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    A Friendly Wager

    Great chapter, loving the story
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    Enter the Sorcerer

    Great chapter. Loving the story and the various characters we are meeting. Esthor sounds cute. So Fendrel hates Rulf and wanted revenge on him, looking forward to finding out why.
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    Sunset

    We just need one in Hong Kong to make sure @lomax61 does as we all want and one in Denmark to make sure that @Timothy M. edits it as soon as he receives it. Then we will all be happy 😃
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    Sunset

    That’s not good let’s hope @lomax61 doesn’t get trigger happy 😃 and post it anyway
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    C.P.T.F

    A great short story covering a day in the life of Detective Michael Lingard. We see him dealing with various problems and an important decision that he has to make. Well worth a quick read.
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    Chapter 1

    Great story, I think that Mike made the right decision in accepting the promotion and being in charge of the new unit. Especially as you’ve allowed him to choose his own staff, he is a very career driven person. The only concern is the stress the last case put him under, will he be able to handle the extra pressure that his new position will put him under.
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    IOI Chapter 15

    Another fantastic chapter
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    Sunset

    They had the last one of those in Bali unless Kennedy comes to his senses and goes after Kieran.
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    Sunset

    I’m quite happy for @lomax61 to have them do a delicate dance for as many chapters as he want’s as long as they end up together.
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    Sunset

    Kennedy need’s to realise that if wants Kieran he is going to have to go after him, because Kieran won’t beg, it’s up to Kennedy to decide how much he loves him. Kieran has gained himself a new circle of friends, a fantastic job with Len all because of Kennedy. Lets hope that Kennedy sees sense and doesn’t let Kieran disappear out of his life. So the next chapter better have them getting back together.
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    Chapter 7

    Scott is an evil little prick and his Uncle Mr Olsteen is not much better. At least Bobby and Mark have there parents on there side as well as the simply adorable Aunt Janice.
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    IOI Chapter 14

    Another fantastic chapter.
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    Chapter 5

    What a beautiful ending to a fantastic story.
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    IOI Chapter 13

    Another fantastic chapter
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    Bali Highs & Lows

    What a chapter. So the Buisness end up merging. Kennedy going all cold on Kieran because he doesn’t what commitment. Kieran asking for a final three days of enjoyment in Bali and then saying he won’t contact Kennedy again as per contract. It can’t end like that they both need sense knocking into them, hopefully the girls can do that in three days. Kennedy and Kieran are perfect for each other, hopefully they will both see sense.
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    Cruel Moon

    Wow interesting start to the story. Looking forward to more. Esthor sounds cute.
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    IOI Chapter 12

    Another fantastic chapter
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    Chapter 20

    Amazing chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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    IOI Chapter 11

    Another fantastic chapter
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    Distress

    Wow great chapter. Hope Adam goes with Kaleo back to Poa to support him.
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    Chapter 27

    Wow what a chapter. Adam’s recovery is coming along nicely. The school incident sounds bad, I hope no one get’s hurt and that Troy is safe. I wonder if the gunman has anything to do with Adam’s Ma or the Priest. I hate cliffhangers, is it Friday yet.
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    IOI Chapter 10

    Another fantastic chapter
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    Kennedy Gay

    What a fantastic chapter. Kieran and Joey talking, they both have found there perfect match. Patrick punching Richmond’s lights out was just perfect. His apology to Kieran was long overdue. The Girls looked after Kieran in Kennedy’s absence. Now about Kennedy’s Buisness in LA not going to plan, we need an answer to this cliffhanger now.
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    Chapter 3

    Great story, it’s starting to get very interesting.
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    Chapter 6

    Aunt Janice is such a lovely lady, I just adore Bobby’s parents, the talk off his Dad showed how much he cares about Bobby. Mark and Bobby are right not to rush into a relationship.
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