Changes by Mikiesboy

[Mikiesboy]

K, chapter 8 is finished at about 4200 words ... it took a bit longer than i'd hoped however, it is done.  i am also trying to write for the anthology at the same time... that will not be a long piece.  it's something a little different i think.. a memoir of sorts... a night with the author.. we'll see how it works.  for that i blame and thank Delores...

[Former Member]

2 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

a night with the author..

The author… and Kohl?  ;–)

[Mikiesboy]

1 minute ago, droughtquake said:

The author… and Kohl?  ;–)

droughtquake you are a bad bad baaaaad man and i love you.   lol.. no not with kohl sadly ... the title is: The Death, Life and Suicide of Tommy Crouch ... no Kohl's...

[mollyhousemouse]

On 7/20/2018 at 9:16 AM, Mikiesboy said:

K, chapter 8 is finished at about 4200 words ... it took a bit longer than i'd hoped however, it is done.  

oh and it was good!!!

 

[Mikiesboy]

1 minute ago, mollyhousemouse said:

oh and it was good!!!

 

did you like it?   yay! 

[mollyhousemouse]

Just now, Mikiesboy said:

did you like it?   yay! 

you write strong emotions very well!
 

[Mikiesboy]

Just now, mollyhousemouse said:

you write strong emotions very well!
 

thanks honey ...

[Reader1810]

So looking forward to reading this! 

[Mikiesboy]

6 minutes ago, Reader1810 said:

So looking forward to reading this! 

hope it's worth the wait ...

[Reader1810]

1 minute ago, Mikiesboy said:

hope it's worth the wait ...

Fact: It will be. 

 

My only disappointment will be having to wait for the weekly instalments to post. 

[Mikiesboy]

Just a little taste from Changes Again ... Chapter 3    

 

“You’re never satisfied, are you?” I knelt to help him into the shorts.

“No, and well look at you down there, on your knees.” He sighed and pulled the shorts up. “Such a waste.”

I was laughing as I got to my feet. “Incorrigible is the word I’d use for you!”

I heard a car outside. I went to glance out the window. “The engaged couple are back with supplies. Let’s go and help baby.”

Don stopped me as I was going to walk by him. He tugged me down onto his lap. “Hey … I love you. You know that right?”

I reached up to touch his face. His amber eyes were so serious. “Yes, Don. I know that. I love you too.”

He held me tightly as I struggled to get up. “You … us, it means everything to me. I don’t take it for granted. You know that too?”

“Yes. Yes, I know that too.” My attempts to rise stopped as I realized this was important. I slipped my arms around him. I breathed him in, wanting him suddenly, this man I loved. Closing my eyes, I leaned into him.

We just held each other … until the doorbell rang.

“Shit! You better run down, Lous. I’ll get the elevator.”

I kissed his cheek, jumped up, trotted out the door and down the stairs. Arriving in the kitchen, I pulled open the back door.

“Sorry, we were upstairs.” I took a bag from each of them.

Robert carried more and deposited them on the table. Rena followed behind carrying a large cake box. She slid it carefully onto the kitchen island.

“Upstairs? Wait, I don’t want to know!” She laughed as she put her hand over her ears.

Donny rolled in at that moment. “We’d been out for a ride and needed a shower Mom. Geez, you’d think that all we do is have wild sex all the time.”

“Isn’t it brother dear?”

We all turned as Miriam, Doug and the munchkins arrived. There was much helloing and hugging.

As I unpacked and organized food there was a tug on my chinos. I looked down and smiled at the sweet upturned face of Millie. She was four years old now. “What’s up, buttercup?”

She held up her arms. I picked her up and she gave me a little kiss.

“Unc Louis,” she whispered. “Is this a birthday party?”

“No, honey it’s not. It is a party though.” I looked into her light blue eyes.

“Whose party then?”

“You know what? I’ll put you down and you can run and ask Grams. I bet she will tell you.”

The little blonde head nodded solemnly. “K, Unc Louis.”

 

There was happy chatter as we prepped to cook. Someone had mentioned champagne and I heard it being opened. Then Don was talking, and a glass was placed in my hand.

“All I can say is, Mom it’s about time you made an honest man out of Robert! Congratulations!”

We all raised our glasses and called out the same. Everyone sipped. The kids had ginger ale in a fancy plastic cup.

“Now!” called Don. “Let’s get this party started!”

 

[AC Benus]

Exiciting preview! 

[Mikiesboy]

32 minutes ago, AC Benus said:

Exiciting preview! 

thanks AC xo

[Defiance19]

I like that you started the ‘taste’ with, “You’re never satisfied...” because no, we (me) never are. Hehe. 

Looking forward to it, like yesterday, tim.. 

[Mikiesboy]

3 minutes ago, Defiance19 said:

I like that you started the ‘taste’ with, “You’re never satisfied...” because no, we (me) never are. Hehe. 

Looking forward to it, like yesterday, tim.. 

yes, Boss... i started chapter 10 this morning ...

[mollyhousemouse]

 so good

[Defiance19]

1 minute ago, mollyhousemouse said:

 so good

You’re no fun at all, molly.. 😛

[Kitt]

Lol  I know what it's like to be on Molly's side of the publishing button. Sometimes it's tough to keep the details quiet!

[Mikiesboy]

Chapter 12 ... she is done  ..

[Brayon]

5 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

Chapter 12 ... she is done  ..

Awesome!!! How many more chapters are you looking at?

[Mikiesboy]

1 minute ago, BHopper2 said:

Awesome!!! How many more chapters are you looking at?

two or three i think should do it

[mollyhousemouse]

52 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

Chapter 12 ... she is done  ..

happy dance!!!!!

[mollyhousemouse]

On 8/23/2018 at 6:32 PM, mollyhousemouse said:

happy dance!!!!!

yes, was a definite happy dance!

[Mikiesboy]

Down to the last few pages of chapter 13 .. 14 should be the last ... My dear editor asked me today when i'm going to start sending him chapters ... it will be soon ... very soon.

[Brayon]

5 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

Down to the last few pages of chapter 13 .. 14 should be the last ... My dear editor asked me today when i'm going to start sending him chapters ... it will be soon ... very soon.

Awesome!!