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I Will Find You

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Genres: Mystery
Sub-genres: Light Mystery

I am part of a team that helps to find people.

 

I hope you like my telling of a particularly difficult case we handled. 

 

Be warned, some scenes may not be to everyone's taste. 

Copyright © 2017 Caz Pedroso; All Rights Reserved.

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  • Characters 0
  • Chills 0
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 0
  • Feel-Good 0
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 0
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BrianM

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

Wow!  What a ride this was.  Heads up: VERY graphic scenes of violence done to the young, female victims of kidnapping by a sadistic scumbag.  I loved the spooky, psychic way that our cyber-sleuth found his way into the lives of both victims and perpetrator in order to garner information to pass on to the rescue and apprehension teams.

 

Caz writes great action scenes which really rivet the attention and her character development is excellent.  I really felt like I developed a rapport with the main character, and, of course, it is irrelevant that that character and I share a first name. :P 

 

As with all good stories, we are left with both a feeling of closure and the wish for more.  This short story could readily be expanded into a novel-sized narrative (hint, hint).  I realise that I am probably atypical in this, but I  could have done with less detail in the two sex scenes indulged in by the principal character and his husband.  They were perfectly positioned within the story arc and  provided the relief of a different sort of tension, but were just too long for me.  Sometimes less is more.

 

Overall a very well written and enjoyable story which could be classified as spanning the mystery, fantasy and horror genres effortlessly.  Exceedingly well done, Caz! :thankyou::hug::heart:

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