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  1. Potterslashfan

    Chapter 23

    I think teenagers in real life put up with indecision and drama all the time. Its second nature for them!
  2. Potterslashfan

    Chapter 16

    Plus, if all he's done is suck him off, the risk of transmission is EXTREMELY low. Like struck by lightning low. But still, what a betrayal by his "friend"
  3. Potterslashfan

    Chapter 21

    Sam sure knows how to press buttons. That was incredibly hot! Good chapter.
  4. Potterslashfan

    Chapter 12 Epilogue

    Woops... My bad
  5. Potterslashfan

    Chapter 12 Epilogue

    I loved the proposal so much! "Jimmy just asked me to marry him" Funniest. Line. Ever.
  6. Potterslashfan

    ATGB IV

    You broke my heart with Ritchie clutching the teddy bear. I know you've hinted at tough times ahead for him, hopefully this doesn't help spin him out of control without being able to handle all the losses in his life.
  7. Potterslashfan

    Chapter 14

    Good chapter, and its always good to see the boys demonstrate their love for each other. BTW, what is Wednesday week? I've never heard the term before. I've just always heard next Wednesday (as opposed to this Wednesday)
  8. Potterslashfan

    Chapter 11 Missing Pieces

    One line I may have (allegedly) used on slightly inebriated straight boys is: "I've had sex with women, and it doesn't make me straight. Why would getting head from a dude make you gay?” Its true though. I have had encounters with vagino-americans a couple of times, but consider myself to be gay. You can have sex with people you're not attracted to, and experimentation does go both ways (so to say).
  9. Potterslashfan

    Chapter 11 Missing Pieces

    Hey Gary! Thanks for the update. I knew these two dunderheads would get their act together eventually. I do have to say that, for the big payoff scene, it felt kind of flat and formulaic. Almost like you had painted yourself into a corner in the previous chapter, and had to get them from beyond repair to happily ever after real quick. I think this conversation could have happened while they were still at his parents house, and the story would have turned out just as well. Maybe I'm spoiled by your writing, and the fact that there was no tension in the angst. I knew it was a matter of when, and not if, with these two. I hate to be a downer here, you deserve congratulations for a very entertaining story that has brought joy to my Mondays! Remember, opinions are like asshole's. Some are clean, succulent, and enticing... Others are stinky and full of πŸ’©. Thank you for sharing your story with us and I look forward to the epilogue! πŸ’‹ πŸ’‹ πŸ’‹
  10. Potterslashfan

    ATGB III

    I love the little details you put into the chapter, but at the same time I'm trying to remember who half the people are in these reunions. I know we talked earlier about how usually a full name and a quick description is usually enough to trigger recall, but with some of the more minor characters (Like Patrick and Tanix) maybe just a little more exposition might be helpful. As always I enjoy reading your story and keeping up with the boys!
  11. Potterslashfan

    Chapter 20

    Teenage hormones are hard enough to figure out in the best of circumstances. With these boys they are off the charts! I want to say Poor Carter, just like I want to say Poor Jackson. They are both so vulnerable right now. Good Chapter!
  12. Potterslashfan

    Chapter 10 It Is What It Is

    Wow. They're both right and their both wrong. Jimmys completely right that Drake will have a hard time with jealousy, but he's got to get credit for not allowing his initial thoughts to blow up and for trusting Jimmy. I'm glad Drake was honest at the end. Hopefully it will be enough. Good chapter!
  13. Potterslashfan

    Giving/Getting Criticism Part 1

    I sometimes leave a comment when leaving a story, but usually because either 1) I've been leaving comments/critiques as I read, and 2) its usually a story that has really bad grammar/continuity errors that could be fixed with a beta or editor which we would be an otherwise decent/good story, and announcing that I'm leaving and why, can be good feedback for an author. I try to use it as a form of critique or constructive criticism. If I'm just finding the story boring, then I agree its best to slip quietly into the night and move along. Thank you for an interesting topic. As always, I think the question that needs to be asked before leaving criticism is 'Why’? Why am I writing. Am I expressing an opinion just to sound like an expert, or do I feel that this feedback could truly help the author.
  14. Potterslashfan

    ATGB II

    Wonder what Cristina sees in him. It was interesting how the first things he knows (or remembers) about CJ is that he's gay and has gay parents. What a douche. Good chapter. Can't wait to get into the nuts and bolts of the wedding planning. Oh... And thanks for the glimpse of naked, showering Chipper! He's always been my wet dream of this series. πŸ’¦πŸ’¦
  15. Potterslashfan

    ATGB I

    Welcome back, Carlos! I didn't see the notification when chapter 1 posted, but I'm here now. I'm really surprised that the boss acted the way he did. Usually money is enough to make a businessman swallow his personal thoughts, but then no one ever accused Trumpians of being smart. There was one line that made me do a double take: Trey leaned over CJ and fisted Owen. β€œWhat’s up, Ozzie?” I think you mean he FISTBUMPED Owen. I think CJ would be pissed if he fisted Owen. Just sayin'
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