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timmy's poetry - 36. Burden

would that i could take it from you.. you know i would

Burden

 

 

I would take your pain and sorrow from you

Give you rest and ease your troubled mind

I would calm your turbulent soul, so it rides easy

For I can feel your pain

Feel the sadness

Touch your heartache

I would embrace your agony

For I can take it all, if it frees you, eases you

I will bear these afflictions, and then let them fly

Open myself to the heavens, let them carry these burdens

Then give you peace and quiet, a place to lay your head

 

 

 

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for Tommy and others who are troubled...
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Beautiful, just, beautiful. A wonderfully giving and compassionate heart is clearly seen in these words, 

:) 

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I would have to agree with reader...you heart is seen in your words! The tenderness as well as the compassion in them...another great writing from you!

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Such a beautiful sentiment, simply reading the words helps to ease some of the burden. Often it only takes the slightest compassion to help you know you're not alone.

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1 hour ago, MacGreg said:

Would that you could... I know you would. Thank you. 

my love and thoughts are with you.. i know the burden too well... xo

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my back is strong. i would gladly shoulder your burden. even if only for one night, to give you peace.

again, tim, beautifully said and felt

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Beautiful. I know the person for whom this is for is relieved to have you in his life; I feel the same way. 

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You are a true and wonderful friend. Your poem shows the depth of your heart, and the wealth of your kindness and capacity for love. 

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11 hours ago, dughlas said:

Namaste little brother :heart:

thank you dugh.. hope you are well. and mom xoxo

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10 hours ago, Reader1810 said:

Beautiful, just, beautiful. A wonderfully giving and compassionate heart is clearly seen in these words, 

:) 

thank you Reader, some people's pain and suffering has touched me deeply .. and an old friend's too  thank you for your kind words and support xoxo

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10 hours ago, Kitt said:

I've no idea who Tommy is, but he has a wonderful friend in you. :heart:

Tommy .. very special guy .. i'll tell you more.. in a piece titled, Who Is Tommy?   coming soon xoxo  Thanks Kitt xxo

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10 hours ago, Aviana said:

I would have to agree with reader...you heart is seen in your words! The tenderness as well as the compassion in them...another great writing from you!

Thank you Aviana .. appreciate your support xoxo

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8 hours ago, phoenix_0826 said:

Such a beautiful sentiment, simply reading the words helps to ease some of the burden. Often it only takes the slightest compassion to help you know you're not alone.

Thank you my friend... i hope some people find the comfort they need .. thank you xo

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7 hours ago, Lyssa said:

If you listen closely there is good in the world. Your poem is proof. Love Sis

Thank you Lyssa.. .love you too, sweet Sister

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6 hours ago, AC Benus said:

Beautiful. I know the person for whom this is for is relieved to have you in his life; I feel the same way. 

Thank you AC. I hope he was ... thanks for reading xoxxo

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6 hours ago, BlindAmbition said:

A beautiful and loving sentiment. XOXO

jp, my sweet dear friend... thank you for reading this. I appreciate you friendship and support xo

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6 hours ago, Renee Stevens said:

You once again show your beautiful heart. :hug:

Awww thank you, Renee.. your friendship and support have been solid and constant and much appreciated. xoxxo

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4 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

You are a true and wonderful friend. Your poem shows the depth of your heart, and the wealth of your kindness and capacity for love. 

Thank you, Parker. Hate when my friends are hurting.. and there's not much more i can offer them then my words and love.  xoxo 

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2 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

jp, my sweet dear friend... thank you for reading this. I appreciate you friendship and support xo

I love you lil brother! XOXO

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1 hour ago, BlindAmbition said:

I love you lil brother! XOXO

I love you too big bro xoxxo

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