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Tidal Power - 3. Blood Bath

“My initial bite definitely woke the bastard up. His breaking free of the silver ropes was a shock but it was nothing compared to his shift…

…he turned into a fucking merman! An honest to goodness merman, MERDE!”

 

“Hello?”

“Vasili, it’s Mahi, I have some bad news.”

“Huh?”

“Come on. Vasili, wake up. This is serious.”

“Hang on, give me a minute. For crying out loud, Mahi, you know what time it is?”

“Yes, I do. It’s almost five in the morning and you need to get your ass up. We have a problem.”

“Okay, okay, I’m up. It’s almost time for my morning swim anyway. What’s going on?”

“The body of one of the guys you sent over washed up on the beach just minutes ago. He was shot several times, but he also had two puncture wounds on the neck.”

“Oh fuck. Where is he now?

“We moved him into one of the coolers at the fish-house. Two of my guys cleaned him up and wrapped him in canvas until you tell us what to do.”

“Okay, good. Give me half an hour and I’ll call you back. I’ll head over with a few of our guys once we can get organized.”

 

“Hey, men. Prota will join us in a minute. He had to take a phone call. What do you have for us, Sesi?”

“Not a lot yet, Vasili. I’m so sorry about your man―we’ll get the fuckers involved in this. Our guys who cleaned him and discovered the two puncture wounds on the side of his neck, noticed a smaller hole on his back. With a tiny needle in it. Someone used a tranquilizer dart to knock him out before he was transported aboard the yacht. In spite of the obvious bite by a vampire, the kid’s blood wasn’t drained. Combined with the gunshot wounds, I’m pretty sure he began to shift when first bitten.”

“Fuck! That means the blood suckers are most likely aware of our existence now. Néo, any images from the drone? Any new communications from the yacht?”

“No images, boss. Our man must have been brought on board while the drone was back at our place getting fresh batteries. Our chief enforcer, Genni, has already arranged for us to have two more drones by this afternoon so we’ll not have lapses in coverage again. We monitored one call from this guy Tepes to someone in New Orleans. He ordered additional muscle, and sent the plane down to pick them up after sunset tonight. The wolves are handling that angle of the operation.”

“Mahi?”

“I’ll let Mel handle this since he made the arrangements. You’re up kid.”

“Okay, Néo was able to track the location called in New Orleans. It’s a large building in the French Quarter of the city. We think it’s one of their safe houses. I contacted my counterpart in the Bayou Pack, and requested assistance. I explained the situation, without mentioning you guys can shift into mermen or dolphins, and he agreed to help.

“Their safe house is under surveillance. If the wolves smell any vampires, they have orders to kill them. Wolves are also on the way to Louis Armstrong Airport to await the arrival of the Vermillion jet, establish surveillance, and prevent anyone from boarding after sunset.”

“Sorry about the phone call guys, but I’m glad I took it.”

“What’s up Próta?

“That was the owner of Acoustic Solutions. His daughter was approached by two guys as she left a movie theatre last night. She was told to inform her father he should decide what he valued most, his company or his family.”

“Shit! I guess they’re ready to make a move now.”

“I think so, Mahi. But I have an idea on how to deal with these assholes. Can we take a break so I can discuss this with Sesi?”

 

“Beta Próta and Beta Sesi reporting for duty, sirs!”

“Get over yourselves, assholes. But thanks for trying to lighten the mood, what did the two of you come up with?”

“Próta and I made some calls and put some wheels in motion. Since our two companies are the main participants in the joint venture we arranged for a conference call with the owners of our four partners to make them aware of a potential danger to all of us. We talked about the threats and then let them know the consortium was arranging for security details for them and their immediate families.

“We asked our Deltas to coordinate the arrangements and insisted a couple of wolves be included in the evening teams. In case vampires appear we know wolves can kill them but we have no knowledge of what mermen could do to them. Próta, wanna take part two?

“Sure, Sesi. We asked the owner of Acoustic to call the solicitor in Québec and let him know he was ready to accept their offer but wanted to have the deal finalized over the weekend. He let the lawyer know their offer of one hundred million Euros was acceptable and to make sure the funds were ready for transfer first thing Monday morning. The little shit sounded so happy I thought he would crawl through the phone and kiss our guy. He promised to contact his client and arrange for a transfer of funds to his trust account and asked for an hour to finalize a proposed contract which he would then email. We’re waiting for it any minute now.”

“Néo, I’m sure your little wiretap has revealed some information, correct?”

“Right you are, Vasili. The solicitor placed a call to the yacht and then an email was sent from the boat to a bank in Marseilles. The transcript of the call and the text of the message are being emailed to you as we speak. I think we need another break until we have the proposed contract and a response from Marseilles.”

 

“So, he called and agreed to sell, at last good news. Maybe I won’t have to return to Marseilles with nothing to show for my efforts. I’m glad the conversation our friends had with his daughter helped him realize our offer was a most generous one. Have you sent him the proposed contract?”

“Yes, Prince Tepes. I expect a call from him sometime later today. I may have to fly to Halifax sometime this weekend if we’re to have a closing on Monday morning.”

“The company jet will be at your disposal when it returns from New Orleans. Our friends arriving on it have their orders and know where to go―you need not concern yourself with their actions, they’re here as insurance.”

“Yes, sir... About the money?”

“I’ve just authorized the transfer of one hundred million Euros to your trust account. What have you found out about that abomination we encountered last night?”

“Nothing so far, your highness. I contacted individuals in the top twenty population centers in North America. Not one of them has ever heard of mermen shifters. Maybe it was a mutant wolf?”

“You’ve been watching too many Marvel movies but maybe you’re right. I hope so for all our sakes.”

 

“Yes! We’ve got the motherfuckers! Mahi, by the end of tonight your pack, and our pod, should have a lot of money in a Cayman Islands bank account and two new toys to play with.”

“Damn, Sesi, I’ve never seen you this excited or smiling so broadly. Let’s hear it. You have our undivided attention.”

“Thanks, Vasili. Most of the credit goes to your guys. Próta came up with the idea and Néo is playing a big part in operation Blood Bath.”

“Oh no, you didn’t! Please tell me you didn’t just say our plan has a corny name as if this was some sort of graphic novel adventure.”

“Sorry, Mahi, but Néo came up with the name. We all thought it was funny enough to use. Anyway, the money from Vermillion is now sitting in the solicitor’s trust account and when we give the word Néo will make it disappear. The funds will jump all over the place until an account in the Cayman Islands receives a large transfer.”

“How far are we straying from the law, Néo?”

“Ask me no questions and I’ll tell you no lies, boss. When the solicitor disappears and leaves behind a note on his computer about how tired he was of working for blood sucking French capitalists, and how he decided to take an early retirement and move out of Canada… well, you get the picture. Someone associated with Vermillion back in France will try to find him but they’ll have no luck. Mel, wanna take over?”

“Sure thing. Néo forgot to tell you guys the Vermillion corporate jet received instructions to return to Québec since there would be no passenger pickup in New Orleans. Upon landing they’ll be met by wolves. The pilots will be sent home, and two of our flyboys will bring the plane to Halifax. All necessary paperwork will be electronically filed to show the transfer of the jet to Shiftmates Corporation. It’s a new entity jointly owned by both our companies. Another group of wolves will meet our solicitor friend as he leaves his office tonight. I won’t bother with details but the world will be better off with one less lawyer on it. Genni, your turn.”

“My report is brief since I have to run out of here soon. Once the wolves have handled both those matters, Néo will take care of the money, the solicitor’s note, the ownership transfer for the jet, and the ownership transfer to the same company of one luxury yacht currently anchored in the Bay of Fundy. Before sunset, a group of my guys will shift into dolphins, swim to the boat, then shift into mermen, and board our new vessel. We’ll catch the vampires while they’re unable to function, dispose of them, and of any of their human accomplices.”

“You guys are shitting us. We end up with lots of money, a corporate jet, and a luxury yacht?”

“You got it, boss. Once we’re done, we’ll will get you and Mahi on a Zodiac and out to the Atlantis. Oh yeah, we took the liberty of naming our new canoe.”

 

“Are we ready, men?”

“Yes we are, Vasili. You and Mahi just kick back, relax, and get ready to light up the victory cigars when Operation Blood Bath is over. Próta, Néo, and I will take care of everything. We decided having everyone around the table in the sound proof conference room was best. We turned the place into mission control.

“Vasili, I think our boys have been smoking the funny seaweed again. Operation Blood Bath? Mission Control? What the fuck? When do we get started, Néo?”

“First step is the solicitor, Mahi. But our teams should start checking in any

“Mission control, this is building security. We’re waiting for the package to arrive.”

“That’s Mel, guys. He’s in charge of snatching the lawyer. Our surveillance has his routine down pat and we almost know when he farts after lunch.”

“Mission control here. We copy building security.”

“This is airport security, mission control. We’re in position. Toy delivery expected momentarily.”

“The guys taking control of the plane will wait until we give them the signal to step in. They’ll take care of the pilots, and then head to Halifax after refueling.”

“Mission control this is beach patrol, we’re ready for our swim.”

“Genni’ss leading the boarding party himself, we think he

“Excuse me, Monsieur?”

“Oui?”

“We have a message for you from Vermillion.”

“Who the hell are you? How do you know that name? I’m calling security.”

“Oh, I don’t think so, Monsieur…”

“Ooops, mission control this is building security. We sort of damaged the package so we’re going to place it in the trunk of our car and take it with us.”

“Was that growling I heard?”

“Yes it was, Vasili, one of the boys must have gotten excited, shifted, and ripped a throat out. Néo, that’s a go for you.”

“On it, Sesi. Just give me a minute and… Okay money has started the trip to the Cayman Islands. Time to upload a note explaining the disappearance of a slime-ball, and to file ownership transfer papers on a small private jet. Money is ours, guys. Let’s get us a plane. Airport Security, you have a green light.”

“Got it. Two pilots and a ground operations director coming right up.”

“Gentlemen, if we could have a minute.”

“Sorry guys, this is private property you’re not allowed in the building.”

“I think we are since your boss was kind enough to give us the plane as an early Christmas present.”

“What the fuck are you talking about? I’m calling

“Damn, I can’t believe all three tripped and broke their necks when they fell! Mission Control, we’re loading up the garbage and taxiing to our hangar. Give us an hour to refuel and change the numbers on the plane and we’ll be on our way to Halifax.”

“Roger that airport security. You have the necessary documents in case you need them. I’ve already filed a flight plan on your behalf. Be safe, flyboys. Now comes the dangerous part. Beach patrol this is mission control, you’re cleared for a swim in the bay.”

“Acknowledge that mission control Keep an eye on the TV. We’ll report as soon as possible.

Vaaaaampiiiiires… come out and plaaaaay…”

“Bathroom break everyone, we have a little time before they’re ready to board. We have all three drones in place so we can follow the action.”

“Here we go men Watch the screen. Damn, that’s a hell of a lot of dolphins surrounding the yacht. How many did you send out?”

“Only a dozen, Mahi. Those are mostly wild ones. Genni must have invited them to swim.”

“Great cover, Vasili. Wow! Nice breach!”

“Take a look at the infrared camera, guys. You can see our men shifting again right underneath the keel. There they go. They’re boarding now. Infrared reveals two individuals inside. No idea how many vampires since they don’t give off heat.

“Now it could get dicey, boss. If those two goons pull out guns our guys… Oh shit, one of our guys is down. He’s probably shot… There go the assholes trying to back out of the cabin. They’re headed right toward our guys waiting outside. Yeah! Men overboard it seems. Those two must have decided to go for a swim in order to cool down. I wonder if they’re alive or not. Sesi wanted at least one of them alive so we could interrogate him.”

“Right now I’d be happy knowing all the vampires are gone, Néo. Someone to use enhanced interrogation techniques on would just be a bonus. What was that? Quick! Move the drone! Track that column of smoke rising through the cabin’s roof.”

“Shit, can’t do it guys; it’s moving too fast.”

“Mission control this is the crew of the Atlantis. We have zero casualties, one flesh wound, and two drenched rats. One blood sucker seems to have evaporated. How about we send the tender out and you guys can come and check out our new toy?”

A somewhat different take on were-creatures that I hope you enjoyed.
I haven't read anything like this before so hopefully I didn't copy another author's concept.
A short epilogue will post in 24 hours.
Thank you for sticking around.
Copyright © 2015 Carlos Hazday; All Rights Reserved.
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Fuck, Vlad Terpes got away. Now he'll be an even more determined enemy. Or did he die when he came into the sunlight?

I've never heard of mermen to dolphin shifters, so that was a nice idea.

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On 01/21/2015 05:16 PM, Timothy M. said:
Fuck, Vlad Terpes got away. Now he'll be an even more determined enemy. Or did he die when he came into the sunlight?

I've never heard of mermen to dolphin shifters, so that was a nice idea.

The time difference is good for you, you get to be the first reader and the first reviewer :)

 

LL, 69 and Rex all guessed bits and pieces of what Vasili's 'pod' was capable of. I've een telling you I wanted to try something different with were creatures and I guess I did that.

 

My love of the ocean, dolphins and Aquaman (I'm with you 69) was what created the spark. Couldn't resist throwing in the lore of Atlantis for good measure.

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Bahahaha. Mermen! Yes, I was right! I love the merman/dolphin shifter idea. That's definitely new. Now Mahi and Vasili's people have some awesome toys to play with because the vamps severely underestimated them. It's too bad Vlad escaped. Of course with him escaping that sets up a sequel with Vladimir involved (unless you take care of him in the epilogue). I know Vlad can teleport. I wonder how far he can do that? Great story Carlos. Looking forward to the epilogue. My only comment/criticism would be that it's sometimes a little difficult to figure out who is speaking at first if more than 2 people are in the room. Otherwise, I really enjoyed the fast pace of the plot.

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On 01/21/2015 11:07 PM, LitLover said:
Bahahaha. Mermen! Yes, I was right! I love the merman/dolphin shifter idea. That's definitely new. Now Mahi and Vasili's people have some awesome toys to play with because the vamps severely underestimated them. It's too bad Vlad escaped. Of course with him escaping that sets up a sequel with Vladimir involved (unless you take care of him in the epilogue). I know Vlad can teleport. I wonder how far he can do that? Great story Carlos. Looking forward to the epilogue. My only comment/criticism would be that it's sometimes a little difficult to figure out who is speaking at first if more than 2 people are in the room. Otherwise, I really enjoyed the fast pace of the plot.
I was laughing so hard when you guessed mermen that I feared wetting myself. That was good, at list I surprised you with the double shift ability.

 

When I thought about trying my hand at were creatures I wanted something different and dolphins+mermen+Poseidon+Atlantis came to me one by one and I thought they would work well together.

 

My apologies for the dialogue issue. It is something that keeps popping up about my writing and I'm working on it. I don't like using dialogue tags and prefer to identify the speaker otherwise. Often I don't make it easy to figure out and that requires the reader to pay close attention. Sooner or later I'll find a happy medium.

 

Vlad turned into smoke and disappeared I'm certain he'll be back to cause trouble sometime, somewhere. Who knows, maybe the wolves and the dolphins will team up again against him at some point!

 

I'm real glad you stuck around and hope it was worth it!

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Double shifting? Men to Mermen to Dolphins? And it's controllable? BRILLIANT!

Not at all convinced that Vlad fully escaped. Wouldn't surprise me that he's only able to teleport to a nearby ship (not all the way home) and is discovered/eliminated by the spy drones/watershifters. You're sneaky like that.

Fun story..and a great job!

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On 01/22/2015 02:27 AM, Robert Rex said:
Double shifting? Men to Mermen to Dolphins? And it's controllable? BRILLIANT!

Not at all convinced that Vlad fully escaped. Wouldn't surprise me that he's only able to teleport to a nearby ship (not all the way home) and is discovered/eliminated by the spy drones/watershifters. You're sneaky like that.

Fun story..and a great job!

Me sneaky? Next thing you know you'll be accusing me of using cliffhangers! :P

 

I wanted to try my hand at some of these creatures but didn't want to do the same old, same old. Since the Dolphins were wolves at one point and Poseidon's intervention was what saved them from the disappearance of Atlantis, they still have a common history with the European werewolves. The American ones however evolved separately and their origins are based on Native American lore. That means there are differences between Mahi's pack and any pack with origins in the old world.

There's a lot there to explore and maybe one day I'll dip my toes into that pool.

 

As for Vlad here's what happened :X

 

Thanks for reading bud

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I think this all worked really well. The concept is unique enough to make the reader want more. Prince Tepis escaping was necessary I think, if you plan to go forward with this new world. I agree with Lit that it is sometimes harder than it needs to be to figure out who is talking. Yet it still works with concentration. There are a number of characters and actions to keep track of in a short period of time, but the plot still managed to be tight so kudos for that. The whole thing flowed way better with my second read...I would like to delve into this world some more, especially the interaction between the characters, side of things. I think with a little tweaking and making it more of a personal story or vignette, this could develop into something pretty special...Cheers...Gary

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On 01/22/2015 11:16 PM, Bucket1 said:
More need more... Hopping off to the next chapter
More you want, more you get.... but just a small dose. Too much may not be good for you!
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On 01/22/2015 08:37 AM, Headstall said:
I think this all worked really well. The concept is unique enough to make the reader want more. Prince Tepis escaping was necessary I think, if you plan to go forward with this new world. I agree with Lit that it is sometimes harder than it needs to be to figure out who is talking. Yet it still works with concentration. There are a number of characters and actions to keep track of in a short period of time, but the plot still managed to be tight so kudos for that. The whole thing flowed way better with my second read...I would like to delve into this world some more, especially the interaction between the characters, side of things. I think with a little tweaking and making it more of a personal story or vignette, this could develop into something pretty special...Cheers...Gary
Thanks Gary.....

 

The large cast and short length restricted the character development but then again it could be seen as an introduction with more to follow.

 

Love ya, big guy!

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So the evil bloodsucker has escaped. Mermen and wolves are unlikely comrades in arms, but that makes this story unique. Hopefully the amount of money and big ticket toys they have taken will be enough to cripple the prince's operations for awhile. This was a fastpaced and very enjoyable short story. On to the epilogue next.

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