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1 hour ago, Parker Owens said:

A description of this evening at sunset... an odd threefold Haiku...

 

Dusk sky, pink and green,
bright backlit contrails streaking
the Jasperware light;
above the ridge line,
high clouds steal in from the west,
predicting fine rain;
grey morning drizzle
which drips from oaks and maples,
waking the still brook. 

this paints a beautiful picture Parker

thank you for sharing it!

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15 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

description of this evening at sunset... an odd threefold Haiku...

 

I particularly loved the 'Jasperware sky'. Wonderful, as always.  :)

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15 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

A description of this evening at sunset... an odd threefold Haiku...

 

Dusk sky, pink and green,
bright backlit contrails streaking
the Jasperware light;
above the ridge line,
high clouds steal in from the west,
predicting fine rain;
grey morning drizzle
which drips from oaks and maples,
waking the still brook. 

I love it.  I picture everything vividly.   There's a spring-like feel to the air, even though it's only January.  This captures that feeling for me.  :) 

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1 hour ago, Valkyrie said:

I love it.  I picture everything vividly.   There's a spring-like feel to the air, even though it's only January.  This captures that feeling for me.  :) 

 

January has so many faces; this was one of them. I was glad to be able to see it. 

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17 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

A description of this evening at sunset... an odd threefold Haiku...

 

Dusk sky, pink and green,
bright backlit contrails streaking
the Jasperware light;
above the ridge line,
high clouds steal in from the west,
predicting fine rain;
grey morning drizzle
which drips from oaks and maples,
waking the still brook. 

Don't know why, but I got a vision of a grungy urban twillight in a post-rain reveal... An indifferent sensation. Love it. 

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6 minutes ago, Defiance19 said:

Sometimes I come across these interesting articles, (to me at least) that I want to share hoping someone else will think it interesting too.  I love The Cranberries, so I was intrigued. 

Anyway.. 

 

https://electricliterature.com/watching-dolores-oriordan-dance-on-yeats-grave-580d977258b4

didn't know it was a thing... if you're a poet ....you are.... you sex doesn't matter as far as i'm concerned... your work does. 

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11 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

didn't know it was a thing... if you're a poet ....you are.... you sex doesn't matter as far as i'm concerned... your work does. 

Right?!! I thought it.. interesting. Lol 

 

 

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Just now, Mikiesboy said:

interesting but old poets wrote in a time when women were not citizens.. not equal ... and no things now are not perfect ... but live now.. not back then.. write your poetry and worry about now.. stop worrying about what happened years ago

Lol. I edit to add the gist of what you said about historical views, but it didn’t sound right. But, exactly 

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18 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

didn't know it was a thing... if you're a poet ....you are.... you sex doesn't matter as far as i'm concerned... your work does. 

Very interesting. I was not just mesmerized by her voice, but intellect and her stances. Someone not afraid. She wrote her first song at the age of 12.

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i was invited to write another poem with @MacGreg.  Doing these is a challenge. A theme is chosen and then we each can see only the last line of each other's previous stanza. So far each poem has been good and @MacGreg put them together with no edits.  The latest of these is here: Sins of Our Fathers.  I hope you'll read it and let us know what you think. 

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7 minutes ago, AC Benus said:

I've been typing up my old poetry again and feeling depressed. I had to skip ahead to when I was 21. This one I wrote soon after coming out. Hope you like it.

 

Something quieter in the brain

Speaks of something gentler in the heart,

Which shouts of something stronger in

The soul.

I know the answers not at all,

But now, I know what question to ask.

Something sweeter in the smile

Speaks of something kinder in the look

Which yells of something greater in

The soul.

 between you and Parker, this Saturday night is awash in memories.and all in a good ways. this one spoke directly to my heart. thank you AC!:wub:

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