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    Travel, foodie, scuba diving, leisure cycling, plays, projects, etc. Also, "the company of clever, well-informed people who have a great deal of conversation and liberality of ideas."

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  1. Y0rite

    Chapter 1

    How cheeky! 😂
  2. Y0rite

    Chapter 12

    Now, I know we're all just bunch of romantics on here, but I wasn't even thinking about Miller & Zef. (And not just because of the vast age difference.) I figured the whole Miller sniffing Jed was about the stab wound and silver poisoning. Wasn't the rogue wolf in book one throwing other lycan off his trail by ingesting silver to change his scent which eventually made him even crazier? I figured that Miller was confused about Jed's smell being off because Jed was still recovering from the silver poisoning.
  3. Y0rite

    Timber Pack Chronicles

    Just goes to show that alpha has nothing to do with height. My dad is 5'9" but no one ever believes it because he's always the calm, confident alpha engineer that shows up and fixes literally anything and everything from budgets, to buildings, to moral.
  4. Y0rite

    Chapter 34

    😊 "Yeah. Beat that ass. Beat it like a piñata." LOL 🤣
  5. Y0rite

    Aquinas' Story

    I really enjoyed this piece! I almost didn't read it because it still reads "In process." For an older story, I worried it might have been abandoned. Yet, I'm drawn to stories with older characters. You reflected perfectly how the insecurities are often the hardest obstacle no matter what our age. ~chuckle~ I'm so glad I took the chance and found it wonderfully complete. 😊
  6. Y0rite

    Chapter 42 Believe

    Wow, I was sure that the picture took at the swim competition would be the vehicle that exposed him to Officer Ambrose, in a local paper on local sports or something. Then the whole 'walking up the driveway' maneuver. I'm biting my nails to see how the Stevensons handle helping him start to dig out from this mess of misunderstandings surrounding Andy's dad being killed and Stephan/Eric/Andy running. 😬
  7. Y0rite

    from Ch 98: Shimmering Reality

    Ice and frost are like a coating of diamond dust when the angle of the light is just so. 💜 😊
  8. Y0rite

    Chapter 11

    sent a PM instead
  9. Y0rite

    Chapter 6

    The biggest speed bumps in relationships is when the communication shuts down or fails. I just want to cry now.
  10. I think the line goes, "Hold on to sixteen as long as you can. Change is coming 'round real soon make us women and men." I think the boys are getting started early. Love the characters, and the thinking and circumstances are so real that I can't help but shudder at the storms of life that are coming for them.
  11. Y0rite

    It's All Coming Together

    I screamed! I come from a large military family, and I instantly knew what it meant. Now I get why you were spending so much time and detail on Ryan's dreams. Actually, it's just about Memorial Day in the US as I'm reading this, which is a huge deal in my family. Grandparents, uncles & aunts, cousins & close friends, fill our cars with buckets and buckets of flowers from our gardens, load up the kids and have a huge gathering at the cemetery. The retired generation leads us through the family gravesides and tells the stories of our families' lives and service to their country while we decorate with homegrown flowers. The huge cookout comes after, and the stories continue from every branch of service, and minor engagements through all the wars. Though we're told each year during Memorial and Veteran's Day, we couldn't imagine not hearing them again and reconnecting the family. You have such a gift for connecting us to your characters and the places they inhabit. I'm bursting with pride for Ryan, too, and want to brag about him to my family. ~chuckle~ I did go so far as to call and tell my daughter (who just enlisted in the Navy this last fall) about this wonderful story I'm reading. If you're going for realism, now the circus will start, yet Clayton's background and resources should help them navigate the storm to come for one of these medals. 😃
  12. Y0rite

    Back on Track

    Yes, a much more elegant solution, marine to marine. I could see Bubba being understanding of Clayton, too, as an agent that has facets to his diamond that need to be hidden from the common knowledge of others. You are a very fine writer, Rex.
  13. Y0rite

    What Have I Done?

    Rex, I love, love, love the work and research you put in for this chapter and the reveal! I love when an author teaches me something or leads me to something new. The History 101 from your previous chapter is amazing writing, But having been a part of that time, too, it didn't take me anywhere I hadn't been. Your name blend for Clayton, however, lead me to Virgil Exner and then Harley Earl, then the birth of the Corvette, (the 1968 model is a personal favorite,) and then more! I am positively giddy. High praise as well, for your depiction of "old money" and how differently the excessively rich thinking can be in comparison. Having dealt with the strangeness of it from my mother's side, I feel blessed that she chose a simpler life to pass on to my siblings and me. I agree I got the feeling early on that Clayton wasn't testing Ryan, but was taking note of his ethics not just regarding money, but with friendships, relationships, and life in general. Something my age and experience has led me to regard in my relationships these days. They say, “with age comes wisdom,” if we’re lucky. ~chuckle~ All I see here is another opportunity that could be shattered or missed by lack of communication. I think Ryan taking the time to cool down is good. I'm just concerned that if he doesn't keep processing this while it's fresh, it will harden his thinking and heart from talking it through with Clayton. Hope he seeks clarity from a friend. Now would be a good time to bring in Rex or Joe, I think. I can’t wait to read on to see how you resolved this conundrum. 😃
  14. Y0rite

    A Visitor. And, It's Time.

    Think you meant to type Benoit, right? Don't think anyone is hating on Ben, poor bugger. (Though I'm late to the game on this, and it probably doesn't matter. Regardless, I love reading the comments after every chapter. I'm learning a lot. =)
  15. Y0rite

    Chapter 12

    Ah, a balm for my soul! I love that you started right off with grandpa and Joel. You even managed to bring Koda into the picture. Plus, you didn't rush through it and let there be some bonding as a family caring for each other. My face almost broke, I smiled so big. Thank you! I needed that for the devout family person I can be, just like Joel. ~chuckle~ And then the beautiful growing closer through convalescence, shower sex, and the whining like a "pregnant woman" stage. LOL So real, so fun to read! @Timothy M. did not steer you wrong. Sometimes a smoother landing after the declaration is just what the reader needs to be able to accept the end of a tale. Though your assurances of a sequel has saved you much pleading and pitchforks… 🤣
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