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Dribbles - 24. First Contact

This 300 word story took third place in the Queer Sci Fi group on Facebook's first Annual Flash Fiction contest. The story had to include an LGBT character and fit within the theme 'Endings'.

The wall burst open. I trembled, retreating to my corner.

“Hey.”

I huddled into a ball. Men! Where did they come from? Earth was so far away.

“We found another, Zeke.” One crouched down, creeping closer. Another man came in, and I cringed. They were too close. “What’s his file say?”

The new one looked at the square device my captors always carried. “Species deprivation for asexual reprogramming.”

“Sadistic bastards. How long?”

“Seven years, Captain.” The men cursed and stared. I wanted them to stop looking at me like that. “He’s barely eighteen. He was just a kid—still is.”

“You speak? Can you understand me?” Captain was so close I could smell him. Spicy, with a whiff of the scent I got after waking up screaming. It’d been so long. The aliens smelled different, bitter and cold, and they never came into my room.

No touching.

“I won’t hurt you. Understand?”

I shook my head, sure the green ones were testing me again.

“Sure you do. We’ll get you out of here.” Captain reached out slowly.

“No,” I whimpered. I’d never be free. They’d told me, over and over. Even if I wanted to—

“Just grab him.”

“After what they’ve done? No. He has to decide, if he has any chance of recovery.”

“Don’t got all day, Captain. Reinforcements are coming.”

“Keep looking. I’ll stay here.” Alone now, Captain smiled at me.

I gasped. They’d wiped out most of my memory, but I remembered smiles. And hugs—before they gave me away. Before I’d been turned into an experiment.

“You’re safe.” Captain’s hand ghosted above my arm, so close. So warm. I gasped. The never-ending need, forced down so deep, overflowed. Unable to stop, I launched forward, huddling into Captain’s gentle arms.

I shivered, my heart racing. “Out. Please.”

Big thank yous to Renee Stevens, M.A. Church, and AJ for reading this and helping me refine the story!!
Copyright © 2017 Cia; All Rights Reserved.
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You have so many great short stories that I would live to read more of. This one and "Mine" in particular. Great story Cia, just way too short. Lol.

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On 12/07/2014 09:19 AM, LitLover said:
You have so many great short stories that I would live to read more of. This one and "Mine" in particular. Great story Cia, just way too short. Lol.
LOL. Thank you, LitLover. You know, I rarely write anything where I don't get told 'I want to read more!'. Sometimes I do come back. Married to the Enemy was a 2k short that I extended to 11-12. Not a novel, but hey, sometimes it happens. Thanks for reading!
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On 12/07/2014 09:47 AM, Gene63 said:
This sounds like the beginning of a fantastic story!!!
Thanks so much, Gene! The contest said 300 words, so I was stuck here, but I did have fun envisioning the story and where it could go. Thanks for the review. :)
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Darn you, Cia! :) Now I have to make up my own story for background and extension. It's bad enough I have to think up my own chapters--now I have to do yours too?

 

Wonderful! 300 words, I don't think I could do that!

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On 12/07/2014 09:44 PM, ColumbusGuy said:
Darn you, Cia! :) Now I have to make up my own story for background and extension. It's bad enough I have to think up my own chapters--now I have to do yours too?

 

Wonderful! 300 words, I don't think I could do that!

I know, right? But there are so many directions the story could go and come from. Who are 'they'? Who are the aliens? Why were they experimenting on him? Who sent his rescuers? How did they find him? What would happen to him after he finally leaves the small room that has been his prison for years? *shakes head* In 300 words, a whole new world to explore was created--but I just don't think I have the time to write it, so it's left up to the reader's imagination. LOL. Thanks so much for the review, ColumbusGuy!
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Oooooohhhhh I would very much like to know what happened/happens to this poor boy in First Contact! Love your stories!

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On 12/14/2014 01:05 PM, Chezakeeba said:
Oooooohhhhh I would very much like to know what happened/happens to this poor boy in First Contact! Love your stories!
A lot of people feel that way, it seems. This may have to be my next flash story with the Wednesday Briefers. Thanks for the review, Chezakeeba, and thanks so much for reading my stories. :)
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Loved this. Lot of empathy evoked in 300 words. I can see this being expanded as well. Tough choices, Cia... cheers... Gary...

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On 05/13/2016 02:16 AM, Headstall said:

Loved this. Lot of empathy evoked in 300 words. I can see this being expanded as well. Tough choices, Cia... cheers... Gary...

This is probably going to be the second story after I finish Mine, lol. :)

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