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timmy's poetry - 22. Coming Out

For a special person, @hoaluu thank you for reading my poetry and for sharing a bit of yourself. A small token from me.

coming out

 

 

You hide within a thick skin of sadness

Depression walks by your side

In the midst of becoming

You wait in the dark

Staring at the sky for light

 

Don’t be afraid that time will come

Your fear will lessen each day

That sadness you’ll slough

Until you are free

And your soul a resplendent sun

 

 

hope you liked it... xo
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So encouraging and  so full of surety that life will be better. :)  :) 

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5 minutes ago, Reader1810 said:

So encouraging and  so full of surety that life will be better. :)  :) 

thanks Reader xoxoxox

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21 minutes ago, Parker Owens said:

This poem speaks deeply to me. It radiates both consolation and hope. The contrast between light and dark is very effective. Beautiful.

thanks Parker .. hugs  xxoo

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21 minutes ago, mollyhousemouse said:

tim, you really are good at that....:hug:

and one for you hoaluu :hug:

thanks very much molly oxxoxoxox

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Another excellent poem, Tim. I think it captures the essence of coming out that a lot feel.

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I'm trying not to cry... Thank you so much, it's the first time I have a poem written for me :lol:  Your words are so beautiful, I don't know how to describe the feeling they give me... 

 

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Thank you, Tim. A ray of hope promised to whoever is in very dark place right now. Beautiful resurrection of life.

And the cat in the window opposite mine is still wallowing in the sun enjoying its warmth as if nothing else matters... 

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5 hours ago, hoaluu said:

I'm trying not to cry... Thank you so much, it's the first time I have a poem written for me :lol:  Your words are so beautiful, I don't know how to describe the feeling they give me... 

 

i'm glad you like it and it touches you. your PM to me did as well. i wanted to say something in a way i hope you'd understand and i hope will happen for you. you deserve to shine and be happy

 

tim xxx

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On 5/30/2017 at 9:40 PM, BHopper2 said:

Another excellent poem, Tim. I think it captures the essence of coming out that a lot feel.

Thanks .. yeah i suppose it does.. thanks for reading  xo

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On 5/30/2017 at 11:54 PM, hohochan657 said:

And your soul a resplendent sun ... 

so beautiful

something all of us have, I'm sure of it ...

I think your right, hoho. Thank you for reading! :heart:

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On 5/31/2017 at 3:02 AM, mayday said:

Thank you, Tim. A ray of hope promised to whoever is in very dark place right now. Beautiful resurrection of life.

And the cat in the window opposite mine is still wallowing in the sun enjoying its warmth as if nothing else matters... 

Animals are lucky .. they live in the moment so nothing else does matter.. thanks for sharing that.. xxx

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On 5/31/2017 at 7:12 AM, dughlas said:

You've touched an inner spark for those most in need of reassurance.

I wish it really could ... xxoo   Thanks dugh

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