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Parker Owens

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  1. Parker Owens

    Last Post Wins #46

    A onetime monarch cannot hold the crown without his being told; and I have not bestowed permission so shiny’s mine, that’s my decision. Mine.
  2. Parker Owens

    Dolphin Delivery

    Great idea: I like this scene.
  3. Parker Owens

    Last Post Wins #46

    Coffee Penguin’s heart excites, making up for sleepless nights; take a nap, oh Penguin dear, shiny’s safe with me, no fear. mine.
  4. Parker Owens

    Last Post Wins #46

    Penguins in the summer languish for the heat puts them in anguish, Bard, concerned at this conjunction, takes the crown without compunction. mine.
  5. Parker Owens

    Last Post Wins #46

    See the mighty raptor in the sky, circling in the heavens - wonder why; possibly his talons twitched and slipped, for with Bard the shiny is equipped. Mine.
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    Tomorrow, Everything Changes

    I will be thinking of you in the upheaval that is changing your world. I hope for things unexpectedly good and bright; I wish for peace and joy unlooked for; in your van you will carry my thoughts and encouragement.
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    The World is Not For Me

    I have no words but hugs to give you.
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    It's starting again

    I am deeply sorry you have been affected so much by someone you love who has this illness. It hurts so much; that comes through in every word you wrote. I send you my warmest hugs.
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    Last Post Wins #46

    A ‘gentleman’ says pi-boy Drew, but don’t look now, he’s fooling you; he knows his p’s and q’s hands down, but he forgot: I have the crown. Mine.
  10. Parker Owens

    Part Two – Union Everlasting

    Numbers 15 and 16 sang directly in my ear. How I wish I could write the modulation to minor and back again that plays in my head. So much is here to use as musical material. I am astounded at the way you pulled so many elements together from Whitman’s writings, making them into a coherent whole.
  11. Parker Owens

    Chapter 9 - Brady

    Well - nothing like a bit of excitement at work! But what was November really thinking? Doubt he was thinking at all. I can’t wait to see what he is feeling and how he is coping with his own actions.
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    Chapter 8 - Ember

    You wrote s party scene really well. I could have been in the restaurant. You also wrote a child’s part with great success - that’s really tricky. Loved this chapter.
  13. Parker Owens

    Chapter 7 - Ember

    Now it’s Ember who needs to wrap his mind around change. Will he continue to believe in what he sees and senses? It will he look for reasons to hate Brady for the past indefinitely?
  14. Parker Owens

    You Can Go Home Again

    And so you lead us deeper into the forest of secrets and mysteries. Mother may have had the land valued, but her efforts hardly went very far. How did Sam and his kin know what was going on? And what will Finn discover as the new resident? Love how this is developing.
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    New Members Welcome-Introduce Yourself!

    Welcome! It’s s great community here, for readers and writers alike. Lots of people here will support authors with questions or in need of a bit outside reflection. I’m very glad you’re here.
  16. Parker Owens

    Two Floral Odes

    I am in full agreement with @dughlas. These are wonderful sapphic studies of flowers. I can hear the buzzing of bees and see the colored sunshine on the petals.
  17. Parker Owens

    The Benefit of Silence

    These are wise words, in my opinion. I, too, will contemplate them.
  18. Parker Owens

    Chapter 2

    I again connected with these two, and wonder about where you are taking them, and us. I love how easily you slip seamlessly from present to memory, yet they are clearly identifiable. Beautiful.
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    Last Post Wins #46

    Daddy’s temper’s rather frayed, for the crown he has mislaid; worry not, oh Daddy dear, I have got the crown right here. Mine.
  20. Parker Owens

    Last Post Wins #46

    Now Daddy’s had the crown too long; it’s not a matter right or wrong, but rather just a simple one, his time is up and now it’s done. Mine.
  21. Parker Owens

    5 Letters

    THRUS(st) Too honest recollection unsettled Steven. STEVE
  22. Parker Owens

    On Friendship and Diversity

    Carlos, you made the world smile in this entry. How wonderful the reality that you describe is.
  23. Parker Owens

    Part One – First Flush/Doubt Separation

    I am just now getting to this. How perfectly marvelous this is. My head is a-reel with tunes and sounds of the stage. I think of Gottschalk or Joplin here and there, and some of Barber’s music elsewhere. Number 10 had me pondering musically most of all. But this is surely a wonder.
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