This was a fabulous story. I love that though Toshi was "flawed" he was able to find love and acceptance. This was, in my opinion, what we all strive for in life i.e finding someone to love us regardless of the crap we've done in the past. You writing was great and the story line was well thought out and executed. Please write many many more.
I watched two such movies yesterday..back to back. They are The Notebook and Bridges of Madison County. I was a blubbering mess after the first and ten times worse after the second. What was I thinking?!? Hmm