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Diamond In The Rough - 1. Chapter 1

When we were kids, about 7 or 8 years old, there was nothing that we wouldn't do together. Me and David went together like salt and pepper. My name is Steven, and I was a mess back then. It just seems like I had the biggest head ever! And I was missing my two front teeth and I was just an ugly little pigmy! And David was no better. He was a chubby kid with a shaved, spiked head and he always had cookie crumbs around his mouth. He was shorter than me and was always wearing clothes that just looked like they were five sizes too big. But we grew up together and were like brothers. We did everything from riding bikes, to building sand castles, to playing G.I. Joe, to sneaking peeks at my dad's porno stash together. We saw the rise and fall of Atari, and had discovered the wonderful splendor of Nintendo before any of our friends on the block. We even got into fights together at school (and later got suspended together). But no matter what happened we were the best of friends until we turned 12 years old, that's when David had to move out of state for his mom's job. They were going to California and would be gone for three years (Which is 25 in kid years!). And just when things were getting interesting!

We had just discovered the joys of jacking off, or "Boxing the clown" as he called it! Ha! That saying always made me laugh! But we would play a game to see who could come first. We would look at a magazine and when we were well stimulated, we would sit on the floor, me on one side of the bed, and him on the other. We had our backs to one another so we couldn't see what the other was doing. Then we'd start masturbating. I remember that we'd occasionally call out to the other boy "Are you there yet?" and he'd reply "Almost man!" It was fun. It wasn't until the last day before he moved away that an image of David popped into my mind in mid stroke! I don't know where it came from, but I didn't want to let it go! It stayed with me and I pictured myself sucking his dick while he moaned and groaned my name. He started to huff and puff on the other side of the bed and so did I. I felt it coming and for the first time in my young life...I squirted! It was only a small, clear splotch here and there, but it felt even better than my dry orgasms!

"David! David! Come here! Check this out! I did it! I shot that sperm stuff!"

"Me too! I shot too! Just a little bit, but it's mine!"

It was like some kind of divine experience, the both of us shooting for the first at the same time! That was our last night together, and after an emotional goodbye he took off. His chubby body waddled down the side walk and out of my life for the next 3 years! I would miss him something awful...he was my blood brother.

Three years past, and as hard as it is to believe, I had survived without my 'shoot buddy' around the corner. We talked through e-mail, but it wasn't the same. It wasn't like the days when we'd go to that abandoned building and made it our clubhouse, or when we would dig worms out of Mrs. Johnson's garden (Later putting those same worms in her laundry basket!). But one day I got the awesome news that he was going to be in town for a whole week! Woohoo!!! I nearly hit the ceiling and anticipated a lot of sleepless nights until I saw him again!

I wondered if he would even recognize me? I finally had a healthy set of teeth, my body caught up to my head, and I dyed my hair a deep shade of crimson red. I had an earring in my left ear, and I had a thin and lean 5' 7" frame. I was about 115 pounds and my cock had grown to 5 1/2 inches with a good amount of pubic hair at the base. My hazel eyes and facial features had evened out, molding me into what many of my teachers say is a "handsome young lad". I couldn't wait for my long time best bud to see me! He'd be so surprised at how much I changed! And to think he'd be there in just a few hours.

My dad and I went to pick them up at the airport, but the plane had arrived early. So we had to go through the airport and search them out. My dad and I went our separate ways and agreed to meet at the luggage check in fifteen minutes. Just enough time to check out the newsstand. Besides, I wasn't going to find them anyway! I was standing in the magazine/gift shop, where EVERYTHING costs 25 dollars! It had only been two or three minutes when I saw this beautiful boy walk past me! Then another! Then another! They must have been out of towners, but damn they looked good. They made it kind of hard to concentrate. Then came another boy by himself who just blew them out of the water! He was fucking gorgeous!!! I dropped the magazine by mistake and scrambled to pick up the pieces. The boy had medium length blond hair and thin red lips. He was a slim boy that looked about my age and he was wearing the coolest pair of shades over his eyes. His legs were long and firm and stopped abruptly at the bottom of his wonderfully cupped ass! I know that I should be looking for my best friend in this crazy airport, but I could NOT take my eyes off of him! He thrilled me so much that I had to talk to him! I HAD to! I didn't think David would mind me having another friend over while he was in town. After all, I had only been thinking about boys for three years now, it's not like I was going to be a full time homo or anything! Just as I was getting ready to talk to the beautiful young vision, I saw a rather large teenager in the store buying a pack of cookies and walking with a familiar waddle.

"David! What's up man?!?!" I said. The guy looked at me and he was obviously NOT David! He was like fifty with a full beard! "My fault man. I thought you were somebody else."

"Steven?" Came a voice from behind me. I turned around and saw that cute teeny bopper looking over at me.

"Do...do I know you?" I asked, wondering how this kid knew my name. Just my luck, I was probably hitting on my cousin or something.

"Shoot buddy!" He shouted, giving me a big hug! I was totally confused, but having this beautiful young teenager hugging me was awesome! His smooth chest was pressed against mine and our nipples touched, sending a slight shiver through us both. He let go of me and after looking into his eyes closer, I realized that THIS was David! He was sleek and trim, his shaved head had grown into a shiny crop of golden locks fit for a king. His clothes fit his lithe body perfectly and his face had been molded into the face of a genuine heartthrob! I lost my breath and started to feel really self conscious of my looks! I mean...this wasn't just a handsome lad...this was an Adonis!

"So, how have you been? What's going on?" He said after we spent a few minutes giggling at each other nervously. It's funny how you can talk to somebody your whole life and somehow you run out of things to say when you see them face to face.

"...oh...nothing really. My dad's waiting." I said, worried that I was going to have a hard time talking with him for the entire time he was in town. We walked down to the baggage claim area and met up with my dad, who expressed the same amount of astonishment at his new look. All the way home, he kept calling us his little heartbreakers. David was set to sleep in my room and he took a little time to unpack some stuff. We stayed quiet for most of the night, never seeming to find the right moment to strike up a conversation. Then it came to bed time.

I finally asked, "So, what happened? You're so...thin."

"Yeah, it's life in California. You know, if you're not a super model you're not a person. Everybody's beautiful out there! Girls and guys! It's like living in the land of the porno stars!" He said removing his shirt. He had a teenaged six pack and his nipples were a deep strawberry color. He had little tufts of hair under his arms and his pants hung low on his seductive hips, allowing me to see some of the flesh below the belt line.

"Speaking of porno stars..." I said. "Guess what I've got?" I went into my drawer and pulled out a three year old porno magazine...our magazine. I had prepared to show it to David ahead of time, just for kicks. But for this attractive guy I was hoping for at least a glimpse of his goods. He laughed at the magazine and flipped through it. We reminisced about some of the pictures, saying "Oh man, I remember this one!" and "That one was my favorite."

Suddenly, David looked over at me with a wicked grin and said, "You know...I bet I could beat you now!"

"No way! Get outta here! Besides, you lost the last one!"

"What are you talking about? We came at the same time! Remember?" David said. I was still looking at his topless form as it moved elegantly across my bedroom.

"Actually...I told you I shot first, and then you said, 'me too.' meaning that you came in second."

"Just because said it first, doesn't mean you came first. But if there's any doubts, we can go at it right now! Assume the positions!"

With David's battle cry still echoing off my bedroom walls, we sat at either side of my bed and pulled our pants down to our ankles. We started jacking off right away, but I was already hard and close to orgasm from having David in my presence! I imagined what he looked like right at that moment...pumping his hands up and down that beautiful piece of circumcised meat. I could hear his balls slapping on his thighs and it made me wonder what it would feel like if those balls were bouncing up and down on my soft lips and tongue. I didn't think of anything else but him! I started to feel a tensing in my stomach and I was getting close. I heard a sexy moan come from the other side of the bed and the slapping sped up. The race was on! We were both reaching climax fast and we were rocking the bed back and forth by leaning up against it. I pictured his adorable face, his cock head turning a bright shade of red, his testicles jostling about as he stroked his meat faster and faster...it would only be a matter of seconds now...

KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK!

My dad was knocking at the door and telling us that it was 'lights out'! Thank the stars he didn't open that door! That would have been the worst possible shock of his life, and mine! We both yanked our pants up at the speed of light! We jumped in the bed and after the surprise wore off a little, we laughed about the whole mishap! It was the first time since he'd walked back into my life that everything was just like the good ol' days! We turned out the lights, and as the moonlight crept through my bedroom window, I looked at his face. Even in this dim light, his beauty captivated me. He didn't even resemble the old David that used to come over and devour my mom's snacks! I used to love him for what was on the inside. A certain lovable quality that made me choose him to tell my secrets to. Something that I felt but could never describe. But now...this young man had grown into something that was perfect in every way on the outside, while still retaining that inner quality that made him beautiful on the inside. He was the most complete boy I've ever known.

"Well...what are you staring at?" David said. I couldn't see that well in the dark, and I didn't even know his eyes wee open! I had been staring at him for the last five minutes and he had been staring right back at me!

I fumbled for words for a few minutes before just giving up and saying, "Go to sleep ya bastard!"

We were in the dark on our backs, an for some reason a small conversation started up. We used a lot of the time to catch up on what had happened to us over the last couple of years. Then we started remembering our times together as kids. Every time I had a funny memory or moment in our lives to bring up, he would try to top it with another one. We battled it out for a while and suddenly the room got quiet. I almost thought that he was ready to go to sleep, but he started again and before you knew it, we were talking about jacking off again.

"You know..." He said. "...That last day, before I left...that was really cool. I mean we shot at the same time you know, and it was probably the best one of my life. I haven't had an orgasm to even come close since."

I started to get an automatic erection to hear him say that. I pictured him doing his best to beat our most intimate moment by jacking off hard and fast in his bed. I imagined him almost hurting himself with his rapid hand movements and a thin layer of sweat glistening off of his majestic body. Did he use one hand? Did he use the other to rub his nipples, or his balls? Did he think about me? But even with all of these thoughts going through my head, all I could say was, "Yeah...me either."

I suddenly got very nervous, and anxious, and scared. My breathing wouldn't stay normal no matter how hard I tried to control it. The bed got deathly silent and we rolled over onto our stomachs to get some sleep. I kind of figured it was all over after that, but suddenly I felt the bed move slightly as David moved a bit closer. He stopped and just sat there for a few minutes. I figured that I might try this out...just to see what would happen. I inched closer slightly, trying not to make the mattress too much. My heart was beating so fast that it literally hurt! We were almost touching, so I stopped and waited to see if he moved again. He laid perfectly still for another minute or so before moving a bit closer...his knee rubbing ever so lightly on my upper thigh. I inhaled a quick burst of air, but tried to keep it quiet. He lifted his leg higher up my thigh and it gently lifted my balls a quarter inch before letting it sag again. This was no mistake! He was awake! He was doing this on purpose! Then, things got riskier!

I moved over another inch or so, sleepily letting my arm drop in between us. My hand fell right by his chest, and I used the back of my hand to rub his slick chest and hardened nipples. His breath blew into my nostrils as he sighed with pleasure, the scent giving me the courage to move closer still. We never said a word, but I knew that I wanted to taste him, to take the next step, to finally bond with David in the only way that we never experienced! He reached out a hand and rubbed two of his fingers across my lips. It seemed like we were still pretending to be asleep, neither one trying to move too much without the other one giving him the nod. Finally, with my cock as hard as it could possibly get, I threw my other leg over him, trapping his knee between my thighs. I slid my silky skinned leg up and down his slowly, causing an erotic contact that made us both shiver with excitement. He moved his head closer to mine on the pillow. We couldn't really see each other in the dark, but my mind filled in the complete picture. His lips were so close that his every breath and mine were traded between us without interference. We both moved in, a fraction of a centimeter at a time...until our lips brushed against one another! We laid there, without moving a muscle, still pretending to be asleep, our lips joined together with the sweetest touch. Then after what seemed like an eternity, we began to move and pucker our lips to an passionate rhythm. The kiss was so beautiful, so incredibly beautiful, that I forgot to breathe! I lost myself in his arms as his tongue entered my mouth. I sucked and swallowed his spit as we french kissed endlessly. Our arms became more animated, our legs intertwined like pretzels, and our cocks ramming into each other with wild abandon! We still hadn't said a word...we didn't have to!

We tried to push our crotches into one another as hard as we could from the side, but soon the sexual frustration was too much and I needed more! I pulled him up on top of me and his weight helped to increase the pressure on my stiff cock! He ground into me hard and I grabbed his ass, massaging the rippling cheeks and prying them open and closed. I took his underwear down and he helped me with mine. Finally, we embraced each other, skin to warm skin. His body heat covered me as he mounted me again, this time with his hand on my hard member! He gave it a squeeze and I jumped! He sat up and pulled me up with him.

"This time...we'll find out for sure who's cumming first!" He whispered seductively. He took one of my legs and put it on top of his, then he put his other leg on top of my other leg. We sat there together, with our legs wrapped around each other, and then he grabbed my cock again. This time, I did the same and we kissed again.

"I think I should tell you something..." I had to confess, after all, a secret between friends is no good right? "That last night you were here, and I came...I was thinking of you."

"So was I! This is getting spooky dude!" He started humming the Twilight Zone theme song and we laughed, but the giggles stopped abruptly when he gave my cock another squeeze. A hazy look came over both of our faces as we returned to our sex play. I wasn't going to let him cheat though! He had a few squeezes beforehand, I had to catch up.

"Ready?" I asked.

"Ready. You?"

"Let's do it." I said. We began very slowly, rubbing each other's genitals up and down, trying to make the other one come first. I sped up right away and he did the same. We both twitched and squirmed, but with our legs locked the way they were, we couldn't go anywhere! Our hot crotches were so close together that our testicles bounced off of each other, our soft, spongy sacks jiggling excitedly! That motion caused an extra bonus in our pleasure and we started to quietly moan in unison! His hand felt so good on my dick and yet I was getting just as much pleasure from holding his! That's when I felt it coming! Shit! No way I was going to lose! I did my best to 'plug up the dam' mentally...but I wouldn't be able to hold out longer! I leaned forward and kissed David hard on the lips! His tongue savagely whipped around mine and we both tried desperately to make the other boy lose it before losing it himself!!! I kissed him harder and squeezed my fist tightly around his slick pole! He was evidently as close as I was, and he was trying hard to get me to blow first! He was going at the speed of light and he used his free hand to hold the back of my head as our lip lock hit unbelievable levels of teenage lust! He tasted so good, felt so good, the thoughts in my mind alone was enough to drive me crazy! But I had to force those awesome visions out of my head before I lost. I used my free hand to grab his balls and used my fingers to tickle and stroke his tender scrotum! He whimpered loudly and I felt his legs tense up! He was getting ready to cum! I thought that I had him beat, but the very thought of him getting ready to spray me with his hot spunk drove me over the edge too! We were licking each other's tonsils at this point and we both tried to hold out! We were tensing every muscle in our bodies to hold back the inevitable gush as we felt it travel up our shafts! It hurt to try to hold back my load, but I was constantly thinking, "If I can just beat him by one second! Just one second!!!" But neither one of us could do it for long! We both erupted at the same time, our hot steamy cum hitting us in the chin and face as we kissed passionately above our sensitive organs!!! Our legs fought for freedom, but we were trapped in that interlocked position! We had no choice but to stay there and hope the awesome pleasure didn't kill us!!! More spurts hit us in the neck and some on our chests...the feel of warm semen on my nipples made me shake with joy! It felt sooooo good! The orgasm was enough to knock us unconscious! But we continued kissing and stroking each other as our hands milked every last drop of cum out of our lover! We had been making out for a good ten minutes before realizing that we had already lost it!

Even though the room was pitch black, I could see David clearly. My mind, my heart, my soul...filled out every detail, and he knew it. "So...who do you think won?" I asked, still out of breath.

"Um...I didn't see anything. Did you?" David said while he was gliding his soft fingers over the insides of my thighs.

"Nope." And as I felt him grow hard in my hand again, not to mention another erection that I was getting, I said, "How about best 2 out of 3?"

We had many more 'contests' that night with no declared winner. But by the fourth game...we just weren't keeping score anymore.

All Stories and Original Content Copyright © 1998-2008 by Comicality.
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I am quite surprised there are no comments on this story... oh well, guess I am the first. :P

 

*giggles* I made the same mistake when I thought I see another friend in public and ended up not being that friend... I thought everyone was unique and DIFFERENT! Why are there obvious similarities sometime? Not that my complaining is that of displeasure... otherwise, there would be a shortage of cute boys... *giggles*

 

As always, love your content, Comsie!! 

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LOL! Thanks again! I wrote this so long ago, I think I have to read it again myself! Hehehe, but every word is always appreciated. Thank you! ((Hugz))

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Nice little story that brought a smile to my face. It's a shame we don't get to read how the friendship moved on after that experience.

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