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    Still figuring it out
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    Washington State
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    Baking, books, theater, travel.

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  1. JeffreyL

    Chapter 5

    You dialogue was right on in this chapter! Between Kyle and Steph, Kyle and Andy, the guys planning prom, the dads and guys, and Kyle and Jacob, each section was great! I am getting twitchy to find out the big event that changed Kyle's life. It must not happen yet. He has to start college and meet Steph first. Thanks for more good story.
  2. JeffreyL

    Chapter 12.2

    Finally! It took them long enough. 😉 Thanks for more good story.
  3. JeffreyL

    I Arrived a Week Early

    Hello Rigby! What fun to read a new story by you! Your characters were somewhat bizarre, as only you can write them. Dialogue and descriptions were great! Parts of the story may have been a bit convoluted, or maybe I just need to go back and read a bit more slowly. Thank you.
  4. JeffreyL

    Chapter 4

    I want to repeat what several others have said. Never apologize because you think your chapters are too long. I think your pacing is terrific! I also want to repeat myself. I love this story and the characters you've created! Thank you.
  5. JeffreyL

    Chapter 2

    This story is intriguing! I like your characters and dialogue. I am anxious to find out what caused the change in Kyle during college. I'm guessing adult Kyle going home will make him confront issues from his past. Can't wait for more! Thank you.
  6. JeffreyL

    Chapter 8

    Thanks for more of this good story! Milan is a great character, and Rory can be so good for him.
  7. JeffreyL

    Maverick - "Funnel Web"

    Thanks for the notes on the names at the end. I don't remember Mav being afraid of water. Is this the first we've heard this, or have I forgotten? I must say, once again, how much I am enjoying this story! Thanks.
  8. JeffreyL

    The New Beginning

    What a great story, and a perfect ending! Your writing was first rate throughout this story! Characters, dialogue, plot, and descriptions all blended together for a most enjoyable story! Thank you for sharing this.
  9. JeffreyL

    The Day After Yesterday

    I just found this story and have binged chapters one through six. I have to say I am really enjoying it! From your descriptions and dialogue I feel like I know your characters. Since I am about half way, I am certain the conflicts and confusion are not over yet. However, I am anxious to see what happens next! One of the good things about catching up is not having to wait for new chapters. 😁 Thanks.
  10. JeffreyL

    Chapter 1

    I enjoyed your very well written story. It was mostly sad, but liked the hopeful ending. Both Wyatt and Thomas were well drawn characters, and without an excess of words. Maybe with the principal's support, Wyatt will be able to stay at this school and be accepted. Thanks for sharing this.
  11. JeffreyL

    Chapter 6

    Great story with engaging characters! I love Milan and his family! I also love Rory! He's my kind of hero, and I like the way his friends look after him! I am curious to learn about his dad and other family he may have. Thanks.
  12. JeffreyL

    Chapter 6

    I must confess that your demon stories, while entertaining and cleverly written, were not my favorite of your stories. I don't know what it is about this one, but I may need to rethink my opinion. Su Yin and Zhihao are great characters! And I recognize names from your other stories, although it has been quite a while since I've read them. I am really enjoying this and look forward to more! Thanks.
  13. JeffreyL

    Chapter 1

    Obviously you were on hiatus taking lessons on how to write hot and horny sex between four guys!! 😉 I am happy to see you back with a new story. Thanks for this terrific beginning!
  14. JeffreyL

    Unfit for Consumption

    Thank you for sharing your sad, but beautiful words. So many of the people commenting have already spoken words from my thoughts. More hugs and good thoughts being sent your way.
  15. JeffreyL

    Chapter 4

    I am really enjoying Buddy's story! I was curious where this story is taking place, so I googled Lemei Rock. Imagine my surprise when I discovered it is in Washington State, not all that far from Battle Ground, where I live! Guess I need to explore my own "back yard." Thanks.
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