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  1. Danger18

    Chapter 24

    Again you have some problems on the early section of this chapter it looks like you just couldn't get it it it it correctly good luck
  2. Danger18

    Chapter 22

    This section has major problems with repeated phrases sentences in sections in the first third of the section I don't know what happen your editing up until now has been quite good just really fell apart . The storyline has now become almost incomprehensible does it make any sense I am truly disappointed
  3. Danger18

    Chapter 61

    For the first time ever I am caught up now I'm waiting for the next section I realize how much I appreciate all of your good writing, characters, the story lines, everything.I really appreciate your dedication in the writing and the way you provide feedback to the comments all of it thanks
  4. Danger18

    Chapter 50

    JJ is a very unhappy young man his attitude poisons everything around him. He such a taker not nice to himself not nice to anyone you have developed a wonderful character!
  5. Danger18

    Chapter 50-Final Chapter

    I think that many are selling Tiffany short complexity of pregnancy professional responsibility is very very demanding JJ is as always all full of drama so self-centered and often completely unreasonable. Once again you have created a wonderful story vibrate characters wonderful motivations and complexity thanks
  6. Danger18

    Chapter 8

    I have missed JP's voice as others have noted it was refreshing quite enjoyable like some I found wills InterVoice somewhat more difficult always follow and enjoy thanks thanks for a Nother wonderful chapter
  7. Danger18

    Chapter 16

    I keep wanting to hear JP make some comments about what he's reading about himself but that earlier age whether or not he remembers any of those stories those interactions those moments
  8. Danger18

    Chapter 48

    I always enjoy your writing clothes so nicely and you have such a gift to to understanding people it's just really nice thanks
  9. Danger18

    Chapter 2 Hunter and Mike

    I am confused Martha was the boys mother now the sudden she's in the story again I don't understand
  10. Danger18

    The Jock (Part One)

    You have a wonderful balance between story sex. The sense of joy and the happiness of your character is really thanks
  11. Danger18

    Vato y Acho

    You're making me look up all kinds of words I live in such a different life thanks wonderful writing.
  12. Danger18

    Chapter 4

    I am sorry that you have not continued the story I miss your writing your name gauging Arthur and you write very very well thanks
  13. Danger18

    Chapter 3

    Really well written makes me want to be a part story you are writing. Keep up the good work.
  14. Danger18

    Police Karaoke

    Really well written interesting turns and twists very very well done thank you
  15. Danger18

    Chapter 32

    First gofer needs to be gopher, You got it right the second time. You truly have a delightful story.
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