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Blue, Brownie, and Wedding White

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Originally this story was written as part of the pick two. After posting, many people asked for it to be expanded, so I have done so.

 

Bradley bought a home a year ago. Since then he has had some great dreams if nothing else. Today his doorbell rang and now his life is changing forever.

When you live a solitary life like Bradley does, you expect everything to stay calm. Today, that all ends.

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RCCROBO

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Excellent writing and you left me with wanting more........

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BHopper2

  

When the original version came out as a forum game, I enjoyed it a lot. This version of the same story fleshes out a lot of what was in the mini-version. I found to be fantastic, and well done in thought, flow, and character interaction.

 

My only complaint is it's very hard to read. Due to how it posted to the website, it's like one long block of text. Despite that, I'm still rating it five stars.

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