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Shepherd's Crook - 10. Chapter 10

Ethan watched from his rearview mirror as Tanner tumbled across the hard pavement. His blond head hit the ground followed by a tangle of arms and legs. Metal scrapping against asphalt split the night, grinding flesh and paint, forever unforgiving.

“How hard did you hit his bike?” Ethan asked, suddenly concerned when his friend didn’t try to get up. Slamming on the breaks, the car skidded to a stop in the middle of the road. Ethan and Amanda both turned and watched Tanner, still lying on the ground in a heap.

Silvery shadows from the moonlight cast an eerie glow over the limp body in the middle of the road.

“Mandy,” Ethan’s voice trembled, “I think you hurt him.”

A mixture of fear and anger flushed her face as they continued to watch him. “He’s probably just faking. You know how Tanner is. He’s waiting for us to get out so he can jump up and yell, ‘gotcha.’”

“No, I think you hurt him really bad!” Before she could stop him, Ethan threw the car into park and jumped out of the car.

Ethan raced over to where Tanner was laying. The closer he got, the more he could see Tanner twisting on the ground. His moans were ragged with desperate gasps for air. Blood dripped over his face, matting his blond hair to his forehead.

“Oh my god.” Ethan muttered, dropping to his knees, he watched Tanner struggle for each labored breath. “It’s okay…it’s going to be okay…” Ethan said over and over, trying to convince himself as much as to help keep Tanner calm.

“Amanda,” He shouted into the night, “Tanner’s hurt and he needs help--”

“Get up, Ethan!” Amanda demanded from behind him. Her voice was harsh and calculating as she waited for her boyfriend to obey her command.

Ignoring her, Ethan remained focused on his injured friend. “You hit him instead of the bike! We have to call someone,” Ethan cried.

“I mean it,” She said, giving Ethan a shove from behind that had him looking over his shoulder for the first time. The gun gleamed in the moonlight. She pointed it at his head before turning it back to Tanner.

Writhing in pain, Tanner gulped at the cool night air, trying to fill his heavy lungs. His scared blue eyes darted to Ethan. Tanner opened his mouth and tried to speak, but only gurgling sounds rattled his chest.

“He’s dying!” Ethan growled, still on his knees.

“He was going to get all of us in trouble…maybe even get us kicked out of school. How many colleges do you think are going to scout you or the twins once you’ve been expelled for cheating? Huh? What about Sunny or Bethany, do you think they’ll still be able to go to college

now? I don’t know about you, but life as a knocked-up cashier, making minimum wage at the Save-A-Lot on Main Street doesn’t sound very fucking appealing to me.”

Ethan fisted his fingers through his black hair while listening to Amanda’s twisted lies.

“He would have destroyed everything…and he still can. If we call someone, he’ll tell them that it was you that hit him. That’s what he wants, Ethan, can’t you see that? Tanner wants you out of the picture so he can have everything for himself. Your spot on the football team, your girlfriend, your life!”

She pulled Ethan reluctantly to his feet. His eyes nervously darted between her and Tanner’s broken body. Amanda’s eyes were hard and unremorseful. “Come on,” She shoved him back towards the car, “before someone sees us.”

“P-p-pleeease,” Tanner reached out to Ethan for help. His bloody fingers twitched as they stretched out towards his once best friend, but there was no use. Amanda led Ethan into the darkness and within moments, the only evidence that they were ever there was their taillights disappearing into the night.

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“So, did you like the Chinese restaurant?” Jonathan asked Gibby as they made their way back towards Shepherd’s Crook. The night was brighter than it had been since moving here. The harvest moon cast a silvery glimmer that bathed the chilly night in an unnaturally radiant light. The sky was always so difficult to see back in the city, but out here in the valley, the moon and the stars filled the country night.

“Meh, it was alright.” Gibby shrugged his shoulder rather indifferent while his eyes watched the trees pass by the window outside their SUV.

Jonathan smiled. The Golden Dragon had been Gibby’s favorite restaurant back home and when the guys at the lab told him about an authentic little place near the mall, he hoped it would make his son happy. “Just alright?”

Gibby nodded his head, “Yeah, it was okay.”

It wasn’t a commitment one way or the other, but Jonathan chuckled at his son. Admitting that it was, ‘okay’ was as close as he was going to get to an approval.

Two white cartons holding leftovers were tucked into a paper bag along with a few extra fortune cookies the waitress was kind enough to slip in. Gibby tapped his fingers against the outside of the rough paper bag to the tempo of the rock music playing on the radio. He’d had a good night. Shopping at the mall made him feel like a normal teenager again.

They chatted and listened to the radio as they headed home. Passing the school complex, Gibby’s eyes darted to the empty bicycle rack on top of the hill near the main entrance. It was silly to think that Tanner could still be there at this time of night, but thoughts of catching a glimpse of the boy had his pulse starting to race.

Rounding a bend in the road, still on the outskirt of town, Jonathan suddenly saw red and white flashing lights. He slowed down to get a better view of the emergency vehicles blocking the road up ahead. Officer Blackfeather recognized Jonathan and waved him down.

“Evening Officer,” Jonathan’s eyes peered towards the ambulance parked in front of the patrol car.

“Dr. Robinson,” The tall officer tipped his dark head to Jonathan, who was craning his neck trying to see what was going on. “Do you mind giving us a hand?” He politely asked, “There’s something…there’s something we need your help with.”

Jonathan’s brows rose at the way the officer carefully phrased his request. With Gibby sitting in the car beside him, the man probably didn’t want to say anything that would be too disturbing to a kid. Jonathan had seen him around town a couple of times and knew that he had kids of his own.

“Sure,” Jonathan said while unfastening his seatbelt. He didn’t have to tell Gibby to stay in the car. He gave his son a quick wink since he knew his son well enough to know that if a car accident sat on the other side of the emergency vehicles barricading the path, Gibby wouldn’t want to see it.

The officer leaned in closer as he and Jonathan made a path through the cars before disappearing behind the flashing lights.

“Do you know what happened?” The unexpected voice from the backseat startled Gibby. He let out a bloodcurdling scream and tossed the bag of leftovers into the air. Thank goodness it was packed tight or Chinese food would have gone everywhere.

“Jesus, Tanner!” Gibby shouted at his classmate, suddenly leaning forward between the front seats of the SUV. Embarrassed by his high-pitched girly scream, Gibby’s cheeks flushed red, mortified that the cutest guy in school had just scared the living daylights out of him.

“What are you doing here?” Glancing around the darkness, Gibby expected to see the rest of Tanner’s friends lurking outside in the cold, just dying to get some juicy information about the accident up ahead. He didn’t see any of them, but Gibby rolled his eyes anyways, sure that they had put Tanner up to finding out what all the activity was about.

“Well, did you see it or not? Where you here when it happened?” Tanner asked keeping his eyes focused on the flurry of emergency personnel scurrying around ahead of them.

“What, you think that just because my dad’s a doctor and they asked him to help out, that I’d know what’s going on? Seriously? You guys are pathetic! You can go back and tell your stupid friends that, too. Even if I did know something, I sure as hell wouldn’t tell them…especially, not that heinous bitch, Amanda Grady!”

Tanner frowned. The ambulance suddenly gave several long beeps as it started backing up. His face looked paler than usual compared to the gorgeous suntanned glow of his normal complexion, actually Tanner was white as a ghost tonight.

Gibby nibbled on his lower lip, maybe the thought of someone getting hurt had really freaked out Tanner. The guy didn’t seem like a douchebag like the rest of his friends and Gibby started to feel bad for yelling at him.

“Look, Tanner, what are you doing here anyways?” Gibby softened his tone.

Waiting for him to answer, the sirens on the ambulance started to chirp, signally that it was ready for departure. Several bystanders still milled around. By the shocked looks on their faces, Gibby could tell that whatever had happened here, it wasn’t good.

“I think they’re going to start letting traffic--” Gibby was interrupted by the driver’s door suddenly opening. The interior lights instantly turned on with the door handle, chasing away the shadows of the night.

“Who are you talking to?” Jonathan glanced towards Gibby’s hands expecting to see his cellphone turned on.

“I was talking to a kid from school…” As Gibby turned in his seat to point to Tanner sitting behind him, he noticed that the backseat was now empty. That was odd. Gibby didn’t hear the door open when Tanner left and now that he thought about it, staring up at the bright dome light, the interior lights hadn’t turned on when Tanner had gotten in the car either.

“…I guess he left.” An uneasy feeling washed over Gibby as Jonathan put the car in drive and headed towards home.

***

Gibby wasn’t surprised when Jonathan told him that he had to go to the hospital after dropping him off at home. Letting himself in, Gibby turned on the porch lights before heading to the kitchen to put the leftovers in the fridge. There was no telling how long his father was going to be, so Gibby didn’t bother with any of the other interior lights; instead, he just made his way upstairs to his bedroom.

Swimming in the therapy pool the other night stirred his longing for the water again, so he settled for the next best thing. Grabbing a box of Epsom salt out of the medicine cabinet, Gibby started to fill the tub with hot water before dumping a generous portion into the clear water.

The water made a sudden sizzling sound as the salt contacted the warm liquid, instantly dissolving the granules. Steam rose from the water coating the bathroom surfaces with a moist sheen.

Gibby set a towel and washcloth on the edge of the clawfoot tub. It was one of his few pleasures since moving here, he secretly loved his private bathroom. The antique feel with the exposed piping and black and white checkerboard tiles made the room one of his favorite.

Turning off the overhead lights and leaving on only the single chrome dome over the mirror above the sink, Gibby waited for the water to reach the drain.

“Aaaah” Gibby purred as the delicious sensation of the hot water caressed his skin. He sank lower until his chin was at water level. With just his toes and the top of his head poking out of the water, he closed his eyes, enjoying the wonderful feeling.

The salt eased the tension in his muscles and loosened the scar tissue covering his body. Humming softly to himself, Gibby lingered on the edge of dreamland.

“Did your dad find out what happened?” Tanner’s voice ripped Gibby out of sleep.

“What the fuck!” Gibby yelled as his eyes flashed open and he saw Tanner leaning against the bathroom doorframe. His arms were folded over his chest while he stood there watching Gibby in the tub.

Water gushed over the sides of the tub, splashing to the floor with a crash when Gibby jumped out of the tub. Trembling, Gibby’s mind raced. “What are you doing here?” He demanded. Did he forget to lock the front door? Is that how Tanner had gotten into their house?

Effects of the soothing warm water while fantasizing about sexy guys on the school’s football team, one handsome blond guy in particular, had Gibby sporting a thick boner. Tanner’s blue eyes dipped lower over Gibby’s body and then grinned at his state of arousal. Embarrassed by Tanner watching him, Gibby snatched the towel from the edge of the tub and pressed it against his groin.

“Shit, Tanner!” Gibby growled as he stomped across the wet floor, angry and ready to confront the teenage boy. “I want you to get the fuck out of my house, right now!”

“Wait,” Tanner held up his hands, trying to stop Gibby, who continued stalking towards him. Rushing forward, Gibby wouldn’t listen to Tanner, even after their bodies collided. Icy chills blasted through Gibby’s chest when he passed through Tanner’s body.

“Oh my god,” Gibby gasped as he spun around on his heels, turning back to face Tanner still standing in the middle of the doorway in a shimmery white mist.

Tanner’s body pulsed for a moment before returning to a solid form. His blond hair made a golden halo around his head. Tanner stepped closer to Gibby giving him a weak smile he said, “I think I’m dead.”

I wrote this story as a screenplay a few years ago. I’m not sure if you all know or not, but my mom died 2 months ago and while reading her journals, I found some of her entries about my writing and this story:
02/02/2008 ~ I just finished reading KC’s story. It is very good. I thought I was reading a known author with experience. The story made me cry, but maybe I can talk him into changing it for a happier ending, I’ll try.
Copyright © 2012 K.C.; All Rights Reserved.
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On 06/06/2012 12:56 AM, Gulab Jamun said:
I hope you have decided on giving us a happy ending!! Hmmm... A twist in the tale, I probably should hate it, but cant get myself to hate it (or youtongue.png).....OK I accept I actually am excited about it!
Awwww Thanks for not hating me, Gulab! :D Yes it is a twist but there is so much more to come. I'm already starting to polish chapter 11 and get ready for Monday!
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On 06/06/2012 02:50 AM, Mark92 said:
Absolutely brilliant KC :hug: I couldnt fault any of it. It flows perfectly, one minute so pissed at Amanda I wanted to put her in a straight jacket. And the next smiling at Tanners ghost. The end or should I say your chapter notes. Were just the icing on the cake to an amazing chapter. Very very well done KC :hug:
I'm so glad you liked it...and you cheeky boy waiting until Sunday so you only had a day to wait :lmao: That's cute! Thank you so much for all your encouragment, Marky, It means a lot!! :hug:
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On 06/06/2012 06:21 AM, Rebelghost85 said:
I can't believe he's dead. Poor Tanner. I have many inventive tortures in mind for Amanda and Ethan. Ethan is a terrible person for letting his best friend die and Amanda just lost any redeeming qualities. I'm heartened that Tanner will continue to be a part of the story but I'm sad that they won't be able to continue their relationship.

 

Maybe Tanner should just haunt Ethan and Amanda forever. They'd deserve it.

You got any good torture techniques you want to share? I might find a way to work them in :P

 

All I can say is just wait to see where this is going. There is still a lot more to come! Thanks for reading.

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On 06/06/2012 07:21 AM, Houdinii said:
Whoa, I can't say I seen that coming, but I am a little confused. If he is dead and has been since the accident, why did John have to go to the hospital so quickly? Still a brilliant chapter and a helluva cliff hanger. I'm definitely hooked now so look forward to me begging you for quicker chapters, lol.
Hey Mister! How are you feeling? You scared us last week so huge hugs for you! :hug:

 

Well, I worked in a small county hospital for a time and murder/homicide was rare and would call most of the doctors in to lend a hand. They don't always have the fancy CSI so the local docs and the police have to piece everything back together. Bodied decay fast and evidence can be lost...hope that explains the rush ;)

 

Monday! I promise! Thanks for reading, Brian! :D

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On 06/06/2012 08:42 AM, Lisa said:
Holy shit, what just happened? I had a feeling Gibby was hallucinating when he saw Tanner in the car, but this ending just totally threw me for a loop.

 

I can't believe Ethan is such a spineless fucking coward. He left his best friend for dead and didn't even call 911 or anything! What he did was totally unforgivable.

 

Please don't say Tanner is dead. Tell me they found him in time and Gibby's dad is working on him and trying to save him.

 

Shit, now I gotta wait a whole week??????? Shit.

OMG, I had just taken a drink when this popped up! :lmao: I just about choked...If I die nobody finds out what happens :P I think everyone has decided that Amanda and Ethen need to burn in the deepest depths of hell. I have a thing or two planned for them...no take a deep breath...Monday is still 6 days away...I don't want you to passout on me! :D I'm glad you are really getting into this story. Thanks Lisa. :D
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On 06/06/2012 12:48 PM, rustle said:
It's really cool, KC, but why do I feel like I've read it before? whistle.gif
Alright Mr. Rustle, no spoilers allowed :P I'm glad you like it. Thanks for all your help. I couldn't do it without you! :hug:
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You are an evil, callous and cruel author, KC. My worst fears in the last chapter review have come true! Killing off a loved character is an act of premeditated malevolence and downright wickedness. And what a horrible death, in such pain and all alone sad.png Utter evil devilsmiley.gif Or is this the lead in to a new hybrid Zombie-Ghost Tanner?? Shuffling and moaning horribly in the night while the evil-bitch-cow cowers in her bedroom, fearing the darkness closing around her. I can just picture the scene, the bitch-cow screaming for mercy as she's spooked and haunted, then finally captured and pinned by the decomposing Tanner, staring helplessly into his pitiless eyes, dead eyes, as he munches on her twitching braaiiin, eying up the next juicy bite-sized chunk ... evil.gifevil.gif

 

P.S.Thanks for adding your Mom's journal entry KC. Guess she didn't manage to talk you round.

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Well, well, well!!! Let's see how you write yourself out of this one. You have (gleefully, it seems) stirred up quite a hornets' nest with the demise of Tanner. You know the old saying "You can run, but you can't hide."? I'd hate to have all these angry readers on my tail! (Especially Kim. You don't want to get her riled.)cap.gif

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On 06/07/2012 12:34 AM, Zombie said:
You are an evil, callous and cruel author, KC. My worst fears in the last chapter review have come true! Killing off a loved character is an act of premeditated malevolence and downright wickedness. And what a horrible death, in such pain and all alone sad.png Utter evil devilsmiley.gif Or is this the lead in to a new hybrid Zombie-Ghost Tanner?? Shuffling and moaning horribly in the night while the evil-bitch-cow cowers in her bedroom, fearing the darkness closing around her. I can just picture the scene, the bitch-cow screaming for mercy as she's spooked and haunted, then finally captured and pinned by the decomposing Tanner, staring helplessly into his pitiless eyes, dead eyes, as he munches on her twitching braaiiin, eying up the next juicy bite-sized chunk ... evil.gifevil.gif

 

P.S.Thanks for adding your Mom's journal entry KC. Guess she didn't manage to talk you round.

:lol: Omg Zombie, your review had me laughing so hard!! If I use a zombie attack on Amanda, I will deffntly give you credit for the idea! :P

 

Shepherd's Crook is one story that stuck with my Mom, she would oftne ask how I was doing with the screenplay competitions (It placed in a few but didn't win :( ) that's ok, I'm still proud of it. Thanks for reading!

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On 06/07/2012 12:52 AM, charlieocho said:
Well, well, well!!! Let's see how you write yourself out of this one. You have (gleefully, it seems) stirred up quite a hornets' nest with the demise of Tanner. You know the old saying "You can run, but you can't hide."? I'd hate to have all these angry readers on my tail! (Especially Kim. You don't want to get her riled.)cap.gif
Ooooh believe me, Kim has been vocal about her displeasure over killing Tanner :P

 

**poke...poke...POKE***

 

 

aaarggghh! Forgot I was allergic to bees (jk) well we'll see if I can stay one step infront of the angry mob :P Thanks for reading, Charlie!

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Can't wait to see what happens next. I usually read the completed stories but I'm so glad I started reading this one! (I actually wrote a story about a guy who falls for a ghost a while ago, must translate it in english and post it here :) ) Really love this one!

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On 06/08/2012 07:56 AM, Rocarules said:
Can't wait to see what happens next. I usually read the completed stories but I'm so glad I started reading this one! (I actually wrote a story about a guy who falls for a ghost a while ago, must translate it in english and post it here :) ) Really love this one!
Thanks Rocarules, I really like supernatural stories and dabble in them from now and then. I hope you'r not dissappointed with the wait since I'm only about half way through. I hate waiting for stories to be complete... then I bug the crap out of the authors while I wait! :P

 

Thanks for reading!

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OMG!!! Tanner is deadd!! NOOOOOOOO... I want to see Tanner & Gibby

together... sob..sob..

I wish Amanda rot in hell!!!

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On 06/10/2012 02:37 AM, unlikelyu said:
OMG!!! Tanner is deadd!! NOOOOOOOO... I want to see Tanner & Gibby

together... sob..sob..

I wish Amanda rot in hell!!!

In fiction dead doesn't mean gone. Tanner will still be a big part of this story and there is still a lot more to come!! :D more on Monday!
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I saw Tanner and Gibby sitting in a tree, not Tanner sitting on a cloud.

I'm not taking back what I said about this being a favorite story of mine, but,

nudge, nudge

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KC, thank you for adding your mom's journal entry. I know that she was very proud of you. This story shows how talented you are. Now back to Gibby and Tanner!

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On 07/17/2012 05:31 PM, Swhouston44 said:
I saw Tanner and Gibby sitting in a tree, not Tanner sitting on a cloud.

I'm not taking back what I said about this being a favorite story of mine, but,

nudge, nudge

Awww so sorry. I know the wrath I was facing killing Tanner but he is dead. BUT he's not gone, he's still major part of this story! Thanks for reading :)
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On 07/18/2012 03:21 PM, intune said:
Did you really just kill Tanner off... rolleyes.gif Oh, boy.
Yell 'yes' and scramble back under the bed to hide :P
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On 07/18/2012 10:11 PM, Shadow Runner said:
KC, thank you for adding your mom's journal entry. I know that she was very proud of you. This story shows how talented you are. Now back to Gibby and Tanner!
Thank you! :D
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On 08/28/2012 05:39 AM, pfox25 said:
i'm so sorry to hear about your mum. Thanks for sharing...

really like this story so far...

Thank you, Pfox. This has been a really difficult year losing my mom, but she really liked this story. It make me feel good thinking that she knows that people are reading my stories...but she will alway be my biggest fan :P It's bittersweet. Thanks for reading and letting me know that you're enjoying the journey :D
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Ok I was really mad at you at first when I read this but then I calmed down and tried to rememer that this is a story and not real life even if it feels really really real. Your writing is so life-like that I can almost see them. I kept waiting for Tanner to jump up and say he's ok but that doesn't look like the case :(

Thanks for sharing your mom's view of your story. I know it must be hard still.

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On 09/01/2012 05:54 AM, Racer said:
Ok I was really mad at you at first when I read this but then I calmed down and tried to rememer that this is a story and not real life even if it feels really really real. Your writing is so life-like that I can almost see them. I kept waiting for Tanner to jump up and say he's ok but that doesn't look like the case :(

Thanks for sharing your mom's view of your story. I know it must be hard still.

Well you didn't email me any death threats soooooo...

 

I am sorry that Tanner had to die but it is a pivotal part of the story.

 

Thanks, Goblin, I know that she is proud of me and she was my biggest supporter to get published and keep writing! :)

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