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An Old Debt

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Genres: General Fiction
Sub-genres: Drama

What would you do if you had the means to pay everyone back for all the bad things they did to you?

Short story I wrote when the idea came to me.
Copyright © 2010 Andrew Q Gordon; All Rights Reserved.

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  • Characters 1
  • Chills 0
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  • Compelling 1
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IanDaniels

· Edited by IanDaniels

  

Nice little short story! But, ooh, this could easily be continued with a love story with Bryan. Perhaps he spends more time with his bother and ends up spending time with Bryan, who is closeted. I noticed you did mention Bryan having a spouse. 😉

Response from the author:

I didn't mention a spouse, did I?  :P

As with so much in my writing life, I have things I would love to return to and amend, but I've got a pile of half start books waiting to be finished.  

Thanks for reading!

~ Andrew

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