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What if you hated yourself for being gay? What if you wanted to keep it locked away inside of you forever? Ethan is living the experience of that awful realization and hoping to one day overcome it. But what about a new friend by the name of Drew? If you think it's hard keeping your feelings a secret...imagine what it must be like for someone 'exposed'.

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  • 1. Chapter 1
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  • 2. Chapter 2
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  • 3. Chapter 3
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  • 4. Chapter 4
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  • 5. Chapter 5
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  • 6. Chapter 6
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  • 7. Chapter 7
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  • 8. Chapter 8
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  • 9. Chapter 9
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  • 10. Chapter 10
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  • 11. Chapter 11
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  • 12. Chapter 12
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  • 13. Chapter 13
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  • 14. Chapter 14
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  • 15. Chapter 15
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  • 16. Chapter 16
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  • 17. Chapter 17
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  • 18. Chapter 18
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  • 19. Chapter 19
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  • 20. Chapter 20
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  • 21. Chapter 21
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  • 22. Chapter 22
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  • 23. Chapter 23
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  • 24. Chapter 24
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  • 25. Chapter 25
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  • 26. Chapter 26
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  • 27. Chapter 27
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  • 28. Chapter 28
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  • 29. Chapter 29
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  • 30. Chapter 30
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  • 31. Chapter 31
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I like all of your stories Comicality. They really helped me to "understand" myself a little bit better. I know now for maybe 10 months or so that i'm for sure a little bit different than the other boys in my age (I'm 16 years old). I also made a few rules to myself like try to be straight, never tell somebody or don't look at boys maybe it will disappear. But after maybe a month with these rules I couldn't take this "lie" for me anymore. So i forgot these rules but i didn't came out to anybody because my fear of rejection is to big. But anyway thanks for your great stories and it would be nice when you could have more time to post your story updates a little bit more regularly. [i hope that this text make sense to you because english isn't my first language and well...]

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This is one of my favourite stories by Comicality and one of the stories that directed me to GA. The excessively long gaps between chapters are annoying but the writing is top drawer as always. There is no doubting your genius Comicality, but this story is screaming out for an ending.

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Relatable, but without the kissing! 

I read the first 11 chapters ALL in one sitting today, and the reason couldn't simpler: I can't stop hitting 'next chapter'

This is a very relatable story, told from the perspective of a teenage boy that hates himself for the perceived flaws in his being. Anyone who has ever gone through this experience knows exactly the kind of emotional pain and putrid guilt you constantly force yourself to carry. I say 'relatable, but without the kissing!' as my tagline, because I do not doubt that there are many people in the world who have shared in this experience, but never had the chance to be given their flowers like our protagonist; perhaps not until much later in life, if at all. What Drew and Ethan have (so far...) is what young love is all about, what young love should be about, and no doubt what many of us wish it had been for us.

Comicality breathes real life into his characters, and I can't get enough!

Wonderful story (n_n)

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