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    Aditus
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An Advent Calendar - 14. Door#14 - Star of Bethlehem

Star of Bethlehem

Silent sentinel

Navigator of eons

Harbinger of Hope

 

 

 

The beacon's light calls king and shepherd home,

proclaims with joy the living word has come!

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Copyright © 2016 aditus, Cole Matthews, Valkyrie; All Rights Reserved.
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Lisa

I love how you describe what the Star of Bethlehem stands for.

 

It was beautifully written, Addy. :) (At least I think Addy wrote it! :P)

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Puppilull

I'm not a very religious person, but I find the idea of a beacon of hope shining for the world quite comforting. To me, that beacon is more about being a decent human being, treating others with respect and trying to understand, failing that show acceptance and tolerance. We can all be beacons of hope to each other.

 

I think Val wrote this.

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Emi GS

Stars have been always my favourite ones. I just found pleasant feeling pass through me as I read this. Small, simple yet powerful. Is it just because of the stars I like or the sacredness behind it...

 

Coming to the guesses, I am not sure but it sounds more Cole to me...

 

~Emi.

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Aditus
On 12/14/2016 04:57 PM, Lisa said:

I love how you describe what the Star of Bethlehem stands for.

 

It was beautifully written, Addy. :) (At least I think Addy wrote it! :P)

Valkyrie: I fooled you! :rofl: I’m glad you liked it. Thanks so much for the nice review. :)

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Aditus
On 12/14/2016 10:34 PM, Puppilull said:

I'm not a very religious person, but I find the idea of a beacon of hope shining for the world quite comforting. To me, that beacon is more about being a decent human being, treating others with respect and trying to understand, failing that show acceptance and tolerance. We can all be beacons of hope to each other.

 

I think Val wrote this.

Valkyrie: Your review absolutely nailed the point of the poem. We should all strive to be beacons of hope. Thanks for such a great review. :hug:

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Aditus
On 12/15/2016 01:56 AM, Parker Owens said:

And the light shining in the darkness calls to us again. Many thanks!

Valkyrie: Thanks for the review. I appreciate your support. :hug:

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Aditus
On 12/16/2016 09:38 AM, Slytherin said:

Penguin - did you write this wonderful poem ? Beautifully written :yes: Thank you :)

Valkyrie: Yup :D Thanks so much :hug:

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