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JeffreyL

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About JeffreyL

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    Still figuring it out
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    Washington State
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    Baking, books, theater, travel.

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  1. JeffreyL

    Chapter 6

    There are times in a person's life when things irrevocably change. I think Jacob has been through two of them: his parents and his friends. It seems like big changes are coming. Thanks for more of this really good story.
  2. JeffreyL

    Chapter 1

    This was a pretty powerful monologue! Thank you for writing and sharing.
  3. JeffreyL

    Chapter 1

    You've piqued my curiosity, and generated lots of questions. I'll try to wait patiently for the next chapter. Thanks.
  4. JeffreyL

    Chapter 3

    From chapter two right on to chapter three, and now I am caught up. I am enjoying your characters and the plot, and the hints you give about what's to come. If this story wants to go to novel length, I say let it! Thanks.
  5. JeffreyL

    Chapter 2

    From chapter one right on to chapter two. Good character development, good reading, and lots of possibilities for what comes next. Most enjoyable! Thank you.
  6. JeffreyL

    Chapter 1

    I am a bit behind, but this is a most promising start. Your writing style is easy to read, and your character introductions are very interesting. I look forward to more. Thank you.
  7. JeffreyL

    Performance

    I just binged chapters one through seven. Let's see... a main character who is a smart, clever, young man, but who is not like most of his peers. Several supporting characters who help, or sometimes hinder, our "hero." Sometimes related, often not, and always with a clever name. Several characters expound on their philosophies of contemporary life as the story progresses. Hmmm. Must be a Rigby Taylor story. Hooray! Frankie is a great character in the tradition of many if your other main characters! I am enjoying his adventures, and can't wait to see where he goes from here! Thank you
  8. JeffreyL

    A New Life

    I look forward to it. And I am enjoying "MySon." Thanks again.
  9. JeffreyL

    A New Life

    This story was well written. The characters are interesting and appealing. As a short story it was great until the ending, which just kind of stopped. As the start if a longer story, it was great. From the comments I'm not certain if there is more or not. If you decide to write more, I will gladly read it. Thanks.
  10. JeffreyL

    A Phonecall From Jonathan

    A most enjoyable short story! Two interesting characters and a lot of possibilities for what happens next. Thanks.
  11. JeffreyL

    A Healthy Mind in a Healthy Body

    I really liked Asa, and I thought you created an interesting bunch of supporting characters. I enjoy your writing style, especially when the story is not too dark. This was fun, but ended too soon. Maybe you'll consider revisiting Asa and Mario sometime. Thanks for sharing this story.
  12. JeffreyL

    ATGB V

    Great chapter! Great characters! Great story! Thank you.
  13. JeffreyL

    Chapter 31

    Wow! A happy ending after all! This story was hard to read in spots, but I quickly grew to care about these characters. That made it necessary to continue reading to find out how they were doing. Thank you for sharing this story. Part of me is sad it had to end.
  14. JeffreyL

    Chapter 29

    What a moving chapter. I should be angry because you made me cry, but the dialogue was so well written and there seems to be a bit of hope for the boys, so I can't be mad. Thank you.
  15. JeffreyL

    Chapter 9

    I wish I could have given you a couple of hearts and a dozen thumbs ups for the first part of this story! I am so caught up in it! I see a couple of possibilities and can't decide which is true. I can't wait to start Johnny's story. Thank you!
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