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The Chosen

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Genres: Fantasy, Action/Adventure, Romance
Sub-genres: Adventure, General Fantasy, General Romance

Damon's grandfather had always told him the Abercrombie powers could only be passed on by blood. He was wrong. For the past nine years, Damon and Kai have watched over and trained their adopted sons Benji and Alex to use the powers they mysteriously inherited. Now, as the boys have turned sixteen, they learn about the mysterious 'Prophecy of the Chosen' and they learn they are not the only family to be blessed with powers.

'The Chosen' is a sequel to my story 'Empath's Kiss'.
Italics quatations denotes telepathic communication.
Copyright © 2014 Andrew Todd; All Rights Reserved.

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  • 1. Chapter 1
    • 4,509 Words
    • 4,820 Views
    • 6 Comments
  • 2. Chapter 2
    • 6,765 Words
    • 3,673 Views
    • 6 Comments
  • 3. Chapter 3
    • 5,131 Words
    • 3,581 Views
    • 5 Comments
  • 4. Chapter 4
    • 4,972 Words
    • 3,169 Views
    • 3 Comments
  • 5. Chapter 5
    • 6,643 Words
    • 4,556 Views
    • 13 Comments
  • 6. Chapter 6
    • 6,549 Words
    • 5,108 Views
    • 8 Comments
  • 7. Chapter 7
    • 5,458 Words
    • 4,199 Views
    • 7 Comments
  • 8. Chapter 8
    • 6,626 Words
    • 4,345 Views
    • 12 Comments
  • 9. Chapter 9
    • 6,331 Words
    • 3,374 Views
    • 6 Comments
  • 10. Chapter 10
    • 5,353 Words
    • 3,725 Views
    • 3 Comments
  • 11. Chapter 11
    • 8,031 Words
    • 4,175 Views
    • 5 Comments
  • 12. Chapter 12
    • 6,241 Words
    • 5,419 Views
    • 9 Comments

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kagenokami

Great start!! Can't wait to see how this develops.

Of course this brings the question:

As a gay telepath / maybe-empath, is Benji a good "horse whisperer" too?? :lmao:

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mickey1952

I wondered how you were going to top the "Riding Lessons" series. This may or may not top it but it certainly looks like it has the potential to match it. With good doses of mystery and intrigue thrown in as well. Excellent story so far, Andrew. Can't wait for the next chapters to see who will round out the rest of the five "Chosens"!

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Jeff1

Hi Andrew, A great chapter. I have to admit the last couple of chapter's were hard going and I had to read them a couple of times due to the new characters and paving the way for them in to the story, in fact I had to re-read in case I had missed a chapter out.

But this chapter was worth the wait and now they seem to fit in the story better with the mix of all the guys instead of one or two helps and is only a matter of time before they all meet each other.

Looking forward to the next episode of The Chosen, Thanks.

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Andrew Todd
On 07/20/2014 03:41 AM, Jeff1 said:
Hi Andrew, A great chapter. I have to admit the last couple of chapter's were hard going and I had to read them a couple of times due to the new characters and paving the way for them in to the story, in fact I had to re-read in case I had missed a chapter out.

But this chapter was worth the wait and now they seem to fit in the story better with the mix of all the guys instead of one or two helps and is only a matter of time before they all meet each other.

Looking forward to the next episode of The Chosen, Thanks.

Thanks. One of my goals with Chapter 11, besides moving the time forward, was to give each of the boys a bit of spotlight.
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shade456

Hey I hope u resume writing on this story I have really loved it so far it's a shame that u have stopped

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Ricki

Loved the story. This is actually my second time reading it, it was so good. 

I know it's been 6 yrs since the last chapter, I was hoping that there MIGHT be a continuation of the storyline. Any chance of that? I'm sure all of your readers would be interested in reading it also.

Thank you for your writings. 

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