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Standing In Shadows - 38. Epilogue

SIS Epilogue

Our fun was short lived. After Mom went to work Dad ran into Amber’s Mom at the bank. Being a progressive parent, she let it slip that Amber was up at a cabin staying with some friends. Dad easily linked her to Jenny and Katy. So when Dad’s voice growled on the other side of the door my eyes shot open and I heard Clinton groan when I pulled away from him to sit up in bed. I knew the sound of his pounding fist all too well by now.

“Clinton,” I whispered, shaking him. “Hide!”

“Don’t bother Corey I know he’s in there with you,” Dad said and I heard the doorknob turn, but the door stayed shut. He was hesitating, scared to see what was on the other side of the door.

“I’m sorry,” I said blushing, “we’re mostly decent.”

“Says you,” Clinton said and I looked down and saw his morning wood straining against his boxer briefs.

“Get your asses covered,” Dad barked and knowing we only had a few moments until he barged in anyway I stood and looked around for my shorts. Then I swore remembering they were still down in the dining room where we played strip poker. Thinking about Dad quietly inspecting the cabin and finding the vodka bottles and our clothes scattered around made me grimace as I unzipped my bag. I nearly squeaked when I saw the condoms and shoved the box deeper inside before grabbing a pair of shorts and a t-shirt. When I looked up and saw Clinton lay back down I shook my head.

“What the fuck are you doing?” I whispered glancing over my shoulder to the door.

“I’m dead anyway might as well do it happily,” he answered and I laughed. Hearing me laugh Dad threw the door open and stormed inside.

“Clinton, get you some clothes on,” Dad ordered, turning to me.

“Dad,” I said, “I’m sorry.”

“The hell you’re sorry,” Dad hissed, “couldn’t break just one of our rules you had to check them off one by one.”

“Did you expect anything different out of Andy?” I asked hoping Andy would forgive me for throwing him under the bus.

“Andy!” Dad bellowed, “you should see this place.”

“It can’t be that bad, we all went to bed after…” I started then coughed reaching up and scratching the back of my head. “After a game.”

“Of strip poker,” Dad hissed. “Imagine my surprise when I step through the front door, a door you dumbasses left completely unlocked to find Andy bare assed on the couch.”

“I remember putting his shorts back on him,” I countered shying away from the look on his face.

“Well obviously they didn’t stay that way,” he said every word sounding like it came from the depths of his throat.

“Riley Corey Wells get your butt down here now!” Mom yelled from the bottom of the stairs and I gulped looking at Dad.

“Yes sir, I went by and got her too,” Dad said, crossing his arms. “I knew she’d want to see this.”

“Damn,” I hissed and Clinton did get out of bed and shyly dressed while Dad turned and looked out into the hallway.

When we both were dressed he led us out of the bedroom. As we started down the stairs I saw Mom standing at the bottom, the name tag still on her shirt. Her arms were crossed and when she saw me I offered her a small smile and when her lips turned white I looked away, knowing she was about to explode. It was rare for her to do so, but hopefully she would save it for the car ride home. Looking away though, I saw Amber and everyone lined up around the back of the couch all staring up at me. Andy was wearing my shorts from last night and looked like he wanted to disappear. Keith was standing beside him trying to keep from laughing. Amber and Bryan looked completely trashed and hung over. Katy looked scared to death and Cameron was holding her, not taking his eyes off Dad. Jenny inched towards me, but then looked at Mom and stopped, her face flushed. The living room and kitchen was completely messed up and I glanced behind me to Clinton who was also taking in the state of the cabin.

“I got my second wind,” Andy said elbowing Keith when he snickered, “so Amber, Keith, Jenny, and Bryan stayed up all night with me.”

“Not another word, until everything is cleaned up and spotless,” Mom ordered and despite the embarrassment of having my parents barging in on me I bit back a smile. I couldn’t help thinking that after we all got out of trouble, probably when school started back. We could look back on this night and laugh. Though when I would look back and remember, what I will hold on to is how I told a guy I loved him and he said it too.

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The close of a really great story thanks so much. I can honestly say I never found myself in such a position. Damn, I missed so much being the good kid. But I'm afraid if it were me, we wouldn't have made it back down for the card games OR the brownies. lol And dad would have found some wrappers on the nightstand and two grinning boys. DAMN! Did I mention I missed a lot being the good kid?

Well done and thanks so much for this truly gifted piece.

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On 09/12/2014 08:13 PM, ricky said:
The close of a really great story thanks so much. I can honestly say I never found myself in such a position. Damn, I missed so much being the good kid. But I'm afraid if it were me, we wouldn't have made it back down for the card games OR the brownies. lol And dad would have found some wrappers on the nightstand and two grinning boys. DAMN! Did I mention I missed a lot being the good kid?

Well done and thanks so much for this truly gifted piece.

Lol. Thank you for reading and sticking with the story. :) And reviewing, always good to read reviews. I'm glad you liked the ending. I hope it was a fun read at the very least. :)
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Excellent writing, thank you so much. The characters are so good, there is still so much more I want to know. I hope you find a second wind (like Andy) and let us know how senior year turns out!

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A great story Krista, with wonderful characters! I am sad to see it end so soon, just when it looked like things were going to head into a great senior year. Please let there be a sequel! :)

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:rolleyes: ............Guess I should have read the epilogue first before responding to the last chapter, but that isn't my style, I prefer to comment on each chapter,even if I'm proven wrong. Crappy end though (for them). They only stayed one night!! B) You could of stretched that to at least 2 days, LOL! Oh well, a long saga with a good ending anyway! Thanks for the ride (wink!)

Benji

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What a terrific story, Krista! I enjoyed it from the first chapter to the epilogue.

 

I'm really sad to see it end; I loved reading about Corey and his world. I'm glad he found love and in my HEA mind, they breeze through senior year, go to the same college, get married, etc., etc. But then again, they are each other's first loves; they really need to sow their wild oats before they settle down. lol

 

Awesome job, Krista! I look forward to reading more from you. :)

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On 09/13/2014 01:24 PM, Lisa said:
What a terrific story, Krista! I enjoyed it from the first chapter to the epilogue.

 

I'm really sad to see it end; I loved reading about Corey and his world. I'm glad he found love and in my HEA mind, they breeze through senior year, go to the same college, get married, etc., etc. But then again, they are each other's first loves; they really need to sow their wild oats before they settle down. lol

 

Awesome job, Krista! I look forward to reading more from you. :)

Thanks for liking the story. :) I enjoyed writing the characters, later on especially. After introducing Amber, Keith, and Andy into the mix more frequently - I think, really added to my over all enjoyment of the story. I would like to think that Corey has enough support to get him through the inevitable bumps his Senior year will have. I believe he does.
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On 09/13/2014 12:34 PM, Benji said:
:rolleyes: ............Guess I should have read the epilogue first before responding to the last chapter, but that isn't my style, I prefer to comment on each chapter,even if I'm proven wrong. Crappy end though (for them). They only stayed one night!! B) You could of stretched that to at least 2 days, LOL! Oh well, a long saga with a good ending anyway! Thanks for the ride (wink!)

Benji

Lol.. well. I think Corey's Dad would have checked in on them anyway. He didn't want to agree to the plan to begin with, but ended up doing so. Rule No. 1 of sneaking around on parents.. is that you cover your asses.. Andy, Corey, and Keith did, until Andy invited the girls. Girls are trouble. T-r-o-u-b-l-e. So of course they got caught. They'll learn.

 

Thank you for putting up with me, Benji! You were there five years ago on Day 1.. and suffered since. I appreciate you a ton for doing so. I'm glad you liked it and saw the ending finally. :D

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On 09/13/2014 02:39 AM, ColumbusGuy said:
A great story Krista, with wonderful characters! I am sad to see it end so soon, just when it looked like things were going to head into a great senior year. Please let there be a sequel! :)
Thanks for liking the story and reading! Yeah, I could have went on and on.. I had a lot of ideas swirling around my head that I would have liked covered.. but I decided to make the story a bit more linear and focus on Corey/Clinton a bit more towards the end. I don't make promises though. New rule of mine.
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On 09/12/2014 11:42 PM, Stuff15 said:
Excellent writing, thank you so much. The characters are so good, there is still so much more I want to know. I hope you find a second wind (like Andy) and let us know how senior year turns out!
Thanks for reading! Lol.. Andy did have quite the second wind it seems.. but I don't know if I have it in me. I do have other things already in motion, but I'm not promising one way or the other.
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I don´t know what happened with the previous review, I wasn´t ready with it when it suddenly posted on its own :o

 

Loved this story, its been full of sweetness, sadness, love, hate, basically everything that a great story needs. :boy:

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On 09/13/2014 06:35 PM, Suvitar said:
I don´t know what happened with the previous review, I wasn´t ready with it when it suddenly posted on its own :o

 

Loved this story, its been full of sweetness, sadness, love, hate, basically everything that a great story needs. :boy:

Aww thanks. lol. I was wondering why it seemed cut off. I'm glad you liked the story overall. :)
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Awesome story Krista! I kept waiting and hoping you'd continue it and when the new chapters started popping up it got increasingly hard to stay away and wait for it to be finished. Needless to say it was well worth the wait!

 

Loved the secondary characters, such a great group of guys/girls to prop Corey and Clint up. *sniffle* Really hope theres a sequel! Maybe about Greg and Cj's journey out of the closet?:P

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Hi, Krista. Just want to say it was truly an honor to follow you, Corey and the gang in this adventure. Life is like that: we win sometimes, we loose sometimes, but in the end what we learn about ourselves is what really matters. Amazing story and I hope you could take the time to write a sequel (or maybe two, who knows).

Take care of you and your wonderful gift.

Bignick

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On 09/20/2014 12:40 PM, bignick said:
Hi, Krista. Just want to say it was truly an honor to follow you, Corey and the gang in this adventure. Life is like that: we win sometimes, we loose sometimes, but in the end what we learn about ourselves is what really matters. Amazing story and I hope you could take the time to write a sequel (or maybe two, who knows).

Take care of you and your wonderful gift.

Bignick

Thanks for reading and your kind words. :D I enjoyed these characters a lot. I'm glad you liked the story.
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On 09/20/2014 06:13 AM, Sympathia said:
Awesome story Krista! I kept waiting and hoping you'd continue it and when the new chapters started popping up it got increasingly hard to stay away and wait for it to be finished. Needless to say it was well worth the wait!

 

Loved the secondary characters, such a great group of guys/girls to prop Corey and Clint up. *sniffle* Really hope theres a sequel! Maybe about Greg and Cj's journey out of the closet?:P

Thanks for reading it. :D Yeah, famous for procrastinating. :P Glad you gave it a chance and enjoyed the character. I actually had a story-line for Greg planned, but zapped it and decided to just 'end' the story instead of getting too involved in a lot of side stories. No Cj/Greg love though, I'm afraid.. lol.
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On 09/27/2014 09:05 PM, Stephen ODonohue said:
Ta Krista... thoroughly enjoyable, almost made me miss growing up in the country town I lived in as a kid... ALMOST.

 

Stephen

That's what makes it fiction, yes? :P You're supposed to lose yourself in a world for awhile.. I'm glad you read the story and liked it. Thank you.
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On 11/02/2014 01:23 PM, rckclimber27 said:
Loved your story. And it makes me think your just as nice as Jenny! But don't tell anyone.
Lol. Oh please, Jenny is a cupcake compared to me. :D
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Love it. I have been reading it the past two years. It is so cute. Following ever chapter, waiting the new chapter came out made me angry sometime just because you did such a great job. Thank you.

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On 12/19/2014 04:19 AM, Kenguyen said:
Love it. I have been reading it the past two years. It is so cute. Following ever chapter, waiting the new chapter came out made me angry sometime just because you did such a great job. Thank you.
Thanks a lot for reading. :D I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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On 12/28/2015 11:06 AM, RomanRomaan said:

Thanks for writing Kriata. Awesome story. :)

Thank you for reading and enjoying the story! :D

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