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  1. flesco

    Chapter 19

    A fitting and happy ending to this simply amazing story. Your characters were multi faceted with great depth. The story grabbed my attention from chapter one through the ending. There were plenty of twists and unexpected turns along the way. The emotions and dialogue were believable and heartfelt. I’ve laughed and cried, been very angry and extremely sad throughout the story. I’m really sorry to have this story end. 💧 I’ve loved these people and their story. Thank you so very much for creating such a great piece of literature. I look forward to the next story you will create! 😃❤️
  2. flesco

    Chapter 28

    Another great chapter Eric! I wish Makarovia were a real place, everyone I know would move there immediately!! The only downside is that I hate cold, snow and ice. It’s too bad we can’t just take over a territory and create a country where bullying, intolerance, hatred and assault wouldn’t be tolerated. In order for that to occur the new country would have to ban organized religion where the majority of intolerance and hatred is taught from the pulpit. Sad that they missed the meaning of the book they all purport to be quoting. Oops! Sorry, I’ll get back to this amazing story. I love ❤️ all of the characters you’ve created and I’m truly looking forward to the wedding. Thank you for another taste of a better world. Can’t wait for the next chapter! 😃
  3. Nick is my Hero as well! 😃❤️
  4. A truly outstanding chapter! You had me on an emotional roller coaster through out the chapter, you should by more stock in a tissue manufacturing company! 😂 I’m happy that Nick came through with non life threatening injuries, and that Noah, Billy and Maddie all came through with out injuries. It was really touching having Mrs C come to see Nick in the hospital. I’m angry with Hannah’s father for being in denial about his daughters mental illness. He’s directly responsible for his daughters death and should be held accountable for allowing access to firearms. Andrew should file suit and the D.A. should file criminal charges for making the gun available to someone with a mental disorder. Nick probably won’t like that Andrew’s going after her father, but he needs to hold the man accountable for his actions. Nick meeting Billy’s parents was also quite touching. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter of this amazing story! Thanks Geoff!!
  5. flesco

    Self-Fulfilling Prophecy

    I’m so sorry that Ky lost control, his fears of losing out to Dizzy pushed him over the edge. Sometimes the most confident and calm individuals are the most tightly wound. It’s ashamed that he’s pushed them all away, however, hopefully he will get his emotions under control and rejoin the group once he apologizes for his bad behavior. I’m still wary of Dizzy and his footloose way of life may be too much for Artie to integrate into his disorderd life. Adam still needs to give an explanation to Artie. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  6. flesco

    The Pink Elephant

    Outstanding chapter! This story just keeps getting better. Artie is definitely leaning towards Dizzy, which could create a serious problem between he and Ky, as well as Ky and Dizzy! This could be disastrous for this group of friends. I really hope that the relationship between Artie and Dizzy survives all of the impending turmoil. I’m afraid Ky will not take this well, and Charlotte will be stuck trying to keep the peace. Adam needs to come clean and clear the air between he and Artie. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  7. flesco

    Chapter 19

    Another great chapter! The father of Kyle asking for the boys to go and see him in jail is an interesting twist I didn’t see coming. The letter from the evil witch that’s his mother, contained pretty much what I expected from her. Great thinking by Mrs. C, in encouraging Adam to attend his fathers funeral with Troy and her driving him and waiting outside to support him, will instill in Adam the sense of family he has always longed for, in addition to allowing him to pay his respects and build more self confidence to face his mother and her “friends “ and prove to her that he’s stronger and more capable than she could possibly believe. He’ll most likely walk out of that funeral with his head held high. I’m looking forward to the meeting with Kyle to get an explanation of why he went along with the attack’s. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  8. flesco

    T.B.C.

    Another great chapter! You’re unraveling these complicated characters oh so slowly! The relationships between each and every one of them are also developing at a slow and steady pace! Yeah for Artie getting in Dizzy and Ky’s face about this competition and fighting over him. Dizzy could very well sweep Artie off his feet, but I don’t think he has it in him to be good for very long. Poor Ky isn’t even aware of the situation between them. Ky could be seriously hurt if Artie chooses Dizzy. This has disaster written all over it! Adam needs to come clean and clear the air about what happened within his family. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️
  9. flesco

    Mistakes

    Great chapter! Well there we have a little glimpse into Adam and an explanation of the relationship with Lindsay. I’m not liking the battles between Ky and Dizzy, but Charlotte put them in their place. Go Charlotte! Nice to meet Adam’s California family. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  10. flesco

    Waves

    I’m really loving this story and the complex characters that you are slowly revealing to us, Adam is definitely hiding something, and incest in fanatical families in Texas isn’t unheard of. It would explain the reason the town despises him, and why he’s so secretive about his life. I really like Ky and Dizzy both, each of them care for Artie in their own way. Dizzy is better at walking the line between friends and romantic rivals better than Ky. Charlotte has her work cut out for her, with getting Artie to realize that the past is just that, and that he’s now free to be who he wants to be without all of the religious fanaticism he’s put up with. I think she needs Artie as much as he needs her. We really do need to get a glimpse of who Adam really is. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ Thanks Ace!
  11. flesco

    Chapter 18

    Outstanding chapter! The interaction of Yoshi and Midori after their long separation was beautiful yet somber, Yoshi was reluctant to broach the political situation conversation to revel in their physical and emotional relationship. Midori finally got Yoshi to admit what he was holding onto which was heartbreak due to his counsel’s insistence on Midori ruling Fier. Once they got the situation cleared up between them, they were more relaxed and happy together. The Empresses visit and conversation with Midori was touching. Their kite flying afternoon was beautiful and during the investiture her calling Midori up on the dais beside Yoshi was amazing. I love this story and all of these characters. ❤️ I’ll truly miss them when this story ends. 💧 I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃
  12. flesco

    A Day In San Antonio, A Night In Heaven

    Great chapter Geoff! The trip to San Antonio and Six Flags Fiesta Texas brought back very fond memories of living there. The description of the river cruise dining experience was spot on. Hannah is certainly crazy and unstable. Her performance in the driveway was typical bullying behavior. The Dads handled the situation perfectly. The attack on the home was extreme and her father is the source of her problems and bullying behaviors. He had an opportunity to stop her before it went too far, but decided to use his money and high priced lawyers to circumvent the system. Now of course with this latest incident with a gun in school, she’s flushed her future and potentially her very life down the drain. I really dislike cliffhangers. Please don’t let anyone of these spectacular characters be injured by her. Hopefully there’s a resource officer or school police on duty who has the training to de-escalate the situation safely without any shots being fired. Dear old dad will be on the hook for not having secured his firearms securely. I’m looking forward to the next chapter!
  13. flesco

    Stonegarden

    Outstanding chapter! The toasters just got a taste of their own medicine. Hopefully the bishop is about to get his. I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  14. flesco

    Chapter 18

    Great chapter! I love how the GSA meeting was so successful, I’m inspired that there so many kids that agreed to join. I believe that they will be very supportive of this club and Troy and Adam. Things are looking up for this couple and town. This great chapter ended in a very sad but not unexpected way. Ma is a brainwashed religious fanatic and her true colors have finally come to light. Adam always rationalized that she didn’t help him out of fear of Pa. My belief is that Ma was probably always The driving force behind the beatings, since she’s the zealot. Pa went along to keep getting some. He should attend with his new family and as many of his new friends as possible along with police protection. She’ll get hers in the end when she’s trying to explain herself in the next life! I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  15. flesco

    Chapter 2

    Great chapter as always! You’re a great writer and have a tough life at work, every industry is short on staff in customer facing roles. The shortages in staffing are a direct result of a booming economy and customer service industry jobs being less desirable due to low wages and those entitlement issues you referred to. Even we managers have to decompress, or we burn out or look elsewhere for an easier way to make a living. I truly understand the “busy” season concept, where your alone time is severely limited. Just make certain that you take enough time for yourself, we’ll wait longer for new chapters, if we’re assured that you’ll keep writing these amazing stories! Everyone will agree! I’m looking forward to the next chapter at your convenience and healthy timeline! 😃❤️
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