BB's Poetry - 1. Have you ever...?

 

Have you ever

wanted to touch a fire flame?

Or been with tons of people

but your the only one to blame?

 

Looked in broken glass

and seen who your really are?

Wanted to turn around

but you've went too far?

 

Seen an old friend

getting put in the ground?

Searched for a reason

when there's not one to be found?

 

Thought you was okay

but your scars are still there?

Screamed that this game

is anything but fair?

 

Lost something you thought

you couldn't live without?

Known that they were lying

there wasn't even a doubt?

 

Wished upon a star

no matter what they say?

Looked left and right

but couldn't find your way?

 

Have you ever

wanted to hide the truth with lies?

Or felt the sting of betrayal

that you couldn't deny?

 

 

 

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I suck at reviewing but here I go anyways :P I don't normally like reading poetry that rhymes, but I like your poems, theres something about them that just speaks some truth to me about covering up depression/self harming. Everyone reads poetry differently and that is just what I read from it.

 

I hope to read more from you, Bee :)

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On 08/03/2012 06:33 PM, Bumblebee said:
I suck at reviewing but here I go anyways :P I don't normally like reading poetry that rhymes, but I like your poems, theres something about them that just speaks some truth to me about covering up depression/self harming. Everyone reads poetry differently and that is just what I read from it.

 

I hope to read more from you, Bee :)

You're not too bad a reveiwing :P lol i'm glad you got somthing from them. As i grew up, i always thought that a poem had to rhyme. I know that it doesn't have to but it doesn't seem good enough to me if i don't make them rhyme.I will be writing more soon. Hope you stick around :)

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