Puzzle Pieces... My Poems and Thoughts! - 6. True Religion

His charisma is demanding 
Leaves me speechless and weak 
The calloused hands set my trigger 
Calculating  finesse 
Lips incredible and in control 
Taking me to new heights 
Brings me the one true religion 
A disciple for life

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There are two words I have for this: Hot and Intense.  I'm fanning myself from the heat rolling off the sceen.  Loved this, JP! 

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Someone was feeling a little fervent this morning, I see...

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44 minutes ago, LitLover said:

There are two words I have for this: Hot and Intense.  I'm fanning myself from the heat rolling off the sceen.  Loved this, JP! 

Thanks Lit! The fire is burning today! 🤗

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32 minutes ago, MacGreg said:

Someone was feeling a little fervent this morning, I see...

Oh Sir... Lustful emotion running on high. I'm doing a lot of writing with plenty of ideas.

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Well then, I'd say the inspiration hit just right!! You brought the heat. Love it! 

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5 minutes ago, Defiance19 said:

Well then, I'd say the inspiration hit just right!! You brought the heat. Love it! 

Thanks Sweet Pea! XOXOXO

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Phew, i think it got a bit hot in here. I'm glad i was at home when i read this ;) could have led to a few awkward questions at work Lol. 

 

Great as always jp :hug: 

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50 minutes ago, Caz Pedroso said:

Phew, i think it got a bit hot in here. I'm glad i was at home when i read this ;) could have led to a few awkward questions at work Lol. 

 

Great as always jp :hug: 

Thanks sweetie! Can't have you gettin HOT at work! 😘

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Your words bring full fire to your spirit; this poem is nearly pentecostal. Love the intensity in this. 

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10 minutes ago, Parker Owens said:

Your words bring full fire to your spirit; this poem is nearly pentecostal. Love the intensity in this. 

Thanks Parker! I think we're both full of fire at the moment!

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This is a striking poem. There's a tough-yet-tender aspect captured so expertly in one image: "calloused hands".

 

Brilliant. Thanks for sharing with us. 

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On 6/19/2017 at 7:22 PM, Parker Owens said:

... nearly pentecostal ....  

Wow, Parker - that's a fantastic comment.... 

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