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GA Writing Prompts - 52. Poetry Prompt # 3 Lyrics

The sun was shining from above
Tender and soft and sweet
Wandering through the fields of love
And under blossomed trees

The touch of your hand on my face
Tender and soft and sweet
My heart, why did we fall from grace?
Tell me, why did you leave?

Dolores Esteban
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AC Benus

...wow...heartbreaking.

I very much like how you repeated one of the line and thereby made it a refrain. Very nicely done!

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Lisa

Wow, beautiful poem, Dolores!

 

The ending was so, so sad. It gave me chills. This is the type of poem I could read over and over again. Great job, Dolores. =)

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Dolores Esteban
On 11/05/2014 02:27 PM, Jaro_423 said:
Love-lorn and love lost. Such a beautiful romantic picture captured.
Thank you, Jaro. I'm glad you liked the poem.
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Dolores Esteban
On 11/05/2014 01:07 PM, Lisa said:
Wow, beautiful poem, Dolores!

 

The ending was so, so sad. It gave me chills. This is the type of poem I could read over and over again. Great job, Dolores. =)

Thank you, Lisa. I'm glad you liked the poem. :)
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Dolores Esteban
On 11/05/2014 09:18 AM, AC Benus said:
...wow...heartbreaking.

I very much like how you repeated one of the line and thereby made it a refrain. Very nicely done!

Thank you, AC Benus. I'm glad you liked the poem.
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