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The Seventh Wing

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This is a fan-fiction based on Anne McCaffrey's Dragonriders of Pern series. This is kind of an Alternate Universe, because this takes place shortly before the 4th Pass and there is no canon to base this on -- which is precisely why I chose it!

You may think this story is trash (and you may be right) but I will always love it because this was the first story I wrote explicitly for M/M. I had done some small fan-fics to try it, but this is the one that convinced me. This is the story that led me towards rediscovering my own gender/sexuality and falling in love with the gay stories genre. This story is the beginning.
©1967-2022 Ann McCaffrey, Todd McCaffrey, Gigi McCaffrey; All Rights Reserved; Dark 2008. The World of Pern© is copyright to Anne McCaffrey 1967. The Dragonriders of Pern® is a registered trademark.

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  • Action Packed 1
  • Addictive/Pacing 0
  • Characters 2
  • Chills 0
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 0
  • Feel-Good 1
  • Humor 1
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 0
  • Unique 2
  • World Building 2

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  • P. My Notes
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  • 1. Chapter 1
    • 6,982 Words
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  • 2. Chapter 2
    • 5,221 Words
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  • 3. Chapter 3
    • 2,935 Words
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  • 4. Chapter 4
    • 5,412 Words
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  • 5. Chapter 5
    • 7,008 Words
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  • 6. Chapter 6
    • 6,207 Words
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  • 7. Chapter 7
    • 4,766 Words
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  • 8. Chapter 8
    • 5,571 Words
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  • 9. Chapter 9
    • 4,166 Words
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  • 10. Chapter 10
    • 6,641 Words
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  • 11. Chapter 11
    • 6,071 Words
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  • 12. Chapter 12
    • 8,556 Words
    • 2,542 Views
    • 1 Comments
  • 13. Chapter 13
    • 5,124 Words
    • 7,581 Views
    • 2 Comments

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centexhairysub

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

I am going back and rereading some stories and putting reviews in on those that I have not previously reviewed.

I had forgotten part of this story, so glad that I went back to reread it.  The story was compelling in the fact that I found the two main characters and several of the auxiliary characters very interesting.  Taat said, I do think some additional character development would have helped.  I think we needed a little more background information.  

The story flowed well except for one chapter that I found awkward while reading.  The writing was good and got sharper as the story progressed.  The plotting was a little simple, but the author indicated that this was either his first story or among the first so that is easily understandable.  

I did find some of the physical violence in the story unsettling but it was explained and did serve a purpose in the story that I don't think could have been developed without it.

I do recommend this story; there are a few issues but my interest in any stories that use the Dragonriders of Pern by Anne Mc Caffrey; allowed me to overcome then.

 

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