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Euphoria and Other Poems - 8. Chapter 8

Distractions


To understand the sufferings of lovers
Intimate details of ecstasy
Written on the lotus petals
That blossomed in the first light
The dew of innocence glistening along its margin
Bring the distraught closer
Salve the burn of jealous guarding of secrets
Unhex the music in our hearts
That cursed the union of two tones
Mingling in the river of distractions


10/09/2017

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There are so many wonderful images here. Details of ecstasy written on lotus petals....unhex the music of our hearts...union of two tones mingling in the river of distractions. Each is inspiring, interesting, engaging. But you bring them together beautifully. 

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I love the wording you used in this one. Every word you use is intentional and adds a layer of complexity and depth to your poetry, which is why I enjoy reading them!

 

Very good, asamvav :).

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Words on the margins; notating musical notes; guarding of secrets -- vs. -- suffering; bringing closer; unhexing; and finally, mingling. 

 

This is changeling poem of sights and actions. I hope the jealousy abated and the dawn opened the blooms to joy. 

 

Thanks for posting this. 

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