Sometimes, when you are in a bad relationship you end up trying to sabotage it just to get a reaction. Hmmm I hadn't thought of that. Josh really doesn't leave the farm. Maybe Roger catches Josh with Galen (even if its just a hug or something) and tries to make it a threesome? That would set Josh off....and affirm that Roger really doesn't give a crap about Josh or the relationship. 2 Link to comment
Site Administrator Valkyrie Posted March 26, 2015 Author Site Administrator Share Posted March 26, 2015 I love all the speculation. Chapter 6 is now posted. https://www.gayauthors.org/story/valkyrie/thehollowhills/6 Link to comment
AC Benus Posted April 5, 2015 Share Posted April 5, 2015 As I told Valkyrie in a PM, I've just finished Chapter 2, and I loved it. I've been having flashbacks of the way Galen raised his hands, latched onto Josh's face and pushed him against the barn. What a kiss! - Smoking hot and romantic at the same time. 1 Link to comment
AC Benus Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 (edited) Ok, I just read and reviewed chapter 4, and then read the other reviews. I suppose there are some hard feeling, and allegations of Galen being a 'home wrecker.' In every way I can see where these comments are coming from, but I see it slightly more complex than that. In chapter one you very skillfully paint a psychological portrait of Galen: injured, emotionally shut down, lonely, and wanting to hole-up and say f-you to the whole world. You also carefully give a ray of hope in the form of a caring family member, and Liam is an all-around nice guy. Into that mix, you add attraction – STRONG, powerful, overwhelming attraction. It's so strong that it would be unfair to say it sweeps Galen off of his feet, but more like kicks him down to the ground. In his fragile state of seeing himself by turns as a failure, or victim to his ex's cheating, he is pretty defenseless to Josh's allure. Therefore, I don’t blame him for kissing Josh even after he is told there's a partner in Josh's background. Galen is perhaps best understood as an anti-hero in the classic literary sense, but unlike Don Juan who actively pursues and beds conquests, Galen is a reluctant anti-hero. He is passive, and although his behavior has just as much potential to effect other people's lives as an active anti-hero, Galen is damaged goods and just coasting along. At least he tries to stay away from Josh, and if not for meddlesome folks like Liam, he would; he could. But, if those two are actually together, sparks will roar into flames and I do not think Galen has any evil malice to show us in his heart. Now, as to why Josh acts like this, I have no idea! You will need to give us more intel on our hunky mystery man with a short fuse (temper, that is – his other fuse I hope you will be describing very soon as well). Edited April 10, 2015 by AC Benus 2 Link to comment
Site Administrator Valkyrie Posted April 10, 2015 Author Site Administrator Share Posted April 10, 2015 Wow, AC. I love your characterization of Galen as the anti-hero. You also make a very good point about the fact that Galen did try to stay away, his cousin had other designs, though. Josh's history and motivations will be slowly revealed. Right now, he's a bit of a mystery and his actions reveal an individual with a lot of issues. The origin of those issues have yet to be revealed, though. Don't judge him too harshly. 1 Link to comment
Puppilull Posted April 11, 2015 Share Posted April 11, 2015 I think we all make our own choices, some good and some bad, regardless of other people's actions. We have to take responsibility for how we act towards other people. That said, I think it is important to remember that there are always reasons for people's actions and in my experience very few people set out to be hurtful or mean. Even when I worked criminal law, I only came across a handful of "bad" people. We are in short products of our past. So to call Galen a homewrecker is unfair, because that's not what he's doing. He tries to stay just friends, in spite of the very strong attraction. Josh won't let him. If anyone is to blame in this situation, it's Josh. Somehow though, I suspect there's a back story there too. Galen should however take a good look at himself and realise he's not really interested in Ethan. A little honesty there would be welcome. 1 Link to comment
Site Administrator Valkyrie Posted April 17, 2015 Author Site Administrator Share Posted April 17, 2015 (edited) I think we all make our own choices, some good and some bad, regardless of other people's actions. We have to take responsibility for how we act towards other people. That said, I think it is important to remember that there are always reasons for people's actions and in my experience very few people set out to be hurtful or mean. Even when I worked criminal law, I only came across a handful of "bad" people. We are in short products of our past. So to call Galen a homewrecker is unfair, because that's not what he's doing. He tries to stay just friends, in spite of the very strong attraction. Josh won't let him. If anyone is to blame in this situation, it's Josh. Somehow though, I suspect there's a back story there too. Galen should however take a good look at himself and realise he's not really interested in Ethan. A little honesty there would be welcome. Thank you for such a thoughtful post. You are right...none of these guys are bad people. Sure they have their flaws, but we all do. There is a backstory to Josh that will be coming up in a few chapters. I hope it will help everyone to understand him better. He's really not a bad guy. I'm pretty sure I'm caught up on all the reviews now. Thank you for being so patient while I was recovering! Edited April 17, 2015 by Valkyrie 1 Link to comment
Puppilull Posted April 17, 2015 Share Posted April 17, 2015 He, he... This week I've battled a UTI, a severe cold and a three day management training course. In short, I'm beat...I understand if you need to take a little time to catch up. I saw you updated and am looking forward to reading it when the kids are asleep. 1 Link to comment
Site Administrator Valkyrie Posted April 17, 2015 Author Site Administrator Share Posted April 17, 2015 That last sentence was actually meant to be a separate post and a generic "you" as in "my readers". For some reason, it got tacked onto the last post I made. I'm recovering from a bout with the flu, UTI, and dehydration that landed me in the ER for a night. It's taken over two weeks to recover and I'm still not quite 100%. I hope you feel better soon! Link to comment
Timothy M. Posted April 17, 2015 Share Posted April 17, 2015 I have to admit I gave up on the story the moment I found out that Josh was unable to act rationally and break up with his abusive and indifferent boyfriend in order to honestly pursue / explore the mutual attraction between him and Galen. But I may give it another chance once it's finished, since I liked Galen and his cousin and the story is well written. 1 Link to comment
Site Administrator Valkyrie Posted April 17, 2015 Author Site Administrator Share Posted April 17, 2015 I have to admit I gave up on the story the moment I found out that Josh was unable to act rationally and break up with his abusive and indifferent boyfriend in order to honestly pursue / explore the mutual attraction between him and Galen. But I may give it another chance once it's finished, since I liked Galen and his cousin and the story is well written. Thanks for your honesty, Tim. I hope you'll revisit it once it's finished. This isn't an easy story with a quick HEA. The characters all have their flaws, but please have faith that I will resolve them. Hopefully in a manner that the reader will find satisfying. 1 Link to comment
Site Administrator Valkyrie Posted April 30, 2015 Author Site Administrator Share Posted April 30, 2015 My posting schedule for The Hollow Hills will be slowing down for a little bit. Unfortunately, I'm all caught up on posting the chapters I have written. Or I will be once I get chapter 11 back from my editor. I am currently writing Chapter 12, but it may take a couple weeks for me to finish writing it and pass it through my writing team. I apologize for this. I had eight chapters written when I started posting and thought I'd be able to maintain a couple week cushion for posting, but not writing for a month has thrown that schedule off. I am going to do my best not to leave you all hanging, but it might be a couple weeks in between chapters now. Thanks so much for all the 'like's and reviews. The feedback really means a lot to me. 1 Link to comment
Cole Matthews Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 I'm so fascinated by this discussion. I made so many mistakes when I was younger in my life. I'm making mistakes now. I have yet to meet a person who didn't. In fact, while most people don't act reasonably when in love, they act rationally in what they perceive is their best interest. Such an illuminating interaction about what constitutes an interesting story and gives us a taste of honest emotion, is refreshing. What we think is right and see compared to how others feel is the enormous magic 8 ball of life. Shake it up! Val, keep going and don't look back. I'm not saying this with any extra insight except I think you want to say something important. Do it! 1 Link to comment
Site Administrator Valkyrie Posted May 1, 2015 Author Site Administrator Share Posted May 1, 2015 I'm so fascinated by this discussion. I made so many mistakes when I was younger in my life. I'm making mistakes now. I have yet to meet a person who didn't. In fact, while most people don't act reasonably when in love, they act rationally in what they perceive is their best interest. Such an illuminating interaction about what constitutes an interesting story and gives us a taste of honest emotion, is refreshing. What we think is right and see compared to how others feel is the enormous magic 8 ball of life. Shake it up! Val, keep going and don't look back. I'm not saying this with any extra insight except I think you want to say something important. Do it! Thanks so much, Cole. Your input has been invaluable with this story. Chapter 11 will be posted soon and I am diligently working on Chapter 12. I should have it to you soon! 1 Link to comment
Puppilull Posted May 3, 2015 Share Posted May 3, 2015 (edited) The ladt chapter really made me mad at Galen! Ethan is a sweet guy who's so in love with Galen and Galen is like "Whatever..." I just want to grab Gaken, shake him and yell in his ear "You'll break his heart!" The worst part is he's aware of this all along. It's ok to make a few bad decisions, but to lead someone on for this amount of time knowing you only think it's for "fun"... Building self esteem can be done without using other people. Maybe I come across totally inconsistent since I don't have any problems with Galen going after Josh. I guess it's because in that relationship, he's honest and in relation to Ethan he isn't. Edited May 3, 2015 by Puppilull 2 Link to comment
Site Administrator Valkyrie Posted May 4, 2015 Author Site Administrator Share Posted May 4, 2015 I don't think Galen is being nonchalant about his relationship with Ethan. Yes, there is a disparity between the feelings of the two men, but Galen is not setting out to intentionally hurt Ethan. He's trying and wants to make it work. I understand your frustration with him, though. It's easy for us to see the flaws in the relationship, but sometimes it's not so easy when you are the one in the relationship. Thanks for your comments. Link to comment
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